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标题: 牛牛帮忙分析下~~~OG紫34题答案解析 [打印本页]

作者: Skyllis 时间: 2009-4-18 11:19
标题: 牛牛帮忙分析下~~~OG紫34题答案解析

8. Lacking information about energy use, people tend to overestimate the amount of energy used by equipment, such as lights, that are visible and must be turned on and off and underestimate that used by unobtrusive equipment, such as water heaters.
(A) equipment, such as lights, that are visible and must be turned on and off and underestimate that
(B) equipment, such as lights, that are visible and must be turned on and off and underestimate it when
(C) equipment, such as lights, that is visible and must be turned on and off and underestimate it when
(D) visible equipment, such as lights, that must be turned on and off and underestimate that
(E) visible equipment, such as lights, that must be turned on and off and underestimate it when

答案选D没问题，双平行也明白。

但是新版OG11解析说：A,that are visible is not parallel to unobtrusive
B,C,E中such as lights is not parallel to unobtrusive

ETS是怎么思考的？他们为什么会认为A中谓语为are就想到that are visible与unobtusive比较? B.C.E中将that的定从改为状从就想到是such as lights 与unobtusive比较，而不是visible与unobtusive比较？

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作者: xxxyyyzzz1 时间: 2009-4-18 17:22
visible equipment 比equipment that visible 要简洁啊
其次，D很平行，overestimate the amount of 与underestimate that对称
that指代amount
多完美啊~

作者: lengfeng26 时间: 2009-4-19 16:50
by visible equipment----by unobstrusive equipment

作者: Skyllis 时间: 2009-4-19 19:16

谢谢楼上2位，第一个问题明白。clause not parallel to adj

但第二个问题仍然迷糊。

我将错误选项E带入原句，这样分析时思路能清晰些

Lacking information about energy use, people tend to overestimate the amount of energy used by
visible equipment, such as lights, that must be turned on and off and underestimate it when used by
unobtrusive equipment, such as water heaters.

很清楚能看出红色字平行错误，蓝色字平行

但是ETS居然会想出，插入语such as lights（粉红色字体）与unobtrusive平行？？难道是ETS分析错误？

我只是想学习ETS分析题的思路~~~~不要怪我太钻牛角尖呵。。。。。请牛牛指点~~~！！！

作者: redable 时间: 2010-9-25 23:25

visible equipment 比equipment that visible 要简洁啊
其次，D很平行，overestimate the amount of 与underestimate that对称
that指代amount
多完美啊~

-- by 会员 xxxyyyzzz1 (2009/4/18 17:22:00)

我想請教一下
that可以當代名詞指代名詞嗎?

thanks!

作者: qddxzhaowencon 时间: 2010-11-8 10:20
同问！XDF老师说，that these 不可单独使用。请NN解释一下

作者: qddxzhaowencon 时间: 2010-11-8 10:24
PREP语法上也写的是that只能指代核心词，在这里能指代the amount of energy 这个完整的phrase吗？

作者: qddxzhaowencon 时间: 2010-11-8 20:18
无人问津…自己顶一下

作者: lss2010 时间: 2010-12-13 23:31
同问！that可以单独放在这里吗？

作者: stellina 时间: 2010-12-14 00:48

谢谢楼上2位，第一个问题明白。clause not parallel to adj
但第二个问题仍然迷糊。
我将错误选项E带入原句，这样分析时思路能清晰些
Lacking information about energy use, people tend to overestimate the amount of energy used by
visible equipment, such as lights, that must be turned on and off and underestimate it when used by
unobtrusive equipment, such as water heaters.
很清楚能看出红色字平行错误，蓝色字平行
但是ETS居然会想出，插入语such as lights（粉红色字体）与unobtrusive平行？？难道是ETS分析错误？
我只是想学习ETS分析题的思路~~~~不要怪我太钻牛角尖呵。。。。。请牛牛指点~~~！！！

-- by 会员 Skyllis (2009/4/19 19:16:00)

哈哈有点钻牛角尖了。。我也不明白ETS为神马这么想。。我觉得这题不用开比选项也能做出来的。。

首先把整句读完，不管语法错误，根据句子提取出原句要表达的逻辑语义。读完很快发现tend to overestimate... and underestimate...是很明显的一个平行，并且同时发现underestimate that 后面不划线的部分说by unobtrusive equipment, such as water heaters.. 那么看划线部分的used by equipment, such as lights, that are visible显然不好，这时不看任何一个选项也应该在脑子里构造出used by visible equipment, such as lights。。既然这里重整结构后剩下的是must be turned on and off，必然是修饰lights的。。所以，在过完句子的15秒钟-30秒内脑子里会出现：overestimate the amount of energy used by visible equipment, such as lights, that must be turned on and off and underestimate that used by unobtrusive equipment, such as water heaters.

这时看选项有没有和脑子里出现的句子很像的，那么就选D。。。

再说其他问题，that这里是可以指代the amount of energy的。。这里的核心词就是这个呀，不是说核心词只能是单个名词的。

作者: Pope_Xie 时间: 2013-6-10 12:04
牛牛牛

作者: Hendy 时间: 2014-11-21 00:54
Between D and E....D is parallel

overestimate the amount of energy used by visible equipment.......and underestimate that [amount of energy] used by unobtrusive equipment.............

作者: 微WIND飘荇 时间: 2018-8-31 02:17

Skyllis 发表于 2009-4-19 19:16
谢谢楼上2位，第一个问题明白。clause not parallel to adj但第二个问题仍然迷糊。我将错误选项E带入原句， ...

overestimate the amount of energy used by visible equipment
and underestimate the amount of energy used by visible equipment
是并列的英语中可以用that 替代“同类”单数名词，those替代同类复数名词，写成that used by visible equipment

that和those可以替代上文提及的名词，以避免重复。
比如：
Spartina establishes itself on substrates ranging from sand and silt to gravel and cobble and is tolerant of salinities ranging from that of near freshwater (0.05 percent) to that of salt water (3.5 percent).从泥沙地到卵砾石地，米草属植物都能生长，其耐盐度在接近淡水（0.05%）和盐水（3.5%）的范围内。
The Mariner spacecraft found that the surface of Mars, as well as that of its two moons, is pitted with impact craters formed by meteoroids falling in from space.水手计划中的宇宙飞船发现在火星表面布满来自太空的流星撞击表面形成的陨石坑，火星的两颗卫星也是如此。
At the end of the experiments, the results showed that the actual weight of the brains of the impoverished rats was less than that of those raised in the enriched environment (though they were fed the same diets).
最后，结果表明生活在单一环境中的老鼠的大脑重量要比生活在复杂情况下的老鼠的大脑轻（即使它们被喂养的食物一样的）。

很多机构老师都是乱说的，讲到这个题乱讲的

用E错误，因为it是指代，指代前面的“the amount of energy used by visible equipment”，逻辑错误，因为是明显设备的耗能和不明显设备的耗能在对比。如果用when的话，也会出现一个问题，when如果后面没有主语，默认主语和主句一样，即people，但后面的used by想说的是the amount of energy，所以两处错误。

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