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作者: niuniu1438    时间: 2009-4-23 20:02
标题: GWD30-Q31

31. GWD30-Q31:

When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100, but when the canal was used, it took less than eight days and cost less than $6.

 

A.    When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100, but when the canal was used, it

B.    Moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100; using the canal, it

C.    Before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks and cost $100; on the canal the move

D.    In 1825, before opening the Erie Canal, to move a ton of wheat took three weeks from Buffalo to New York City, which cost $100; moving it on the canal

E.     To move a ton of wheat in 1825 from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks before the opening of the Erie Canal, costing $100, but in using the canal, the move

感觉这题很奇怪,不知道在考点什么。反正知道D有个which肯定错;E 中costing $100 是错的。其他的不知道了。请指教


作者: songlovegt    时间: 2009-4-23 20:36
A. it 指代错误 it = a ton of wheat


作者: niuniu1438    时间: 2009-4-23 22:15
a ton of wheat 后面有的是was...
作者: songlovegt    时间: 2009-4-24 02:30
我指的是it指代,逻辑错误
不可能是a ton of wheat took less than eight days
moving a ton of wheat
作者: xxz5838    时间: 2009-4-24 02:44
以下是引用niuniu1438在2009-4-23 20:02:00的发言:

31. GWD30-Q31:

When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100, but when the canal was used, it took less than eight days and cost less than $6.

A.    When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100, but when the canal was used, it

It refers to a ton of wheat, illogical;

B.    Moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100; using the canal, it

It is extra here (two subjects), It cannot refer to the whole action; the second it has no referent

C.    Before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks and cost $100; on the canal the move

the move here clearly refers to moving a ton of wheat (both serve as a noun)

D.    In 1825, before opening the Erie Canal, to move a ton of wheat took three weeks from Buffalo to New York City, which cost $100; moving it on the canal

which cannot describe the whole sentence; it has no referent

E.     To move a ton of wheat in 1825 from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks before the opening of the Erie Canal, costing $100, but in using the canal, the move

the move here cannot refer to the action to move a ton of wheat;
                in using is awkward

感觉这题很奇怪,不知道在考点什么。反正知道D有个which肯定错;E 中costing $100 是错的。其他的不知道了。请指教


作者: niuniu1438    时间: 2009-4-24 22:00
I got it. Thanks
作者: niuniu1438    时间: 2009-4-24 22:02
Thanks
作者: 苹果夹心派    时间: 2009-7-28 13:52

作者: yy179920478    时间: 2009-7-31 17:01
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作者: yy179920478    时间: 2009-7-31 17:06

可是为什么e选项的costing 100不对呢,在这里可以用来修饰句子啊????????????


作者: wu41385621    时间: 2009-8-3 10:55
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作者: maggie88421    时间: 2009-8-4 20:17
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作者: mars_cheung    时间: 2009-10-31 14:35

E 从结构上看,由于 but 前面是逗号,costing 即可以伴随前面的 took 3 weeks,也可以与后面的 using the canal 并列,是“夹心饼干”。而且 the move 不可作 in using the canal 的逻辑主语,其逻辑主语应该是人。

从整个句子的平行来看,第一个分局谓语动词 took... and cost...平行,而且这样的句子结构也与未划线部分的 took less than... and cost less than... 平行。

因此选 C


作者: liulianf    时间: 2010-5-7 21:10
E 从结构上看,由于 but 前面是逗号,costing 即可以伴随前面的 took 3 weeks,也可以与后面的 using the canal 并列,是“夹心饼干”。而且 the move 不可作 in using the canal 的逻辑主语,其逻辑主语应该是人。
从整个句子的平行来看,第一个分局谓语动词 took... and cost...平行,而且这样的句子结构也与未划线部分的 took less than... and cost less than... 平行。
因此选 C
-- by 会员 mars_cheung (2009/10/31 14:35:00)




犀利  
C项的平行 是key point

另外,
A when ...was being moved ....being 明显多余 (另外,  前面的讨论说it 错误, 我感觉it 在这里做虚拟主语, 应该是没错的)
B. 第一个it 多余, Moving a ton of  .... took ..and cost....  才正确
D.E 的cost 用法都有问题
作者: zcool    时间: 2010-7-16 14:37
A与C比较,A中being多余。。It有指代歧义,C更简洁
supportC
作者: yuanjolly    时间: 2010-7-16 21:07
lol, not as so easy.
it in A, stands for moving a ton of blah blah```it seems ok, problem lies on the before, it is confused, and should b put in the first place `````
作者: hdyxxnn    时间: 2010-9-8 15:14
e中的costing有修饰Erie Canal的歧义吧
作者: nut728    时间: 2011-3-8 10:37
C没有but做转折而是“;”作平行把原文想表达的两个分句的逻辑关系给改变了,这样可以么?
作者: sophielion    时间: 2011-10-9 20:28
When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100,
but when the canal was used, it
took less than eight days and cost less than $6.

正确答案平行得太美丽啦!

A. When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and
cost $100, but when the canal was used, it
it 指代不清

B. Moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100;
using the canal,
it 指代不清

C. Before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks and cost $100;
on the canal the move
和后面的tookcost平行得太美丽了! Gmat里还有个小现象就是两个不同层次但在逻辑上有联系的句子,
用分号链接最好


D. In 1825, before opening the Erie Canal, to move a ton of wheat took three weeks from Buffalo to New York City, which cost $100;
moving it on the canal
which错误用法,cost也改变了句子逻辑意思

E. To move a ton of wheat in 1825 from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks before the opening of the Erie Canal, costing $100,
but in using the canal, the move
before的位置改变导致了move to new york opening3个星期


作者: maojianjian    时间: 2012-1-4 07:19
cost 在原句中是动词,而E中cost 仅作为了一个分词修饰,改变句子的中心,错
作者: kikiff8    时间: 2012-11-16 11:57
A. 2个it都用来指代运东西这件事情,这是不对的

B. it 指代不清 并且 using的主语是谁? 不知道

D. which cost which无明确指代对象

E.  in 1825 位置改变,成为了运东西的时间,但原本应该修饰the opening of the Erie Canal

C 的好处在于

首先,状语前置,感觉这种交代大背景的状语最好前置,不要插在句子引起歧义。这样2种情况的对比很清晰

其次,第二句话是move做主语,这使得前后2句话的主语在逻辑上是基本一致的



PS: A的问题还有,用when来表示举例或者说条件判断的,但when更多是涉及一个真的发生的时间所涉及的时间,这里并不存在这样一个实际的时间,前半句仅仅是举例




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