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标题: OG NO57疑惑 [打印本页]

作者: 寂寞的自由    时间: 2004-2-1 06:57
标题: OG NO57疑惑
In astronomy the term "red shift" denotes the extent to which light from a distant galaxy has been shifted toward the red, or long-wave, end of the light spectrum by the rapid motion of the galaxy away from the earth.

e) of the shift of light from a distant galaxy.

请问,这个E错在什么地方了,感激大家!!!

作者: Snazzy    时间: 2004-2-1 08:17
对起来太不爽
1, the extent到后面找to
2, 又by,到前面找passive voice
作者: 寂寞的自由    时间: 2004-2-2 04:03
楼上的鸭鸭,我还是不明白您说的。不好意思,脸红
作者: kgg    时间: 2004-2-2 04:51
把E放进来就是:
In astronomy the term "red shift" denotes the extent of the shift of light from a distant galaxy toward the red end of the light spectrum by the rapid motion of the galaxy away from the earth。

OG 说by rapid motion 需要一个动词
例如:shifted by the rapid motion

作者: Snazzy    时间: 2004-2-2 13:44
1, the extent到后面找to ---> whenever there is 'extent', it is very likely there is a 'to' somewhere as 'to the extent', like 'in a degree', is an idiom --> 就是考的那个'to'

2, 又by,到前面找passive voice --->look at the 2nd half of the sentence, there is a 'by the rapid motion', u should use passive voice in the first half.




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