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121 Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and perticularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

A. they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and perticularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

B. after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, perticularly red wine, they began growing again.

C. in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and perticularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again.

D. with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in perticular red wine, they began growing again. (A)

E. a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in perticular red wine, started them growing again.

请教NN，A中 and perticularly of red wine 的 and 做什么成分，我认为这个and画蛇添足，错误的将red wine和alcohol并列，alcohol本身就包括了red wine, 应该将这个and去掉，perticulary of red wine直接修饰前面的consumption of alcohol. 如果用and，那么前面就不应该加逗号。

B选项 a moderate alcohol consumption, perticularly red wine,不对，后面应该是perticularly red wine consumption

A选项and perticularly of red wine是做插入成分，补全了应该是and perticularly consumption of red wine。相对而言就A好一些，但是这个and个人也觉得比较多余~~

其他选项确实都有错，A相对来说最好一点，可是对于这个and还是有疑问.

they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly linked moderate consumption of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease

以下是引用yidiyuehan在2009/10/9 23:32:00的发言：
汗，当时就是因为A的and 结果觉得and 肯定错就排除了。

关键是时态，begin是瞬间动词，grow是延续性动词，所以不应该出现begin growing~应该是bigin to do~

C里的caused的发出者不是consumption而是report,把句子意思改变，所以只能选A~

这是og12的121，解释如下

This sentence explains why a trend of declining
wine sales reversed after the publication of a 1991
report suggesting that moderate consumption of
red wine correlated with reduced risk of heart
disease. The phrase particularly of red wine
modi?es consumption of alcohol, and the sentence
must make clear that it is moderate consumption,
not red wine that the report links to reduced risk.
A Correct. In the second clause, they refers
correctly to sales of wines; the relative clause
beginning with that clearly indicates that
the report linked moderate consumption …
with a reduced risk.
B

articularly red wine cannot describe
consumption—the preposition of is needed;
the placement of they so far from the
position of the antecedent Sales makes the
sentence awkward and di?cult to decode.
C The clause beginning with which refers to
red wine in this construction, erroneously
suggesting that wine rather than moderate
consumption of alcohol correlates with
reduced risk of heart disease; particularly of
red wine is not parallel to moderate alcohol
consumption; it needs to follow moderate
consumption of alcohol to make sense.
D Without the preposition of, the sentence
indicates that red wine is a kind of
consumption—which makes no sense.
E The incorrect placement of the modi?er in a
1991 report suggests that wine is being
consumed (albeit in moderation) in the
report itself.

-- by 会员 shanefeng (2009/10/23 7:49:00)