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In little more than a decade, Argentina has become the world’s leading exporter of honey, with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going to the United States.

A. with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going

B. with the sale of nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it that goes

C. with the sale to foreign markets of nearly 90,000 tons a year, with almost half of it going

D. selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it goes

为啥WITH THE SALE不对呢..NN们请帮忙分析一下如果选C为何不可哩？谢谢大家啦·～～～还有一个星期要考时间较紧呀！

以下是引用alice1119在2009-6-30 0:13:00的发言：

In little more than a decade, Argentina has become the world’s leading exporter of honey, with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going to the United States.

A. with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going

which能够就近指代market, 造成歧义;

B. with the sale of nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it that goes

从结构上看,and和主句是平行的, 可是and后面的部分无论从逻辑还是句子成分都不满足and平行结构, 并且it 指代不清

C. with the sale to foreign markets of nearly 90,000 tons a year, with almost half of it going

sales, markets, 和90,000顿乾坤大挪移,修饰关系大改变,严重改变句意; 两个with型独立主格连用, 造成结构混乱

D. selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it goes

and almost在语法上应该跟主句平行,但逻辑上应为selling...的伴随状语, 跟B犯了同一类的错误; 而且it无指代

E. selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, with almost half going

为啥WITH THE SALE不对呢..NN们请帮忙分析一下如果选C为何不可哩？谢谢大家啦·～～～还有一个星期要考时间较紧呀！

这题的考点是修饰语的搭配, 只要弄清楚原句所要表达的修饰关系, 这题就不难了.