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标题: 为何a选项不对？ [打印本页]

作者: k2o33 时间: 2009-1-5 11:58
标题: 为何a选项不对？

82.Although he is as gifted as, if not more gifted than, many of his colleagues, he is extremely modest and his poetry is unpublished.
(A) Although he is as gifted as, if not more gifted than, many of his colleagues, he is extremely modest and his poetry is unpublished.
(B) Although he is as gifted, if not more gifted, than many of his colleagues, he is extremely modest and with his poetry remaining unpublished.
(C) Although he is as gifted as, if not more gifted than, many of his colleagues, he is extremely modest and will not publish his poetry.
(D) Despite his being gifted, if not more gifted than his colleagues, he is extremely modest and will not publish his poetry.
(E) Being a gifted as, or more gifted than, many of his colleagues, he is extremely modest and his poetry is unpublished.

作者: 小贝 时间: 2009-1-5 12:14

答案是C？

作者: k2o33 时间: 2009-1-5 12:39

是的，a错在哪里了？

作者: 小贝 时间: 2009-1-5 12:52

GMAT是比较不喜欢被动的，认为被动会使动作发出者不明确而造成歧义。

我觉得这题还是出在逻辑意思上， he is extremely modest and his poetry is unpublished.两件事是同时发生的。但是从逻辑意思上来说，他应该先谦虚，后不出版他的书籍。所以表达上把后半句的时态改为将来时更好一些。所以就有了C， he is extremely modest and with his poetry remaining unpublished.他是非常谦虚的人，不会出版诗集。

作者: k2o33 时间: 2009-1-5 13:37

谢谢小贝

作者: shuxuehai 时间: 2009-1-5 22:54
In my opinion, if you choose A, you choose to speak of 2 things that do not seem to correlate with each other.

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