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作者: deezy 时间: 2009-2-18 21:57
标题: 这道题的答案好像不对

By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.

their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country’s $21 billion book market, which ranges

答案选B，明显错了嘛，正确答案应该是什么，请高手指教啦

作者: songlovegt 时间: 2009-2-18 22:22
根据their排除 A, C
根据 from to 排除 E
具 Longman 解释 increase 可以和 in 连接，但只局限于 increase in value/price/importance etc Investments are certain to increase in value.
且 value/price 前并无限定词修饰。见例句
Always question any increase in price and ask why it was not included in the original estimates.

Each day during its 91 day life, it should increase in value a little.

If you would like to give a child an investment present that will increase in value, phone 0898-666629 for advice.

Most tour packages and many resorts are reporting they are either holding the line or having only slight increases in price.

Our house has increased in value and we feel lucky that we're not affected by the slump in the housing market.

The innovative approach cost only a small amount more, with no increase in price to the customer.

This will raise its retailer's costs, so causing an increase in price and reduction in output.

Will we see a substantial increase in prices from year to year?

而且 D 将 , from 6 percent to 10 percent, 改为插入成分，改变原句强调重心。
综上所诉，B is the best.

作者: fightbear 时间: 2009-2-18 23:28

但是B和D有硬伤，which，这个是ETS常考的错误点，which应该紧跟在修饰的对象后。

根据their排除 A, C

increase in its share，wordy and awkward.

排到最后剩B和E,B是correctiveness的错误而E是effectiveness的错误

所以应该选E

open to disscuss.

作者: songlovegt 时间: 2009-2-18 23:59
in the country 是修饰语，中心词为 book market, 而且逻辑上不可能是 country ranges from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks. 此外 mass-market 也明确了修饰对象。
对于 which 修饰对象问题，不能太教条，在 og 里能够找到修饰中心词的例子（非 which 紧跟名词)

作者: deezy 时间: 2009-2-19 12:03

我也觉得which指代有很大的问题，因为很多OG的答案解释里面都明确which只能指代最近的那个名词，要么就是错误！！我也觉得E是对的

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