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作者: phoenixfr 时间: 2008-9-16 20:31
标题: T-3-Q7

In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.

number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting
number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled
numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting
wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled
wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting.

答案选E，但是为什么用完成时呢？好像没有明显的标志啊。用其他时态可不可以呢？

作者: sjeffrry 时间: 2008-9-17 04:38
up

作者: supersusie 时间: 2008-9-17 10:09

by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.

前面的和后面的不是要平行对等吗？

作者: kuaidao 时间: 2008-12-18 14:39
dui a 牛牛解答为什么是 HAVE

作者: 热带鱼 时间: 2008-12-18 20:37
保持原文合理时态

作者: soul86 时间: 2009-5-25 09:18
时态怎么合理了...没有提示词也没对应

作者: jillchenyy 时间: 2009-10-14 11:35

追问，我选了D。时态我觉得D&E都么啥错，后来觉得E中 by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting 不清楚uncontrolled是修饰DEEP SEA 还是 deep sea and costal netting，所以就。。。请NN看过来

作者: jeffmou 时间: 2009-10-14 12:11

这题通过主谓一致和平行就排除了ＡＢＣ所有选项

number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting
number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled 缺少by和后面平行
numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting 缺少by和后面平行
wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled by后应该跟名词和后面平行
wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting.

作者: jillchenyy 时间: 2009-10-17 13:10
继续等待高手

作者: paopao1124 时间: 2010-6-2 11:01

追问，我选了D。时态我觉得D&E都么啥错，后来觉得E中by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting 不清楚uncontrolled是修饰DEEP SEA 还是 deep sea and costal netting，所以就。。。请NN看过来by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting 不清楚uncontrolled是修饰DEEP SEA 还是 deep sea and costal netting，所以就。。。请NN看过来

-- by 会员 jillchenyy (2009/10/14 11:35:00)

是啊是啊我也这么觉得

作者: Vinterm 时间: 2010-8-24 21:07

-- by 会员 jillchenyy (2009/10/14 11:35:00)

是啊是啊我也这么觉得

-- by 会员 paopao1124 (2010/6/2 11:01:44)

UP 请教D错在哪儿

作者: 2008115061 时间: 2010-8-24 21:16
其实没必要这么纠结。
SC的最重要原则就是：不能改变原文的意思，除非原文的逻辑就是必须要改动的。
D的修饰显然就是错误的，and把前后两个名词隔开，that is uncontrolled就是在修饰后面那个名词了。

E为什么对，两个理由：parallelism不需多说。其次，就是应该用have been。为什么？因为句子的主语动词用了被动，大家就没看出来这里应该用have been.
如果我说the pollution ofxx xx, and xx has reduced the number of the xx, 就能理解为什么用完成时了吧：前者对后者有长期影响

作者: opensmiling 时间: 2011-1-30 15:51
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-- by 会员 jillchenyy (2009/10/14 11:35:00)

deep-sea 深海的，coastal 沿海的，如果说uncontrolled 修饰 deep-sea 意思就是不受控制的深海，不合逻辑，by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting 意思是不受控制的深海和沿海的网捕， uncontrolled 明显修饰整个短语

作者: paonbleu 时间: 2011-7-16 12:13
D中that从句不如形容词uncontrolled简洁
E中uncontrolled和deep-sea and coastal形容词并列没什么问题。

作者: jayhung 时间: 2013-4-6 13:21

jillchenyy 发表于 2009-10-14 11:35
追问，我选了D。时态我觉得D&E都么啥错，后来觉得E中   by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal n ...

uncontrolled和deep-sea都是形容词，这里我感觉是E更加简洁一点吧

作者: Cherli 时间: 2014-7-1 16:59

jillchenyy 发表于 2009-10-14 11:35
追问，我选了D。时态我觉得D&E都么啥错，后来觉得E中   by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal n ...

个人觉得原句中的uncontrolled是修饰deep-sea，而修改的句子应该保持原句的逻辑意思，所以uncontrolled修饰deep-sea，如果以从句的形式就变成了修饰coastal netting了

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