错选A,应选C
A study on couples' retirement transitions found that women who took new jobs after retiring from heir primary careers reported high marital satisfaction, more than when retiring completely.
(A) more than when retiring
(B) more than if they were to retire
(C) more so than those who retired
(D) which was more so than those retiring
(E) which was more than if they had retired
※句子结构:study found that… women… reported high marital satisfaction, more so than those…
主词是study,动词是found,后跟that引导的受词子句说明found的内容。
【考点】比较、逻辑表达、平衡对称
比较,相同比较对象对比,第二个名词由相应的代词指代,要注意单复数形式。
逻辑表达-维持原句意思,比较结构中的代词指代对象要注意是否符合逻辑意思,并且是否表达原句所要表达的意思。
平衡-形容词子句,在比较句子中比较对象的修饰成分最好用相同的表达方式,以使句子更加平衡对称。
(A) 缺少指代women的代词,致使more than的比较对象不对等,satisfaction与when retiring对比。
(B) they指代前面的women,表达意思错误,因为if they were to retire表达了同一群妇女不同情况下的satisfaction对比,改变了原句意思,原句要表达的是不同妇女不同情况下的satisfaction对比;more than前后不平衡。
(C) 正确,those指代women,who took和who retired平衡。
(D) which与so都指代satisfaction,重复;
(E) they指代前面的women,表达意思错误,与A选项相同;没有特殊的时间标志说明需要用过去完成时had retired。
上面是prep的详解,但是我还是不太懂啊!总感觉satisfaction是比较的重点;还有B 选项中那个so是指代什么啊?
请教各路大侠!
more women reported high marital satisfaction than those who retired completely reported marital satisfaction.
楼上这样写清楚很多,但是文中哪里有这样的暗示呢?so又在这里指代什么呢?
继续求教!
楼上MM 五个选项就是暗示 SO就是more后面的那一堆啊
我还记得 有do so这样的题目呢 也是费了我一番劲
我也继续求教
看了楼上gg的讲解,有些启发;现在我来小结一下,欢迎指正。
通过A选项,首先确定比较对象,
本题讲的是women who took new jobs 和 women who retire completely 之间的比较。一个than引出比较对象,比较题型的突破口。
C选项, than 后面those who retired 清晰引出另一个比较对象,否则会像A/ B选项那样引起歧义。并且who retire 和who took new jobs 形式对应,时态对应;so指代前面句子的所讲的内容,一个泛指的概念
C D 错在直接改变句子的比较对象,成为satisfaction 的比较,而不是women的比较
补充说明,A B,more than引导比较同位语从句,修饰前面的satisfaction,犯了和D E 一样的错误。因此,本题关键点——是比较对象的确定
women who took new jobs 和 women who retire completely 之间的比较????????????
可是我觉得逻辑上也可认为是同样的women不同的情况下呀?????????
还有so的理解!!!!??????????????
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