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标题: 请教这道Argumet的思路 [打印本页]

作者: fujialei 时间: 2009-7-18 17:23
标题: 请教这道Argumet的思路

AA:The more efficient a firm’s employees are, the more profitable that firm will be. Improvements in a firm’s information technology hardware and software are a proven way to increase the efficiency of employees who do the majority of their work on computers. Therefore, if our firm invests in the most powerful and advanced information technology available, employee productivity will be maximized. This strategy ensures that every dollar spent on enhanced information technology will help to increase our firm’s profit margins.”

作者: angel_0028 时间: 2009-7-18 23:15

1）软件硬件的提升使用电脑工作效率不代表一个firm的所有员工的效率

2）一般公司的提高效率方式恰恰不适合我们公司，例如我们公司是一个保安公司，工作流程基本就没有电脑参与

3）即使工作效率提高了，也不代表profit能提高。其他的内耗、管理欠缺、适应新技术带来的cost增加会导致profit下降，无法maxmise

4）最后想到一点很重要的，就是only think about one side，就提到了好，其实会有很多弊端

我想到的大概就似乎这几点

作者: zuozuox 时间: 2009-7-19 12:36
AA:The
more efficient a firm’s employees are, the more profitable that firm
will be.
无根据的假设。效率高生产一堆东西，卖不出去，没有profit

Improvements in a firm’s information technology hardware and
software are a proven way to increase the efficiency of employees who
do the majority of their work on computers.Therefore, if our firm
invests in the most powerful and advanced information technology
available, employee productivity will be maximized.
忽略他因，别的因素影响效率，不见得是电脑

无因果关系，从改进硬件可以提高生产效率，推不出our firm需要改进硬件

This strategy
ensures that every dollar spent on enhanced information technology will
help to increase our firm’s profit margins.”
无因果关系。这个办法不见得increase profit

作者: fujialei 时间: 2009-7-19 18:40

很好呢，谢谢啊！

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