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标题: OG12-105求助，看了解释还是体会不了呢 [打印本页]

作者: bearEileen 时间: 2009-9-25 19:13
标题: OG12-105求助，看了解释还是体会不了呢

105. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on
her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating
them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix
Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinated them with her narratives and
Logical predication; Rhetorical construction
Th is sentence awkwardly presents two phrases
intended to modify Beatrix Potter and loses the
clarity and logic of the meaning. In the original
sentence, these modifi ers sound choppy and
create too much separation between the subject,
Beatrix Potter, and the verb capitalized. Beginning
the sentence with In her book illustrations and
following that phrase with the relative clause
which she carefully coordinated with her narratives
allows the subject, Beatrix Potter, to be united
with the verb, capitalized, for a stronger main
clause.
A Th e participial phrase does not clearly
modify the noun in the preceding phrase;
use of the present progressive form of the
verb confuses the sequence of time with
respect to the past tense of the main verb
capitalized.
B Phrase carefully coordinating … illogically
modifi es the noun that immediately
precedes it: book illustrations; Potter, not the
illustrations, did the coordinating.
C Correct. Th e correct placement of the
modifying elements makes this sentence
easier to understand; the use of which clearly
links the two elements.
D Carefully coordinated … absurdly modifi es
Beatrix Potter rather than her illustrations.
E Th e participial phrase does not clearly
modify book illustrations; the relationships
among the parts of the sentence are unclear.
Th e correct answer is C.

为什么E不对呢，我看了解释还是不能很好的理解，请理解的大家指导一下小女吧。谢谢谢谢了！！

作者: sunmoon115 时间: 2009-9-25 20:12
这句话的考点就是修饰语的顺序问题，In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, 这两个修饰语，修饰BP，BP作为主语+V XXXX
而E用了AND把其中的一个修饰语作为一句句子，改变了句子的结构，所以必错

说得不对请LX指正

作者: bryant_yc 时间: 2009-9-26 09:37
根据《白勇语法》，原句中的coordinating 用作从属成分。而E项把coordinated 和 capitalized 并列，改变了句子重心

作者: yidiyuehan 时间: 2009-10-8 23:51

这个题目我也是错了两次。试着分析下。

原句要表达的是 beatrix potter coordinates her book illustrations with her narratives.

A,B,E 的coordinate 可能修饰BP, 也可能修饰 book illustrations。会有歧义。

D的意思好像是 coordinate BP with her narratives。

C 的修饰正确。

作者: catfish527 时间: 2010-2-3 14:37
＃2的易懂！但是C中in her book在句子开头 her不会有unclear的可能么都没有出现名字呢 her代替谁？

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