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作者: hsuehM    时间: 2008-1-17 00:16
标题: one sc question in gwd ,need help~

Q1:

So dogged were Frances Perkins’ investigations of the garment industry, and her lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent, Alfred E. Smith and Franklin D. Roosevelt recruited Perkins to work within the government, rather than as a social worker.

 

  1. and her lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent,
  2. and lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent, so that
  3. her lobbying for wage and hour reform persistent, that
  4. lobbying for wage and hour reform was so persistent,
  5. so persistent her lobbying for wage and hour reform, that

the key is E

in my view ,to E,before the word so there should exist a conj "and "

meanwhile where is the mistake by B?

anyone could give me an explanation? thank u~~~


作者: hsuehM    时间: 2008-1-17 00:28
sorry,i don't mean B but c,
作者: hsuehM    时间: 2008-1-17 00:34
maybe c is worse than E only cuz there is no SO and no AND; but in E how could two sentence parallel without conj "and",and i know that the verb is omitted.
作者: neo1001    时间: 2008-1-17 00:35
B不对的地方:

1)一开始”So dogged were。。。“里面已经有了一个so,B的so that明显语法上就不对了(so...that,而不是so...so that..)
2)一开始"So dogged were..."用倒装的形式,"so persistent..."也应该用倒装的形式,而且两者都用"so" 开始,很好地和后面的“that”连在一起

至于你说的E里应该有一个and,语法上确实是这样,但是相比之下,ABCD的错误更大,只能选E

(原文在这里:http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9F0CE0D81E3AF937A25752C1A965958260, 里面so persistent前的确是有个and的)



作者: neo1001    时间: 2008-1-17 00:37
C的话,前面的so dogged 和后面的that连上,可是中间"her lobbying for wage and hour reform persistent",语法上就不知道作为什么成分存在了

作者: hsuehM    时间: 2008-1-17 00:37
ur explanation makes sense ,thank u so much !
作者: hsuehM    时间: 2008-1-17 00:43

cool,i found the original sentence finally

Penny Colman, who has written about Dorothea Dix and Fannie Lou Hamer, is equally thorough, fair and candid in her treatment of Frances Perkins. A native of Massachusetts, Perkins graduated from Mount Holyoke College in 1902 and became a professional social worker in the New York charity world in which Eleanor Roosevelt volunteered. So dogged were her investigations of the garment industry, and so persistent her lobbying for wage and hour reform, that she was first recruited by Gov. Al Smith, and later by Gov. Franklin D. Roosevelt, to work within New York State government, rather than against it. This prepared her to be President Roosevelt's Secretary of Labor, a job which then encompassed health and welfare as well as labor. Perkins's tenure witnessed the greatest period of organization in American labor history. She unequivocally supported the right to organize and bargain collectively, and used her considerable influence with the President to prevent him from restraining strikes by longshoremen and automobile workers. Yet she always had more confidence in the Federal Government than in organized labor as an instrument of social justice, and she devoted most of her efforts to protecting workers through maximum-hour and minimum-wage regulations






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