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标题: 两道gwd 就是不明白啊~ [打印本页]

作者: yanjunma 时间: 2009-3-11 01:04
标题: 两道gwd 就是不明白啊~

3. GWD26-Q3

Deliberately imitating the technique of Louis Armstrong, jazz singer Billie Holiday’s approach to singing was to use her voice like an instrument, in that she ranged freely over the beat, flattened out the melodic contours of tunes, and, in effect, recomposed songs to suit her range, style, and artistic sensibilities.

A. Billie Holiday’s approach to singing was to use her voice like an instrument, in that she ranged freely over the beat, flattened

B. Billie Holiday’s approach to singing was to use her voice in a similar way to how other musicians play instruments, in ranging freely over the beat, flattening

C. Billie Holiday approached singing by using her voice like other musicians played instruments, ranging freely over the beat, flattening

D. Billie Holiday used her voice in the same way that other musicians use their instruments, in that she ranged freely over the beat, flattening

E. Billie Holiday approached singing by using her voice like other musicians instruments, ranging freely over the beat, flattening.

这题答案给的d，可是in that 不是不能用吗？

24. GWD25-Q24

Although improved efficiency in converting harvested trees into wood products may reduce harvest rates, it will stimulate demand by increasing supply and lowering prices, thereby boosting consumption.

A. in converting harvested trees into wood products may reduce harvest
rates, it will stimulate demand by increasing supply and lowering prices, thereby boosting

B.      in converting harvested trees into wood products may reduce harvest
            rates, demand will be stimulated because of increasing supply and
            lowering prices, which boost

C. of converting harvested trees into wood products may reduce harvest rates, it will stimulate demand by increasing supply and lowering prices,
which boosts

D.      of harvested trees being converted into wood products may reduce
            harvest rates, it will stimulate demand, because it will increase supply
            and lower prices, thereby boosting

E. when harvested trees are converted into wood products may reduce harvest rates, demand will be stimulated because of increasing supply
and lowering prices, which boost

这题的a为什么不对呀~

作者: yanjunma 时间: 2009-3-11 20:47

nn们帮忙讲一下吧~

作者: BOASU 时间: 2009-3-12 02:44

第一道

句子的逻辑主语要与imitating the technique of Louis Armstrong的逻辑主语一致。approach不能imitate故直接排除AB

而CE项中approached singing by using 典型的wordy没有直接用used her voice好. 至于in that虽然过于书面化，但是放到这里只算是minor error.锉子里拔大个只能选D

第二道不详

作者: 小贝 时间: 2009-3-12 09:39

1. in that只能说和because比较起来，如果使用because和in that的选项没有其他错误，那优先选择because。但是这题里其他选项都有错误。不能说使用in that的选项一定错。

2. A：boosting作分词在句子最后,a) 可能就近修饰prices b) 可能修饰主句作状语

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作者: yanjunma 时间: 2009-3-12 20:33
谢谢了~

作者: yanjunma 时间: 2009-3-12 20:43

但是B选项的 which boost,是which 就近修饰prices 来boost吗？

还有一题Although New Jersey is called *#%&(就一个名称不碍事)，over three-quarters of its area is used for non-agricultural purposes, which leaves only a small portion of land available for cultivation.

这是 riceton 模考里一道语法的正确答案，这里的which leaves 是修饰的谁啊~ 还有3/4 of sth 后面谓语不是应该用复数吗？为什么是is used呀？

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作者: 小贝 时间: 2009-3-12 21:11

which一般情况下就近指代。例外的情况大多数分两种：
1. 用主谓一致来暗示which的跳跃修饰，简而言之就是单复数。
2. 用逻辑意思来暗示

为啥3/4 of sth后面应该用复数？比方说一头牛是单数，3/4 of 一头牛不会变成两头牛吧。

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