附上模板，TX帮忙分析分析
AI：
The issue at hand, whether the government is responsible for providing healthcare, is a very controversial. To some extent, I agree with the author’s assertion [allegation] that……. However, the author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while neglecting some other crucial factors which may significantly influence the issue. Therefore, the final judgment should depend on a careful case-by-case analysis. All in all, my contention and agreement with the author is based on the subsequent grounds and consideration.
The paramount reason for my standpoint is that …… thus undermining the author’s assertion that…… A good example can be easily found is that…… Under such circumstance [ ], therefore, it is obvious [self-evident] that……
Another equivalently crucial ground that would develop my viewpoint is that…….. To illustrate, let us consider that …… moreover,…… Consequently [Hence]
Admittedly, it may be true that …… in some special conditions. However, this alone does not constitute sufficient evidence to claim [ ] that …… , furthermore, these cases are rare and therefore are not general and persuasive enough to strengthen [buttress] the view [ ] that …… When the advantages and disadvantages are carefully examined, the most striking [salient] conclusion is obvious that …… [is obvious]
In the final analysis [in sum], basing [ ]on the illustrations and expositions mentioned above, which correlate with each other to generate an organic whole, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that… AA 开头 The conclusion (recommendation) endorsed in this argument is that…… To illustrate (substantiate / bolster / support) this conclusion, the arguer points out that … In addition, the author reasons that…… At first glance, the author’s argument seems somewhat convincing, however a closer examination reveals that the argument is based on some dubious assumptions and the reasoning is flawed due to the inadequacy and partiality in the nature of the evidence provided to justify the conclusion. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate the main flaws of this argument. 结尾 In sum, the argument is logically flawed and therefore unwarranted（ill-founded）as it stands. (Accordingly, it is imprudent for the author to claim (assert) that…… ) To bolster （strengthen） the argument, the author would have to to demonstrate that…… Additionally (besides), It would be necessary to…… (a more related and reliable survey showing the real support for the author’s recommendation) Only with compelling evidence could this argument become more than just an emotional appeal.
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The conclusion (recommendation) endorsed in this argument is that…… To illustrate (substantiate / bolster / support) this conclusion, the arguer points out that … In addition, the author reasons that…… At first glance, the author’s argument seems somewhat convincing, however a closer examination reveals that the argument is based on some dubious assumptions and the reasoning is flawed due to the inadequacy and partiality in the nature of the evidence provided to justify the conclusion. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate the main flaws of this argument.
结尾
In sum, the argument is logically flawed and therefore unwarranted（ill-founded）as it stands. (Accordingly, it is imprudent for the author to claim (assert) that…… ) To bolster （strengthen） the argument, the author would have to to demonstrate that…… Additionally (besides), It would be necessary to…… (a more related and reliable survey showing the real support for the author’s recommendation) Only with compelling evidence could this argument become more than just an emotional appeal.
AA
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The conclusion (recommendation) endorsed in this argument is that…… To illustrate (substantiate / bolster / support) this conclusion, the arguer points out that … In addition, the author reasons that…… At first glance, the author’s argument seems somewhat convincing, however a closer examination reveals that the argument is based on some dubious assumptions and the reasoning is flawed due to the inadequacy and partiality in the nature of the evidence provided to justify the conclusion. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate the main flaws of this argument.
结尾
In sum, the argument is logically flawed and therefore unwarranted（ill-founded）as it stands. (Accordingly, it is imprudent for the author to claim (assert) that…… ) To bolster （strengthen） the argument, the author would have to to demonstrate that…… Additionally (besides), It would be necessary to…… (a more related and reliable survey showing the real support for the author’s recommendation) Only with compelling evidence could this argument become more than just an emotional appeal.
我只是提一些个人的建议啦
觉得LZ的模版用的有些多了
可以尝试下开头结尾用模版写
但是中间的内容尽量自己发挥
模版有时候还是会把你的思维限制住
我AWA是5.5 只是开头用的模版 其他都是自己写
我觉得最主要还是你写的内容啦
恩，3q.......是不是说模板不会造成太大的问题，其他部门写的不好才是低分的主要原因？
我觉得是的
关键是你的内容
楼主可以看看范文的行文方式是怎样的
观点是怎样阐述的
这样会对你写作有很大帮助 起码有的放矢啦
这个模板被人用烂了吧，肯定电脑判分算你抄袭了。
即使不用任何模板上的句子，写300字左右，随便写，高中单词，简单句，也有4分。
下次自己随便写吧，没必要用模板。
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