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While Hans Holbein the Younger is most often identified with his English portraits, scholars have long been recognizing him as a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist and who was fundamental in synthesizing the novelties of the Italian Renaissance with the rational tradition of Northern Europe.
(A) been recognizing him as a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist and who
(B) been recognizing him for being a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist and he
(C) recognized him as a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist who
(D) recognized him as a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist and he
(E) recognized him for being a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist and who
题目选C没有疑义,但对解释有点疑问: 马上要考试了，这题目还没有人问过，请大家指教！谢谢
A. As介宾短语后两个and出现，错误
为什么“as后面不能够加两个and"呢?就是表示While Hans Holbein 既是a superb draftsman 又是 a remarkably versatile artist呢？
B. For being a draftsman用法错误，应用as；and he was fundamental…使该句的主句出现两套完整的主谓，构成run-on错误
这里为什么是“run-on错误”呢？and he was fundamental在语法角度是可以看成和前面主句scholars have long been recognizing him as a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist 并列的。我觉得错误应该是“句意改变”，原来是who从句修饰前面的artist，是修饰成分；现在成了和主句并列成分了，句式和句意都改变了。这才是主要错误啊！
D. 同B选项，and he was… 构成run-on错误
E. For being a draftsman用法错误，应用as，and who…中的and多余。
A. As介宾短语后两个and出现，错误
为什么“as后面不能够加两个and"呢?就是表示While Hans Holbein 既是a superb draftsman 又是 a remarkably versatile artist呢？
B. For being a draftsman用法错误，应用as；and he was fundamental…使该句的主句出现两套完整的主谓，构成run-on错误
这里为什么是“run-on错误”呢？and he was fundamental在语法角度是可以看成和前面主句scholars have long been recognizing him as a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist 并列的。我觉得错误应该是“句意改变”，原来是who从句修饰前面的artist，是修饰成分；现在成了和主句并列成分了，句式和句意都改变了。这才是主要错误啊！
马上要考试了，这题目还没有人问过，请大家指教！谢谢
不大明白，楼主是不是理解成he指代scholars,但scholars是复数阿，即使是they是不是and前也要加逗号呢，请指教
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