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标题: 一道语法问题 [打印本页]

作者: luyinan 时间: 2008-7-1 16:16
标题: 一道语法问题

Unlike spices that are used in cooking，in using spices for medicine，they are taken in large quantities in order to treat particular maladies.

请问划线部分哪错了谢谢！！

作者: tamama 时间: 2008-7-1 17:02

比較結構的原則之一是比較的對象要有可比行,概念相等,形式平行,

原句想要比較的對象是spices used in cooking VS spices used for medicine

而句子把後者變成一個介詞短語,比較對象成了spices used in cooking VS they

但是they指前者還是後者呢?指代不清.

我把句子改寫一遍:Unlike spices (that are) used in cooking, spices used for medicine are taken in large quantities in order to threat particular maladies.

如果有錯請指正!

作者: luyinan 时间: 2008-7-1 17:43
ok thanks

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