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作者: mchome    时间: 2009-5-25 14:30
标题: 新prep2-160

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In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.
A. In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
B. According to a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition was concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
C. Once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, the discus used in track competition is now
D. The discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now
E. The discus used in track competition was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now

答案C,谁来讲解下这道题?


作者: AlienX    时间: 2009-5-25 14:40
question?
作者: mchome    时间: 2009-5-25 16:13
以下是引用AlienX在2009-5-25 14:40:00的发言:
question?

排除AB是不是因为once和后面的now对应?

E错哪了?是不是was once designed中间加个once就不能表被动了?


作者: AlienX    时间: 2009-5-26 07:19
A: In a previous design, the weight<- 邏輯不對

B: According to a previous design, the weight<- 邏輯不對

E: designed to have不是designed having
作者: loispsq    时间: 2009-5-26 12:08
题目是讲: 原先的设计是将重心放在金属中心处, 而现在是将其放在边缘.
首先, 我认为这里没有转折的关系, 所以A, B, D的but转折不成立.
再来看A: the weight of the discus (used in track ....), but not it is ..., 此处it指weight of the discus, 与后面的 is lined with lead around the perimeter不匹配, 应该是由discus is lined with lead around the perimeter.
B问题同A.
E我认为是be designed having its weight... 用法不对.
查了朗文词典,一般的用法是:
design something to do something
be designed for somebody/something
be designed as something
纯属个人意见,希望有帮助.

作者: mchome    时间: 2009-5-27 17:49
thx!
作者: daisyao    时间: 2009-7-23 18:36

我有一个疑问~

 E. The discus used in track competition
            was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now

E中连续2个修饰(黄色和绿色部分)会不会造成修饰不清的情况??


作者: angelwds    时间: 2009-8-22 09:29
以下是引用AlienX在2009/5/26 7:19:00的发言:
A: In a previous design, the weight<- 邏輯不對

B: According to a previous design, the weight<- 邏輯不對

E: designed to have不是designed having

according to 应该算是介词吧~ 不存在逻辑主语的问题:)

以上。。新东方语法老师说的。。。


作者: sprins    时间: 2009-9-14 22:12
以下是引用daisyao在2009/7/23 18:36:00的发言:

我有一个疑问~

 E. The discus used in track competition
   was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now

E中连续2个修饰(黄色和绿色部分)会不会造成修饰不清的情况??

不会呀 一个是定语修饰n. 一个是句子的谓语 E错是缺少第二个可以和前文was对比表时态的助动词is(此时is不应该省)

另外 偶觉得AB的主要是it的指代有歧义 不像C的its那么清楚


作者: zanyingsan    时间: 2009-9-22 01:02
就因为不存在转折关系就排除D么?看来还是我的逻辑有问题
作者: Giovanna    时间: 2009-10-12 09:12

我也错选了d   除了转折错误外

有没有牛牛在解释解释~~


作者: RTP    时间: 2009-10-17 03:32
以下是引用Giovanna在2009/10/12 9:12:00的发言:

我也错选了d   除了转折错误外

有没有牛牛在解释解释~~

有没有前面用了once,后面再用but就重复了呢?
    

————————绝对不是“牛”


作者: Raymond_GMAT    时间: 2009-11-3 23:38
我也错选了D。
回过头,反复读一下D发现designed with its weight concentrated 是被动语态的,discus应该是被designed而不是designed with its,这里的it指代discus,所以D这样用就不对了。
如果将once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center看成修饰,那么前半句话就不完整(没有谓语),所以D还是不对的。
作者: gmat928    时间: 2009-11-5 10:41

作者: candicelu    时间: 2009-11-5 12:05
原句式想表达,曾经设计关注concentrated, 现在它关注perimeter

若把D放入原句The discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now it is lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.

就变成了 the d, once.... ,but now it is lined...    红色的那部分就是d的同位语了,句子主线成了 the d but now it is lined 就不是一个主句,一个分句了,而变成了一个有两个主语的句子,显然错了
作者: 杨东芳    时间: 2009-12-4 15:37
首先,discus 铁饼的意思,track competition 田径赛 weight 中心 还有一短语更是没想到 line with,来自Longman词典;line [transitive]
1 to sew a piece of material onto the inside or back of another piece to make it stronger or warmer:
Are those curtains lined?
line something with something
a leather coat lined with silk
2 to form a layer over the inner surface of something:
The birds use small leaves for lining their nests.
line something with something
The cage should be lined with straw.
3 to form rows along the sides of something:
Crowds lined the route to the palace.
be lined with something
The street was lined with small shops.
a tree-lined avenue
华丽丽的一道看着熟悉的单词 就是不懂意思的sc啊
作者: 杨东芳    时间: 2009-12-4 15:38
这道题已经在og12 23题出现,不过要是懂了单词的意思,就可以看出选项中代词指代有问题
作者: zanyingsan    时间: 2009-12-4 22:43
标题: 关于D的看法。
首先说 ,14楼给出的句子不对,加入D没有it is,所以14楼说的变成了一个有两个主语的句子我感觉是不对的,但是如果把, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, 看做插入语,那么句子就成了
The the discus used in track competition but now  lined with ,
还是可以成立的,只是说这里的but后省略了相同的主语,但是这里的转折就有点奇怪了,曾经用于在比赛里但是现在怎么怎么,意思上就奇怪了,所以我认为D是没有语法错误的,错就错在这个转折。
作者: a2515125    时间: 2009-12-11 17:25
sorry  小弟好像不會弄字的顏色
以下是我的淺見
A. In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is

it 指的應該是the weight of the discus   所以是贅字

B. According to a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition was concentrated in a metal center, but now it is

according 不與but 連用
C. Once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, the discus used in track competition is now
D. The discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now

這個選項我發現.....好像沒動詞 used ...designed but ....lined
E. The discus used in track competition was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now

用and無法達到轉折語氣
作者: 温哥华雪狼    时间: 2009-12-27 18:24
E后面会产生逻辑主语和实际主语的混淆(weight and discus之间),没有C那么清晰,从头到尾都是THE DISCUS是主语。
作者: afei0128    时间: 2010-4-4 23:35
我认为D没有谓语
作者: GraceZhou    时间: 2010-6-27 09:46
D项带入后是:
The discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.


once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center如果是做插入语则没有谓语
而且如果大家都不懂这句话里面的单词,就是只从语法角度分析,lined的修饰对象会不会引起歧义呢?是discus还是its weight 。。。?反正如果我不懂单词的意思我真的会搞不清

反正怎么看怎么错
作者: 活泼的小喷菇    时间: 2017-9-19 10:42
杨东芳 发表于 2009-12-4 15:37
首先,discus 铁饼的意思,track competition 田径赛 weight 中心 还有一短语更是没想到 line with,来自Lo ...

谢谢!终于明白啥意思了




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