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标题: GWD-9-1 或者 GWD-9-Q1 争议解决!又完结了一道题 [打印本页]

作者: kevintown    时间: 2008-7-28 06:13
标题: GWD-9-1 或者 GWD-9-Q1 争议解决!又完结了一道题

A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer’s Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man.

 

A.       Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man[CH1] 

B.       Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison

C.       a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

D.       a Black American[CH2] —the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

E.       a Black American—the others being Richard Wright’s Native Son and Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man

AC,前面说的是小说,后面others说的是人 文章重心强调的是书,破折号补充说明也应该是书

B including不对,one of … , including 3本书不是同一个one of

有争议说B正确,其实不然,犯了下面所说的2个错误

有争议说B正确,其实不然,犯了下面所说的2个错误

CDEa Black Americanthe other being

Dthe orthers being,表达不简洁

因为E不仅平行

破折号后面接the others being是常见用法

(白勇P8)可以引出:做补充说明的句子或短语、同位语、插入语、列举的事物。

Nytimes 例子:

Out of five sales advertised to be held only one resulted in a sale -- all the others being adjourned.

A panel of thirty was exhausted, out of whom but five were sworn--four of the others being peremptorily challenged, and twenty-one being set aside for cause.

而且书名大多用所有格表述,且与前面一致

Along with Richard Wright’s Native Son and Ralph Ellison’s The Invisible Man, publication of Jean Toomer’s creative montage Cane (1923) was a defining moment in Harlem’s era of artistic experimentation.


作者: kevintown    时间: 2008-7-28 06:25

而且特别注意,前面有数字提示,of 30 people,4 was,the others being很常用

Five of the workmen had to be released by the firemen- the others being able to get out themselves;


作者: dingxiang    时间: 2008-7-28 09:03

不错

one of... the other being...确实是一种常见的用法

B迷惑人的地方在于americans,所以我做题的时候毫不犹豫的把CDE给删了。

虽然E从各方面都很好很平行,但我看着这个a black american还是不顺眼。不知道这算哪门子用法

btw

楼主啥时候考啊

貌似我的进度跟你差不多


作者: freedomzhx    时间: 2008-9-10 22:04
以下是引用dingxiang在2008-7-28 9:03:00的发言:

不错

one of... the other being...确实是一种常见的用法

B迷惑人的地方在于americans,所以我做题的时候毫不犹豫的把CDE给删了。

虽然E从各方面都很好很平行,但我看着这个a black american还是不顺眼。不知道这算哪门子用法

btw

楼主啥时候考啊

貌似我的进度跟你差不多

确实啊,我也是这个问题,其他都很好,就是这个a black american就是感觉不对


作者: candy_yue    时间: 2008-9-16 01:40
同问,为什么是a black american??? 三本书三个人写的,不是应该是 black americans么?
作者: candy_yue    时间: 2008-9-16 02:15
谢谢~~
作者: iamwuyan    时间: 2008-9-16 13:42
这题争议好大, 可以参考一下以前的帖子http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=23&replyid=538389&id=58785&page=1&skin=0&Star=1
作者: qingyz    时间: 2008-10-15 21:46
我倒感觉破折号就近补充说明the three best novels,而including符合一贯考点。无论如何three best novels ever written by a Black American也说不通呀。
作者: wellner    时间: 2009-1-8 04:24
thanks!
作者: wellner    时间: 2009-1-8 23:32
多谢楼主解答!
作者: nerakuhs    时间: 2009-1-18 17:43
以下是引用candy_yue在2008-9-16 1:40:00的发言:
同问,为什么是a black american??? 三本书三个人写的,不是应该是 black americans么?

如果是black americans的话,变成了 每本书都是由多名作者完成的。用a black american则是说 每本书都是一个作者,分别是JT,RW, RW。

a novel by a black american 的复数是  novels by a black american。这样避免歧义。

OG11上有道题,是说平均多少人有自行车,也是用单数a bycicle,如果用bycicles,则会产生歧义,变成拥有不止一辆自行车,具体哪道题我忘记了,找找看~~


作者: latuan1982    时间: 2009-1-19 12:36

obviously E is the correct one

http://www.cuydem.com/PDF/African%20Americans.pdf

one of the three best novels ever written by an African American. The others are:. Richard Wright’s “Native Son”, and Ralph Ellison’s “Invisible Man” ...


作者: 河西学校    时间: 2009-3-3 01:04
新PREP里出来了,答案是E。
作者: tonylin0824    时间: 2009-3-17 23:01
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作者: mjiehu    时间: 2009-3-18 03:04
Jean Toomer’s Cane
Richard Wright’s Native Son
and Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man


作者: vivian0331    时间: 2009-3-31 00:13
能再详细讲解一下么?谢谢!
作者: 天蝎座1107    时间: 2009-3-31 00:40

这个题我是这么想的。

1.破折号的意义就是解释说明。这里的破折号就是去说明three best novels 注意是three

2.按照我前面所有做过的including题,无一例外是remedies+逗号+including, approaches+逗号+including 这里including后面的内容就是remedies和approaches的全部内容。例如XXXremedies, including establishing XX, closingXX and reducing XX. 就是说remedies的所有内容是这三项。B选项如果是the others including XX and XX 就是对的。因为如果用了including就要说出three best novels的全部三个是什么,然而其中一个作品已经是主语,那么后面就应该是the others including而不是单独including.

3.A C D都错在前面说作品,后面the others改成说作者

4.至于是a black American 还是black Americans我觉得并不是重点 这个题的考点首先在于大家能不能意识到破折号后面是要说明谁 而且要注意主语是作品

如果用了black Americans---the others being XX&XX 那么前面的那个主语应该是作者 而不是作品 我认为这里的black Americans完全是来迷惑考生的 其实a black American 还是black Americans都无关紧要 因为主语已经是作品了 后面的the others必定是另外的作品 破折号后面也必定是来解释three best novels 和a balck American 还是black Americans无关


作者: lcy19812000    时间: 2009-4-26 15:40

这道题的a black American用法很规范。

规则:多个事物的共同特征,此特征可用单数表法。

具体的构句方法是:复数主语+复数谓语+单数宾/表语。

本题中:novels(复数主语) written by(复数) a black American(单数)

OG10-167(OG11-V-59)

Neanderthals had a vocal tract that resembled those of the apes and so were probably without language, a shortcoming that may explain why they were supplanted by our own species.

(A) Neanderthals had a vocal tract that resembled those of the apes

(B) Neanderthals had a vocal tract resembling an ape’s(正确答案)

(C) The vocal tracts of Neanderthals resembled an ape’s

(D) The Neanderthal’s vocal tracts resembled the apes’B

(E) The vocal tracts of the Neanderthals resembled those of the apes

OG10-252( 14.      (25197-!-item-!-188;#058&002294))

Three out of every four automobile owners in the United States also own a bicycle.

(A) Three out of every four automobile owners in the United States also own a bicycle.(正确答案)

(B) Out of every four, three automobile owners in the United States also owns a bicycle.

(C) Bicycles are owned by three out of every four owners of automobiles in the United States.

(D) In the United States, three out of every four automobile owners owns bicycles.
   
A)考点:词组。多个事物的共同特征,此特征可用单数表法。本题表示“四个美国家庭就有三个各自拥有一辆自行车”,谓语单复数形式需根据主语three out of four automobile owners中的three决定用复数,如果是one out of four owners,谓语就要用单数。表示“每四个家庭共同拥有一辆自行车”的方法是:there is one bicycle for (every) four automobile owners.同理,is是根据one决定的,可变为there are three bicycles for…,根据three用复数。参见OG10-167(OG11-V-59)OG10-89(D-22)

(E) Out of every four owners of automobiles in the United States, bicycles are also owned by three.


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作者: vivian0331    时间: 2009-7-2 22:21
虎虎和lcy的解释融合在一起就非常完美了。
作者: raphael1234    时间: 2009-7-10 11:09

up


作者: Brilliance    时间: 2009-8-1 16:21
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作者: 斯咏    时间: 2009-8-5 11:43
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作者: markhuang111    时间: 2009-8-5 13:29
以下是引用nerakuhs在2009/1/18 17:43:00的发言:

如果是black americans的话,变成了 每本书都是由多名作者完成的。用a black american则是说 每本书都是一个作者,分别是JT,RW, RW。

a novel by a black american 的复数是  novels by a black american。这样避免歧义。

OG11上有道题,是说平均多少人有自行车,也是用单数a bycicle,如果用bycicles,则会产生歧义,变成拥有不止一辆自行车,具体哪道题我忘记了,找找看~~

niu~活学活用,正解!
作者: ray_anne    时间: 2009-9-20 21:33
一开始就看B里的including特别不顺眼,不过又不确定a black american,现在恍然大悟了~
作者: smthbigur    时间: 2009-9-21 08:48

没啥好争议的。呵呵


作者: jackcxp    时间: 2009-12-11 21:38
17楼的切中要害!
作者: tankobe    时间: 2009-12-19 16:41
这道题的a black American用法很规范。
规则:多个事物的共同特征,此特征可用单数表法。
具体的构句方法是:复数主语+复数谓语+单数宾/表语。
本题中:novels(复数主语) written by(复数) a black American(单数)
OG10-167(OG11-V-59)

Neanderthals had a vocal tract that resembled those of the apes and so were probably without language, a shortcoming that may explain why they were supplanted by our own species.

(A) Neanderthals had a vocal tract that resembled those of the apes

(B) Neanderthals had a vocal tract resembling an ape’s(正确答案)

(C) The vocal tracts of Neanderthals resembled an ape’s

(D) The Neanderthal’s vocal tracts resembled the apes’B

(E) The vocal tracts of the Neanderthals resembled those of the apes

OG10-252( 14.      (25197-!-item-!-188;#058&002294))
Three out of every four automobile owners in the United States also own a bicycle.
(A) Three out of every four automobile owners in the United States also own a bicycle.(正确答案)
(B) Out of every four, three automobile owners in the United States also owns a bicycle.
(C) Bicycles are owned by three out of every four owners of automobiles in the United States.
(D) In the United States, three out of every four automobile owners owns bicycles.
  (A)考点:词组。多个事物的共同特征,此特征可用单数表法。本题表示“四个美国家庭就有三个各自拥有一辆自行车”,谓语单复数形式需根据主语three out of four automobile owners中的three决定用复数,如果是one out of four owners,谓语就要用单数。表示“每四个家庭共同拥有一辆自行车”的方法是:there is one bicycle for (every) four automobile owners.同理,is是根据one决定的,可变为there are three bicycles for…,根据three用复数。参见OG10-167(OG11-V-59)和OG10-89(D-22)。
(E) Out of every four owners of automobiles in the United States, bicycles are also owned by three.

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-- by 会员 lcy19812000 (2009/4/26 15:40:00)





lcy发表了很多“原创性”的观点啊!强烈支持你....

且这类句子似乎不能改为被动语态:

a vocal tract is owned by Neanderthals ;a bicycle is owned by three out of four owners.好象是在说一个tract/bicycle同时被很多人拥有。而原句的意思是每个人都拥有一个。

如果改成复数:vocal tracts are owned by Neanderthals ;bicycles are owned by three out of four owners.又好像一个人同时拥有很多个tracts/bicycles;还是不符合原义。


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