标题: 大全-I-9，20 [打印本页] 作者: wikeypig 时间: 2004-1-28 17:11 标题: 大全-I-9，20 9. It takes a deft balance between savings discipline, investment knowledge, risk taking, luck, and time to raise a million dollars through investments. (A) It takes a deft balance between (B) Deft balancing is needed between (C) Deftly balanced, it takes (D) It takes a deft balance of (E) A deft balance is what one needs among answer:d,E是什么错误？ 20. As Russell Banks suggests, it is a lack of grand ideas that have only left writers with semiotics, hermeneutics, and deconstruction. (A) As Russell Banks suggests, it is a lack of grand ideas that have only left writers with (B) Writers, Russell Banks suggests, who lack of grand ideas and leave only (C) Russell Banks suggests that a lack of grand ideas has left writers with only (D) It is Russell Banks’ suggestion that a lack of grand ideas have left writers only with (E) It is only a lack of grand ideas, Russell Banks suggests, which leave writers with
答案：B，请帮我分析一下其他选项 作者: delldell 时间: 2004-1-28 22:59
1.E is not idiomatically... 2. 哪位NN给解释一下, 我是不会选B, 跟本不是个句子呀
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20.答案是C啊！我查了885了。B肯定不是一个完整的句子，首先应该排除的选项。(A) it is a lack of grand ideas that 表达不好。(D)It is Russell Banks’ suggestion that 用名词suggestion不如用动词 suggests 清楚，动词优于名词。(E)which离修饰成分太远，而且感觉用ideas that 好，好象没见过ideas which的表达。作者: xiaoyue45084508 时间: 2004-1-30 17:43
9. D) It takes a deft balance of (E) A deft balance is what one needs among 2个选项比较感觉E太罗嗦了。 不好意思，我只是只菜鸟，解释不清楚E有什么语法问题。只是凭自己的感觉读起来E很不爽。作者: terry_awesome 时间: 2004-1-30 21:40
以下个人理解： 1 D，好象没啥说的啊……E本身读着意思变成：BALANCE 是AMONG （属于）后面那一堆东西里的一个东西，而不是那一堆东西的一个BALANCE 2 B和其他选项的最大区别就是变成1.WRITER LEAVE STH 不是 A LACK LEAVE WRITER WITH SOMETHING 2 句子结构违背语法…………A D选项中用HAVE LEFT 错， E里面ONLY 的位置不对改变了原意（由于句子的划线部分也在里面，句子原意只能个人理解） 比较下 c 对吗》？作者: vincent0330 时间: 2004-1-31 11:56
大全-I-9 (E) A deft balance is what one needs among, 主语从It 改变成 a deft balance, 句子的重心改变, 且插入what引导的宾语从句, 也与原文的意思不同
I-20 (A) As Russell Banks suggests, it is a lack of grand ideas that have only left writers with 语法上,that引导的定语从句修饰先行词grand ideas, 但是语意上应修饰a lack (B) Writers, Russell Banks suggests, who lack of grand ideas and leave only 可看成 Writers who......., 后面无谓语, 构不成主要结构 (同7F) (D)It is Russell Banks’ suggestion that a lack of grand ideas have left writers only with (同5F) suggestion 不如suggest, (同7F) that从句中主语为a lack, 谓语应用has而非have 另外, (D)选项形式主语(It is)的重心变成suggestion, 比较原文中的主语a lack, 重心整个改变 (E) It is only a lack of grand ideas, Russell Banks suggests, which leave writers with which引导的非限定性定语从句修饰不清楚, 是修饰a lack或是grand ideas, 还是suggestions?? 另外原文中用了完成式, 在(E)中则没有作者: wikeypig 时间: 2004-1-31 12:26
谢谢，明白了。