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作者: anchoret 时间: 2003-5-8 21:33
标题: [转贴]雪天宰鸡再续－5.5作文
雪天宰鸡再续－5.5作文

前日拿到成绩单，终于得到一个彻底的满意结果－－－5。5，寡人不敢独自窃喜，还需于大
家分享，以下是我得摸板，如有问题可以给我来信sunstion(A) hotmail.com

ISSUE:
Recently there is a debate over whether….Different people hold different views
because of their distinct background. Some people assert that…, while other peop
le believe that….As a matter of fact, the issue of whether…is a complex and con
troversial one. Therefore there is not a universal answer, and whether one choice
takes precedence over the other depends on specific situation. Actually the fina
l judgment should rely on a case-by-case analysis. As far as I am concerned, I ag
ree that, and do not agree that. My view can be greatly substantiated by the foll
owing discussions.

In the first place, the important reason that can be presented to develop my pos
ition is that…… A good example may be found in the case that…… Under this cir
cumstance, it is obvious that….

In addition, there is another reason for me to choose this statement. The reason
is not so far to seek…… To illustrate, let us consider that ……Hence another
equally important aspect is that……

Admittedly, it may be true that …… , in some conditions. However, this alone d
oes not constitute a sufficient support to claim that……Actually, these cases ar
e rare and therefore are too specific and too weak to strengthen the view that….
. When the advantages and disadvantages of X and Y are carefully examined, the mo
st striking conclusion is obvious that……

To sum up, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with ea
ch other to generate an integral whole and thus become more convincing than any s
ingle one of them, we may be comfortable to say that……, because ……

其他段落：
通过挣钱来实现的目的：
Making money is not an end in or of itself, but rather a means of obtaining mate
rial goods and services and of attaining other important goals, such as providing
securities for oneself and one’s family, lifelong learning, freedom to travel o
r the pursuit of hobbies.

挣钱是合理的论述：
As we all know, the first thing that any one should do on earth is to sustain th
e minimal material required by survivance. Without adequate profit out of investm
ent, any individuals or organizations can not obtain the required minimal materia
l, and therefore cannot make a living.
Furthermore, in the economic and fiercely competitive world, individuals and org
anizations cannot be satisfied with what they have already achieved. To survive b
etter, they have to strive for further success, for great development, and hence
for greater profit.

人的其他动机：
Human motivations are far too complex. Many of our daily decision rest on love s
ympathy, humanity and other things.

企业与社区的关系：
A business enters to an implied contract with the community in which it operates
, under which the community permits the business to do business in it while the b
usiness implicitly promises to benefit the community rather than do harm to it.
In pursuit of profits, a business can indeed benefit the community in which it o
perates by ways of providing jobs, low-priced products and economic growth.

ARGUMENT:

总魔板
In this argument, the author concludes that… To support his conclusion, the aut
hor points out that…. In addition, the author reasons that… Further more, he al
so assumes that … . At first glance, the author’s argument appears to be someho
w appealing, while a close examination will reveal how groundless it is. We do no
t have to look very far to see the invalidity of this argument. This argument is
problematic for the following reasons.

In the first place, this argument rests on a gratuitous assumption that …. Howe
ver, the assumption is questionable because the author provides no evidence to su
pport this argument. The arguer fails to take into account other facts that might
contribute to the result that …….. It is likely that , ……………..; it is als
o likely that ………………………… Any of these scenarios, if true, would show th
at ………………Therefore, this argument in question nee not to be accepted withou
t ruling out such possibility.

In the second place, the argument commits a logic fallacy of “after this and th
erefore because of this”. In no case can the mere fact that… be cited as eviden
ce to support the assumption that there is a causal-effect relationship between A
and B. Moreover, that just because B can be statistically correlated with A does
not necessarily mean that A is the cause of B. In fact, the author has obviously
neglected the possibility of other alternative facts such as…, or … may contri
bute to a certain extent to B. It may be only a coincidence that …… . Unless th
e author can rule out other factors relevant to …, this assumption in question c
an not be accepted.

In the third place, the evidence that the author provides is insufficient to sup
port the conclusion drawn from it. One example is rarely sufficient to establish
a general conclusion. Unless the arguer can show that A1 is representative of all
A, the conclusion that B… is completely unwarranted. In fact, in face of such l
imited evidence, it is fallacious to draw any conclusion at all.

In the fourth place, the argument has also committed a false analogy fallacy. Th
e argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in all respects, and
the author assumes without justification that all things are equal, and that the
background conditions have remained the same at different times or at different l
ocations. No evidence is provided to support this assumption. However there are a
ll kinds of important differences between ……. and other …making the analogy hi
ghly less than valid. For example, A..., however, B....Thus lacking this assumpti
on, the conclusion that … is entirely unfounded.

Last but no least, the validity of the survey on which the argument relies is do
ubtful in itself. The survey cited by the author is too vague to be informative.
The claim does not indicate who conducted this survey and when and how the survey
is conducted, neither does it mention what is the sample size, or how the sample
s are selected. Until these questions are answered the results of this survey are
worthless as evidence to support that….

Besides, the author assumes that A and B are mutually exclusive alternatives and
there is no room for a middle ground. However, the author has never offered any
reasons or evidences for imposing an either-or choice. Common sense and observati
on tells us that adjoining both A and B might produce better results.

普通的结尾
In conclusion, the arguer fails to substantiate his claim that …. Because the e
vidence cited in the analysis is too weak to lend strong support to what the argu
er claims. To strengthen the argument, the arguer must convince us that…. In add
ition, the arguer could have to provide more precise information to support his c
laim.

建议文章的结尾：
In conclusion, it is imprudent for … to … solely on the basis of the evidence
presented. Because the evidence cited in the analysis is too weak to lend strong
support to what the arguer claims. To make the argument more convincing, the argu
er should provide more substantial evidence concerning that…Moreover, I would s
uspend my judgment about the credibility of the recommendation(conclusion) until
the arguer could provide all concrete evidence to rule out all the above possibil
ities that I analyzed.

调研文章的结尾：
In conclusion, the survey on which the argument relies lacks credibility and the
refore does not lend strong support to the conclusion that…To strengthen the arg
ument, the arguer must convince us that…. Moreover, I would suspend my judgment
about the credibility of the recommendation(conclusion) until the arguer could pr
ovide all concrete evidence to rule out all the above possibilities that I analyz
ed.

作者: wangdaya 时间: 2004-4-16 00:20

anchoret 好样的，不愧 “超级版主”。比较全面。

只是怎么大家都一样？？

作者: whipwan 时间: 2004-4-16 19:40

魔板本来就是大家抄的嘛

谢谢小安！

作者: tulipmontreal 时间: 2004-5-15 16:54

anchoret 好样的，不愧 “超级版主”。比较全面

作者: freedownload 时间: 2004-5-18 05:29
ISSUE:
Recently there is a debate over whether….Different people hold different views
because of their distinct background. Some people assert that…, while other peop
le believe that….As a matter of fact, the issue of whether…is a complex and con
troversial one. Therefore there is not a universal answer, and whether one choice
takes precedence over the other depends on specific situation. Actually the fina
l judgment should rely on a case-by-case analysis. As far as I am concerned, I ag
ree that, and do not agree that. My view can be greatly substantiated by the foll
owing discussions.
issue的这个开头我也很喜欢，毕竟字数多，可是，我总感觉到它只能用在两种观点对比的那种文章里，如果是解释类的文章，就一句话，硬自己拉出一个对比来，不知道好不好。

作者: jjmba 时间: 2004-8-10 15:27

多谢！

作者: zhaoshujuanw 时间: 2005-1-13 02:20

多些小安哥哥

作者: laolei 时间: 2005-3-24 12:48
thanks.............................

作者: 徵徵 时间: 2005-4-19 12:21
怎么感觉好多废话啊！

作者: eggplant 时间: 2005-4-22 18:38

我的天，人民都使用完全一样的模版！

数了一下，就几个字不一样。

真怀疑ets的考官也能背出这个模版了！

作者: dingdangca 时间: 2005-5-2 04:18
支持小江GG~~yeah~

作者: winsx2008 时间: 2005-5-2 22:55
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作者: ah_eric 时间: 2005-5-4 01:10

好噢

就用这个模版了，还有4天就考了

到时就用同义词和句型转换大法了

作者: IceOnMe 时间: 2005-5-7 22:00

楼上的,我也想用哎~~~ -.-

作者: shashaxz 时间: 2005-7-12 15:03

我就用了这个魔板，分数惨不忍睹。

个人认为，there is a debate.....这个魔板，最好不要再用了。

而且是不是要用魔板，我也表示特别怀疑。

作者: hhl3000 时间: 2006-2-3 23:17

哈哈看来是后来人吃前边人的剩饭就得吃不了兜着走了，，，大家要注意了

作者: 牛2006 时间: 2006-2-10 01:30

到底能不能用啊

作者: 牛2006 时间: 2006-2-10 01:36
考过的大牛们,不要拿同胞们的血汗来让杀叉ETS取乐啊.不要再潜水了考过,用过,结果过的站出来喊一声出来啊.

作者: greg 时间: 2006-4-10 17:05
thanks!!

作者: freemark 时间: 2006-4-12 00:28

这个模版肯定很多人都用过了，现在再使用比较危险．

作者: SiSi公主 时间: 2006-6-19 21:55
thanks a lot!!!

作者: Cantaloupe 时间: 2006-10-13 19:22
魔板魔板·

作者: 飞天猪piggy 时间: 2006-10-16 17:28

学习一下~

谢谢小江(我猜应该是呵呵)

作者: tianshangke 时间: 2006-10-19 15:41
我看，管他什么内容,把摸班写上,字数就够啦,哈哈

作者: cwfcwfc 时间: 2007-1-1 19:08

残念，俺还是自己编个废话摸板吧。。。

作者: bigmachine 时间: 2007-4-27 18:20

遍自己的模版吧.....

作者: guixian517 时间: 2007-12-12 16:34
thanks

作者: bromidewei 时间: 2008-11-11 11:14

Thank小安哥哥

作者: trista816 时间: 2009-11-9 08:05
Thanks~~!

作者: mickyland 时间: 2010-5-22 20:30
谢谢楼楼

作者: 小羽羽 时间: 2010-6-29 22:42
收藏了，thanks!

作者: 草本植物 时间: 2010-8-9 20:25
谢谢

作者: ccfish9 时间: 2011-10-4 17:49

ISSUE:
Recently there is a debate over whether….Different people hold different views
because of their distinct background. Some people assert that…, while other peop
le believe that….As a matter of fact, the issue of whether…is a complex and con
troversial one. Therefore there is not a universal answer, and whether one choice
takes precedence over the other depends on specific situation. Actually the fina
l judgment should rely on a case-by-case analysis. As far as I am concerned, I ag
ree that, and do not agree that. My view can be greatly substantiated by the foll
owing discussions.
issue的这个开头我也很喜欢，毕竟字数多，可是，我总感觉到它只能用在两种观点对比的那种文章里，如果是解释类的文章，就一句话，硬自己拉出一个对比来，不知道好不好。

-- by 会员 freedownload (2004/5/18 5:29:00)

我个人就建议别用这个~自己重新拼或者把实在难以割舍的句子放到正文论述里。
这个模板因为经典用的太多，想我两年前曾经考托福的时候用的也是这个= =||。。

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