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作者: snowlemon 时间: 2009-2-27 17:38
标题: 请教新prep2-163, 没有讨论过
163. (27788-!-item-!-188;#058&002611)

Because there are provisions of the new maritime code that provide that even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas, they have already stimulated international disputes over uninhabited islands.
A. Because there are provisions of the new maritime code that provide that even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas, they have already stimulated
B. Because the new maritime code provides that even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas, it has already stimulated
C. Even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas under provisions of the new maritime code, already stimulating
D. Because even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas under provisions of the new maritime code, this has already stimulated
E. Because even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas under provisions of the new maritime code, which is already stimulating

答案b

请问c的错误在哪里？不能理解成stimulat修饰前面这个句子吗？nn帮忙指点指点，谢了

作者: balabaladou7 时间: 2009-2-27 17:49

非NN

C的错误应该比较明显，从整句来看前面有even表示让步，后面也要相对应句子，需是完整的句子前后对应。

从逻辑上看，stimulat是修饰new maritime code的，不是修饰前面整个句子的。

作者: snowlemon 时间: 2009-2-27 18:11

以下是引用balabaladou7在2009-2-27 17:49:00的发言：

非NN

C的错误应该比较明显，从整句来看前面有even表示让步，后面也要相对应句子，需是完整的句子前后对应。

从逻辑上看，stimulat是修饰new maritime code的，不是修饰前面整个句子的。

EVEN确实是个很大的问题，我忽略了。
但从逻辑上来说，“在这个法案中，这些小岛都能如何如何，这件事激发了国际舆论“ 好像是说的通的列
让我再想想

谢谢ls mm

作者: 天蝎座1107 时间: 2009-3-24 19:56

以下是引用snowlemon在2009-2-27 17:38:00的发言：
163. (27788-!-item-!-188;#058&002611)

Because there are provisions of the new maritime code that provide that even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas, they have already stimulated international disputes over uninhabited islands.
A. Because there are provisions of the new maritime code that provide that even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas, they have already stimulated这里的they指代了the provisions原来是语意重复code都用了就不用说provisions of the new maritime code 直接说code的内容就好了
B. Because the new maritime code provides that even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas, it has already stimulated
C. Even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas under provisions of the new maritime code, already stimulating错在现在完成时改成现在分词现在分词强调的是动作与被修饰逻主同时发生一般情况下动词过去时和完成时都不要改成doing 另外原本的主句被改成了修饰成分句子重心变了也不对
D. Because even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas under provisions of the new maritime code, this has already stimulated错在this
E. Because even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas under provisions of the new maritime code, which is already stimulating错在which 一个是指代了全句错一个是句子重心变了错

答案b

请问c的错误在哪里？不能理解成stimulat修饰前面这个句子吗？nn帮忙指点指点，谢了

大家看看我这样分析对不对？尤其是A 大家觉得错在哪里了？

作者: 天蝎座1107 时间: 2009-3-24 22:05

顶起来!!!大家快来讨论!!!

各位NN和版主aeo和AlienX快现身吧!!!

作者: 天蝎座1107 时间: 2009-3-25 11:36
再问A选项的provisions与code是否语意重复使用???

作者: fighting127 时间: 2009-3-25 11:49

不重复一个是code 一个是code里的条例

A ---Because there are provisions , they have already stimulated
逻辑上是不通顺的,再一个there be强调自然拥有

C后面应该加句子

作者: 天蝎座1107 时间: 2009-3-25 12:14

我怎么觉得错不在there are啊...

现在看觉得是they指代了provisions错

貌似:因为code中有如此的provisions,此code引起了disputes,而不应该是they指代provisions引起disputes

不明白啊!!!

作者: fighting127 时间: 2009-3-25 12:17

Because there are provisions , they have already stimulated 我是说这个逻辑不对你试着翻译下因为有provision 他们stimulated...

吃饭去先

作者: balabaladou7 时间: 2009-3-25 12:26

A选项的主要问题是they指代不清。

前面的那么多复数都可以是they的语法指代对象，而逻辑对象却是code，应该是单数。

PS：fighting127MM的字非常小，以至于我很难看清，不知是怎么回事。

作者: 天蝎座1107 时间: 2009-3-25 12:30

Because there are provisions , they have already stimulated 我是说这个逻辑不对你试着翻译下因为有provision 他们stimulated...

吃饭去先

给楼上看fighting的解释

我大概明白ls二位意思。这新prep为什么这么搞呢。prep320不这样的啊!!!

作者: alohabrian 时间: 2009-3-25 12:32
不只修饰问题，A非常不简洁。there are不简洁，that定语从句不简洁

作者: balabaladou7 时间: 2009-3-25 12:35

以下是引用天蝎座1107在2009-3-25 12:30:00的发言：

Because there are provisions , they have already stimulated 我是说这个逻辑不对你试着翻译下因为有provision 他们stimulated...

吃饭去先

给楼上看fighting的解释

我大概明白ls二位意思。这新prep为什么这么搞呢。prep320不这样的啊!!!

新PREP是和320风格不一致。大体顺序是OG--PREP320--PREP新/GWD

你可以看到很多GWD的题在新PREP里，而PREP320里则很多OG的题。

但是基本考点是一致的。

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-3-25 12:35:37编辑过]

作者: 天蝎座1107 时间: 2009-3-25 12:39

there are是个什么级别的错误???

请讨论。

不过这里头比较A和B,绝对能看出B比A好,A很累赘。

PS.OG11上有说there are不好，但是如果我没记错prep320里面有there are对的选项。

回balabaladou7 MM我现在就在最后一步上呢。现在感觉题目还是要分析透。像这个题，我就得搞透A错在哪里，每个错误的级别

作者: alohabrian 时间: 2009-3-25 12:44
没说there are就是错了，但是这里就是不好，既然说provision的内容，就直接说 provision provide这样的简单主谓就可以了。

天蝎同学，我觉得培养出对于正确结构的语感认知，要比分析语法更加重要。

作者: 天蝎座1107 时间: 2009-3-25 12:54

以下是引用alohabrian在2009-3-25 12:44:00的发言：
没说there are就是错了，但是这里就是不好，既然说provision的内容，就直接说 provision provide这样的简单主谓就可以了。

天蝎同学，我觉得培养出对于正确结构的语感认知，要比分析语法更加重要。

恩有道理的谢谢

我明白其实就是培养出正确结构长什么样子的感觉对吧alohabrian同学我会努力的

确实这里B的句子读着都好舒服不过我还是想知道A的考点在哪里分析完新prep我会把所有句子都归纳每天读读正确选项的

你建议很好谢谢

作者: wzsgdtc 时间: 2009-5-31 01:02
发现大家讨论的和楼主要问的已经完全不一样了。。。我也想问楼主的问题。。我选了C。。。

作者: wzsgdtc 时间: 2009-5-31 01:05
囧。。原来没看到前面的讨论。。懂了。。

作者: daisyao 时间: 2009-7-23 19:25

E 是否还错在缺少句子主语呢？

作者: cecilia025 时间: 2009-7-27 19:06
e的确有缺少主句的错误，只有because引导的从句

作者: Moonpainter 时间: 2009-8-23 17:20

请问这题D怎么错了？

作者: guoyun622 时间: 2009-8-30 18:17
Logical predication; Grammatical construction
In this sentence, the there are ... that...
construction contributes nothing more than
unnecessary words. The sentence needs to make
clear whether provisions or code is the subject of
the main verb stimulated.

A The there are... that... construction is
unnecessarily wordy, in the predicate
nominative instead of the subject position,
provisions is not an obvious referent for the
pronoun they.

B Correct. In this sentence, the new maritime
code is clearly the antecedent of it in the
main clause and thus the subject of has
already stimulated.

C Under provisions of the new maritime code is a
misplaced modifier, seeming to describe sea
areas,the sentence does not make clear what
is stimulating... disputes.

D The referent of thisis unclear.

E The sentence is a fragment, opening with a
dependent clause (Because ... code) and
concluding with a relative clause, but
lacking a main, independent clause.

The correct answer is B.

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作者: flames001 时间: 2010-3-14 18:17
同问
D 中的this指代为什么不明确？

作者: kathy1989717 时间: 2010-4-10 17:09
同问this

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