Drawing
on her roots in a society that has a strong tradition of story-telling and oral
renditions of the past, Indian writer Suniti Namjoshi incorporates many types
of literature into her writing: including historical texts, legends, and
even nursery rhymes from both Indian as well as European sources.
A.
writing:
including historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian
as well as
B.
writing:
historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and
C.
writing:
these include historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both
Indian and
D.
writing,
which includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from
Indian as well as
E.
writing
that includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from
Indian and
":" has the meaning of including, so the 'including' is redundent.
plus:
both A and B
not both A as well as B
both..and 结构排除了 A D
E主谓不一致
C these不可以这样指代 而且有:
指代会重复
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