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标题: [讨论]GWD-8-34 [打印本页]

作者: goafterdream 时间: 2009-9-24 15:47
标题: [讨论]GWD-8-34

Building on civilizations that preceded them in coastal Peru, the Mochica developed their own elaborate society, based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting other wild and domestic resources.

based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting
based on the cultivation of such crops as corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and seafood, and the exploitation of
and basing it on the cultivation of crops like corn and beans, harvesting fish and seafood, and the exploiting of
and they based it on their cultivation of crops such as corn and beans, the harvest of fish and seafood, and exploiting
and they based it on their cultivating such crops like corn and beans, their harvest of fish and shellfish, and they exploited

based 是做society的后置定语吧？前面为什么要用逗号呢？可以这样表达么？

作者: serendipityh 时间: 2009-9-24 18:20
有逗号:Building on civilizations that preceded them in coastal Peru, the Mochica developed their own elaborate society,
based on the cultivation of such crops as corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and seafood, and the exploitation of other wild and domestic resources.

没有逗号:Building on civilizations that preceded them in coastal Peru, the Mochica developed their own elaborate society based on the cultivation of such crops as corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and seafood, and the exploitation of other wild and domestic resources.
如果你不加逗号, 会产生严重的修饰歧义, the harvesting 等名词短语很可能会成为building on 的修饰对象.
我把重要部位加黑, 你自己看一下, 是吧?

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