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标题: [求助]AA044,请教结论究竟该如何总结 [打印本页]

作者: springsound    时间: 2008-5-12 12:15
标题: [求助]AA044,请教结论究竟该如何总结

题目如下:

44. The following is part of a business plan created by the management of the Megamart grocery store.

“Our total sales have increased this year by 20 percent since we added a pharmacy section to our grocery store. Clearly, the customer’s main concern is the convenience afforded by one-stop shopping. The surest way to increase our profits over the next couple of years, therefore, is to add a clothing department along with an automotive supplies and repair shop. We should also plan to continue adding new departments and services, such as a restaurant and a garden shop, in subsequent years. Being the only store in the area that offers such a range of services will give us a competitive advantage over other local stores.”

感觉这道题的结论很分散啊。第三句The surest way to increase our profits...和接下来那一句we should also plan to continue adding new departments...看起来都象是结论。但是这个结论未免也太长了……在开头段里面要如何总结才好呢?

请NN赐教。


[此贴子已经被作者于2008-6-2 16:24:14编辑过]

作者: springsound    时间: 2008-6-2 16:25

自己顶一下.

请好心人赐教~~~






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