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作者: dydingding 时间: 2004-2-3 11:23
标题: [讨论]补充260
Rising inventories, when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth.

A 同上
C when they were unaccompanied by corresponding sales increases, can lead
E if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead

A when 应该跟句子吧？是否有A这种形势，如果有，A为什么不对？
为什么C 不对？

作者: wikeypig 时间: 2004-2-3 12:00
sorry,It's my fault.
please look at this:

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=23&ID=27710

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作者: 2love2live 时间: 2004-2-3 12:31
主要错在：

unaccompanied 是形容词，没有unaccompany 这个动词，而‘by' suggests that 'unaccompained' 是个动词，所以 "unaccompanied by" 是错的

我想如果A 改成 when not accompanied by corresponding sales increases, 也是对的，不过感觉在否定的状态下，还是if 比较好，

my 2 cents

作者: dreadpower 时间: 2004-2-3 12:33
个人看法：A是说：当Rising inventories不相应的伴随increases in sales

E说：当Rising inventories不伴随相应的increases in sales

E中corresponding修饰increases ，A中correspondingly修饰unaccompanied，意思上有差别，但是明显是E说的通顺
此外：unaccompanied有形容词之嫌

关于C，第一：they were 多余，第二：sales increases，SC中很少用名词修饰名词，慎用，此外increases in sales符合习惯表达

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