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以下是引用lingxia在2003-12-25 11:32:00的发言：
能不能这样倒装的？
So secretly installed and operated in the Kennedy Oval Office was a recording system that even Theodore C. Sorensen, the White House counsel, did not know it existed.

是不是因为so that ，such that 倒装时，so，such必须放句首，才把E排除的？

好像越来越糊涂了

以下是引用Snazzy在2003-12-25 13:38:00的发言：
1, i can't understand why u want to use reverse, making it tedious. normally, when the subject is too long to be clear, reverse is preferred.

2, the subject is 'the recording system', very simple, no modifier. when it's reversed, it becomes really awkward 画蛇添足

E改成：So secretly was a recording system installed and operated in the Kennendy Oval Office that....应该可以吧。

So secretly installed and operated in the Kennedy Oval Office was a recording system that even Theodore C. Sorensen, the White House counsel, did not know it existed.
这种全倒装，被动助动词was和被动的主动词 installed and operated 分割开不知道行不行？

以下是引用tianwan在2004-5-30 22:37:00的发言：

E改成：So secretly was a recording system installed and operated in the Kennendy Oval Office that....应该可以吧。

我覺得還是不正確 so secretly 是形容installed and operated 不可以分開

當然可以這是正確的句子(如果需要倒裝的話)

這種倒裝就是分詞提前的倒裝

分詞提前 (participle proposing) ，be動詞後面的分詞可以連同補語或修飾語一起提前移到句首。分詞提前結果會使be動詞留在句尾，因此主動詞必須倒序

大家可以參考一下177

177. So poorly educated and trained are many young recruits to the United States work force that many business executives fear this country will lose its economic preeminence.

需不需要用so＋adj的倒装我觉得主要看是不是特别强调adj所表达的程度，而不是看主语是长是短。如OG－20：...so abundant has capital been for commercial real estate that investors regularly scour the contry for areas in which to build.所以，需不需要用倒装主要看句意是不是突出强调adj的意思。

这题如果倒装的话我觉得应该是So secretly installed and operated was a recording system in the Kennedy Oval Office that even Theodore C. Sorensen, the White House counsel, did not know it existed.

只有倒装问题吗？可是OG的解释说E是cannot be logically connected to the remainder of the sentence啊，为什么不能跟后面的内容向连接？

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我觉得E把倒装和so ... that结构拆得乱七八糟，所以逻辑读不通.

我的看法是還是得加that 吧，唸起來(我純粹是用感覺)如果只有so卻沒有that ，是很怪的

thus cannot be logically connected to the remainder of the sentence.仍然不理解，还请那位NN再帮忙讲一下，非常感谢

只有倒装问题吗？可是OG的解释说E是cannot be logically connected to the remainder of the sentence啊，为什么不能跟后面的内容向连接？

把原来的谓语动词变成分词并提前到句首,倒装后原来的主语变成宾语,使原来指代主语的it 不知指代谁

这道题OG11的解释也是 the inverted word order does not grammatically fit into the rest of the sentence. 请注意是 grammatically,所以我觉得E 的倒装根本不应有that 的内容。因为之前已经是完整的一句话了。而凭空多出了一个that ,以为会是修饰system。多出了that 从句，显得很突兀。就算是so ...that 结构，但是中间插入了is , 已经打破了原有的so that 结构。这是我的理解。

以下是引用bryan0806在2004/12/14 18:13:00的发言：
我觉得15楼rhod  已经说了

基本上 E 的Installed and operated so secretly in the Kennedy Oval Office was a recording system that

这样的结构已经不是  so.....thant 的结构了  倒装的话应该是

So secretly installed and operated was a recording system in ....that 而且也没有倒装的必要

所以E中的THAT 已经不是强调SO 的结果  而成了定语从句形容 a recording system "White House counsel 所不知道的一个录音系统"

但是这样就不知道怎么和前面的句子结合

这是我觉得OG的意思吧

大家意见呢 ?

这里的that 引导的是定语从句（was a sysytem that even T.C did no konw it existed）

定语从句中 that 必需充当成分而这里的it已经补出了that 充当的宾语（T.C did no konw system existed）因而不能用that连接这两个句子

所以GMAC 会说 that 从句 cannot be logically connected to the remainder of the sentence.