Published during the late eighteenth century, Diderot’s factual Encyclopedia and his friend Voltaire’s fictional Candide were the cause of such a sensational scandal, and both men prudently chose to embark on extended vacations in nearby Austria.
(A) Diderot’s factual Encyclopedia and his friend Voltaire’s fictional Candide were the cause of such a sensational scandal, and
(B) Diderot and his friend Voltaire’s caused such a sensational scandal with their factual Encyclopedia and fictional Candide, respectively, that
(C) Diderot’s factual Encyclopedia and his friend Voltaire’s fictional Candide were the cause of a scandal so sensational that
(D) the scandal caused by Diderot’s factual Encyclopedia and his friend Voltaire’s fictional Candide was so sensational（C）
(E) a factual Encyclopedia by Diderot and the fictional Candide, by his friend Voltaire, caused a sensational scandal, which
答案C，请问E为什么不对。谢谢！
E 在最后which引导的那个定语从句上出了最基本的语法错误，Which是关系代词，引导定语从句修饰Scandal，那么Which在从句中必须有自己的功能，which所代替的先行词是事物的名词或代词，在从句中可作主语、宾语或者表语。
但是，在这个句子里面，从句的主谓宾完整无缺，Which没有起到任何作用，如果非要用which,也应该是which cause或者which made both men prudently chose to embark on extended vacations in nearby Austria.
然后，我觉得还有一个问题就是，E毫无疑问完全改变了原句的结构和重心。
如果C和E比起来，毫无疑问是C
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