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作者: 基范1987 时间: 2008-9-1 17:44
标题: prep1-164

One automobile manufacturer has announced plans to increase the average fuel efficiency of its sport utility vehicles by 25 percent over the next five years, amounting to roughly five miles per gallon, and representing the first significant change in the fuel efficiency of any class of passenger vehicle in almost two decades.

(A) amounting to roughly five miles per gallon, and representing

(B) amounting to roughly five miles per gallon, and it would represent

(D) an increase that would amount to roughly five miles per gallon and would represent

(E) which is an increase amounting to roughly five miles per gallon, representing

笔记上解释C错误时说and it would represent在语法上与主句并列,如果与主句并列and前不是应该加逗号么?

作者: liu4949 时间: 2008-9-1 20:26
我认为it应该省略，这个更明显，你接着往下做prep，会发现，前后两个句子，如果主语一样，后面那个主语一般都省略

作者: 基范1987 时间: 2008-9-2 12:03

LIU4949 GG,这点我是知道的,我只是觉得如果我是说如果笔记上说的and it would represent在语法上与主句并列是成立的,那么and 前也应该加逗号吧

作者: AlienX 时间: 2008-9-2 12:25
the explanation in the note is wrong.

作者: judyenglish 时间: 2009-8-7 11:59
ding

作者: z89113570 时间: 2009-9-2 13:05
up

作者: happyggggg 时间: 2009-9-25 23:31
up

作者: QXDsea 时间: 2009-10-17 18:26

C是it指代不清的问题，比较选项C和D的话，D比较好

作者: rainbowmanutd 时间: 2010-3-18 18:44
C的it和前面不平行吧。D比较好，and后面也是修饰increase ，比较平行

作者: mia113 时间: 2011-7-13 19:52
个人认为：
姑且不考虑是否要在and前加，
直接认为被and 连接的部分若句子完整，在语法上它跟主句平行。导致在逻辑上错误没有与之对应的部分平行
PREP 里面有很多这样的例子：

lbiologists are recommendingthat some states cut back on trout stocking and they even remove the troutfrom some popular fishing lakes

they even..为完整独立句子，应与主句biologists are..平行，但逻辑上是与 states cut…平行. 且句子平行，they应优先指代主句主语即biologists，逻辑错

lThe discovery that glass can be expanded and it is able to be shaped by human breath.

并列句子和主句的主语并列（discovery）,逻辑错，应是与宾语从句并列

（是在不记得是具体的题号了）
个人理解，欢迎拍砖

作者: nemiah 时间: 2011-7-13 20:48
这题是选D吗？

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