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作者: coffeenow    时间: 2009-6-27 23:11
标题: [讨论]大全-30
A special Japanese green tea called genmai-cha contains brown rice and is considered as a delicacy fit for a gourmet by most Japanese, though it is virtually unavailable outside Yokohama.
        

(A) A special Japanese green tea called genmai-cha contains brown rice and is considered as a delicacy fit for a gourmet by most Japanese, though it is virtually unavailable outside Yokohama.

(B) Considered to be a delicacy fit for a gourmet by most Japanese, genmai-cha is a special green tea that contains brown rice, virtually unavailable outside Yokohama.

(C) A special Japanese green tea called genmai-cha contains brown rice and is considered a gourmet delicacy by most Japanese, though it is virtually unavailable outside Yokohama.

(D) Most Japanese consider genmai-cha, a special green tea which contains brown rice, as a delicacy virtually unavailable outside Yokohama.

(E) Though virtually unavailable outside Yokohama, most Japanese consider genmai-cha, a special green tea that contains brown rice, a gourmet delicacy.

看到此题中有同学解释说B错误的原因是virtually unavailable outside Yokohama 修饰的是 rice. 对此有些不理解.当-ing分词作状语的时候,其主语是句子的主语,当-ed 分词作状语是,其主语是就近的名字,那么此句中的形容词短语的逻辑主语怎么理解呢,我觉得在作用上它可能更接近-ING分词一些.不知道对不对? 请各位NN们指导下,谢谢


作者: aeoluseros    时间: 2009-6-28 00:16

不是的,ed分词更倾向于就进修饰名词是因为ed分词不能表示伴随主句的动作,而ing则可以.同理,形容词短语也不能表示伴随,所以也是更倾向于就进修饰名词具体就进修饰还是修饰主语还是要根据具体题目,C里unavailable优先修饰brown rice,所以C错误.


作者: msuzengli    时间: 2009-6-28 02:31
以下是引用aeoluseros在2009-6-28 0:16:00的发言:

不是的,ed分词更倾向于就进修饰名词是因为ed分词不能表示伴随主句的动作,而ing则可以.同理,形容词短语也不能表示伴随,所以也是更倾向于就进修饰名词具体就进修饰还是修饰主语还是要根据具体题目,C里unavailable优先修饰brown rice,所以C错误.

版主是说B错误吧?

补充一下, 我认为B还有一个问题就是把原句的主句部分"is considered xxx"变成了从属成分,改变原句重心.

C答案修正了原句considered as的错误和a delicacy fit for a goumet的啰嗦问题. though副句部分的it优先指代主句主语,逻辑合理所以不造成歧义.

没看过大全,不知道这题是不是选C?


作者: aeoluseros    时间: 2009-6-28 11:24

额...是选C.

2楼我说错了,应该是B错..

同意你说的改变句子重心,使得逻辑不够衔接.


作者: coffeenow    时间: 2009-6-29 15:41
以下是引用msuzengli在2009-6-28 2:31:00的发言:

版主是说B错误吧?

补充一下, 我认为B还有一个问题就是把原句的主句部分"is considered xxx"变成了从属成分,改变原句重心.

C答案修正了原句considered as的错误和a delicacy fit for a goumet的啰嗦问题. though副句部分的it优先指代主句主语,逻辑合理所以不造成歧义.

没看过大全,不知道这题是不是选C?

Be considered as......有什么问题么?


作者: ynlf909    时间: 2012-10-25 19:01
额...是选C.
2楼我说错了,应该是B错..
同意你说的改变句子重心,使得逻辑不够衔接.
-- by 会员 aeoluseros (2009/6/28 11:24:00)


我觉得B选项的问题主要是改变句子重心。我觉得即使B中最后那个东西修饰rice也没有逻辑问题




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