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作者: Howto 时间: 2009-2-28 23:47
标题: 新prep1-182

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The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.

A. using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced

B. using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced

C. by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing

D. by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced

E. which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing

请教这题为什么要用完成时态？ D为什么不好？难道因为as well as不如and好吗？

作者: ivymxy 时间: 2009-3-1 00:35

这道题选B吧

题目原句用的现在完成时，除非句子中有明显的时间标志，否则不要改变原句所用时态

而且by the use of 用法也不对, 动作的发出者The organic food industry ，所以用using

作者: AlienX 时间: 2009-3-1 02:41
D有幾個problems:
- "the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings" 應該是 "the use of Web sites, and public meetings, as well as mass mailings" OR "the use of Web sites, and public meetings as well as mass mailings"
- 2nd floor說得不錯, "the use of..."沒法完全明決的表示到底是誰做...可是個人應為不要上cross out, 反正不是一個致命的錯誤
- "in doing something"跟"for doing something"都有"在做...那一方"的含意, logically the author isn't trying to express such idea.
致於時態, LZ可以試一下用author寫這句子時的角度去想...

作者: fighting127 时间: 2009-3-1 18:14
我觉得是对a successful grassroots campaign做解释不能用by

作者: AlienX 时间: 2009-3-2 02:11
umm...C&D中的"by" phrase應該是修organize, 有through的意思...

作者: karenshi89 时间: 2009-3-2 04:25
我认为破折号内的部分是插入语，是个独立结构，前面不需要再加介词了

作者: JorieSong 时间: 2009-3-21 10:08

破折号里的插入语用什么都行。但是B和C的后面B 肯定没错。C就不好说，可以用（to convince 替代表目的，也可以向AlienX说的）。记号，回来看。

作者: jiaojiao1426 时间: 2009-3-24 22:27

这道题我错选了C，现在看来如果是C的话完全可以不用破折号，且有改变句意的嫌疑。

但是对破折号的意义还是不太清楚，盼望有NN能帮助

作者: fhmmj 时间: 2009-5-4 21:44
E为什么错？破折号后为什么要用从句而不用in doing?

作者: vincentliew 时间: 2009-5-26 17:19
E的which修饰campaign 错误

作者: chaoz 时间: 2009-7-5 01:50
- is used as (). They are used to explain or complete the meaning of
word before them, but are not supposed to be a part of the sentence in
structure.

open to discuss

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作者: xiaoniuren 时间: 2009-7-28 10:06
DING

作者: JTT 时间: 2009-8-5 10:06
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作者: kmnp 时间: 2013-9-8 17:01
这道题我选了C, B 的问题是 that应该就近指代啊，所以指代mass mailing 而不是campaign。
求大牛解答！

作者: liteng2125 时间: 2015-7-14 07:48

kmnp 发表于 2013-9-8 17:01
这道题我选了C, B 的问题是 that应该就近指代啊，所以指代mass mailing 而不是campaign。
求大牛解答！ ...

that 后面是has,只能指代单数，mass mailings 是复数。

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