作者: casforain 时间: 2008-10-22 21:23
AA 1、开头 The conclusion endorsed in this ….is that… To support this recommendation, the author of the … relies on ……. In addition, the author reasons that… (What’s more, he also assumes that …) This argument is logically flawed in several critical respects. (At first glance, the author’s argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that it omits some important concerns that should be addressed to substantiate the argument). (However, the recommendation relies on a series of unsubstantiated assumptions, which render it unconvincing as it stands.)
2、正文 First, and foremost, The argument assumes that ……A portends B This assumption may hold true in some cases. However, it is unlikely to hold true in the case at hand. The AA provides no evidence that …… Lacking such evidence it is entirely possible that ……
The argument also assumes unfairly that …… While temporal precedence is one of the conditions required to establish a causal relationship between two events, by itself it is not a sufficient condition. Perhaps …… Even if the author can substantiate the foregoing assumptions, the author overlooks the possibility that……
Finally, the author has provided no evidence to support the contention that The mere fact that.....hardly suffices to prove……
二选一的解决方案 the author assumes that A and B are mutually exclusive alternatives. the author assumes that these are the only available solutions to the problem of …. Adjusting both A and B might produce better results
I cannot accept any conclusion about …… Even assuming that....... the argument rests on the further assumption that…… Since .........it is equally possible that……
前后因果 But the mere fact that the pharmacy section was added before the increase occurred is insufficient grounds to conclude that it was responsible for the increase.
3、结尾 To conclude, the editorial's author cannot justify his/her recommendation on the basis of the scant evidence provided in the AA. To bolster the recommendation the author must provide better evidence to prove that……
In addition, to solidify the conclusion, the author should provide concrete evidence as well to demonstrate that…. To better assess the argument I would need to know …… To strengthen the conclusion the author would have to provide evidence that A and B were sufficiently similar to warrant the analogy between them.
It will not be realistic to arrive at a well-reasoned proposal without more detailed information.
Useful sentence It must also show that there are no exceptional reasons for
ill-founded.
Not well-reasoned
Ultimately, the argument might have been strengthened by making it clear that the decline of the dropout rate and the achievements of the graduates are the direct results of interactive computer instruction, that the instruction is also applicable to other schools in the district, and that the instruction is affordable to all the schools in the district.
Unfortunately, this evidence is insufficient to establish the causal claim in question. While temporal precedence is one of the conditions required to establish a causal relationship between two events, by itself it is not a sufficient condition.
Lacking detailed information about Apex and the other companies in question it is difficult to assess the author’s conclusion.
Negate
However, the author provides no evidence that substantiates this assumption.
作者: casforain 时间: 2008-10-22 21:23
AI
The stated opinion is that ………. To some extent, I agree with the statement that if …However, the statement oversimplifies the … My view can be greatly substantiated by the following discussions.
It is sagacious to admit that the approach can be applicable in some special circumstances. To begin with, ……Consequently, ……… In addition, ……… has been a powerful evidence to prove that the approach posed in the statement can be …..
There are many merits of using this approach; however, it might not work well in some other cases.In short, this assertion is problematic in two aspects. First, the author doesn’t realize that …… Of course,… But…Second, it happens that …….
In conclusion, there are both some pros and cons of using this approach. It cannot simply identified as "for" or "against". By taking into account all the arguments above, we may arrive at a compromised conclusion that...