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标题: 请教GWD5-18 [打印本页]
作者: sunnyeva    时间: 2008-7-17 13:13
标题: 请教GWD5-18

    

Q18:


    

In California today,
Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, compared
with a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.


    

 


    
  1. In California today, Hispanics under the
         age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, compared with a decade
         ago, when it was about 35 percent.
  2. Of the Californians under the age of
         eighteen, today more than 43 percent of them are Hispanic, compared with a
         decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.
  3. Today, more than 43 percent of
         Californians under the age of eighteen are Hispanic, compared with about
         35 percent a decade ago.
  4. Today, compared to a decade ago,
         Californians who are Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more
         than 43 percent, whereas it was about 35 percent.
  5. Today, Hispanics under the age of
         eighteen in California
         account for more than 43 percent, unlike a decade ago, when it was about
         35 percent.








这一题选C。我想问问NN们，其他的几个选项有多少错误。因为作这一题的时候超级糊涂，用时很长而且还选错了，现在仍然糊涂中。我原来选的A。所以想把这一题完全弄明白。麻烦好心人了。
作者: AlienX    时间: 2008-7-17 14:29
A, B, D and E中的it好像沒有指代對象...
作者: sunnyeva    时间: 2008-7-17 16:10
谢谢AlienX，我还想问问，选项中的when用的对不对
作者: dxu730    时间: 2009-10-7 04:11
I think they use "when" correctly. 
作者: singletonboy    时间: 2009-10-7 05:12

In California today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.

 

A.      In California today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, compared with a decade ago（比较不平行）, when it （单数，无指代对象）was about 35 percent.
            

B.       Of the Californians under the age of eighteen（awkward）, today more than 43 percent of them (无指代对象)are Hispanic, compared with a decade ago
        （比较不平行）, when it was about 35 percent.
            

C.       Today, more than 43 percent of Californians under the age of eighteen are Hispanic, compared with about 35 percent a decade ago.
            

D.      Today, compared to
        （习惯搭配错误）a decade ago, Californians who are Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, whereas
        （逻辑意思模糊）it
        （无指代对象）was about 35 percent.
            

E.       Today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen in California account for more than 43 percent, unlike a decade ago, when it
        （无指代对象）was about 35 percent.

open to discuss





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