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标题: AA105的疑问 [打印本页]

作者: 寂寞的自由    时间: 2003-12-14 17:33
标题: AA105的疑问
AA No.105
The following appeared in an editorial from a newspaper serving the town of Saluda.
“ The Saluda Consolidated High school offers over 200 different courses from which its students can choose. A much smaller private school down the street offers a basic curriculum of only 80 different courses, but it consistently sends a higher proportion of its graduating seniors on to college than Consolidated does. By eliminating at least half of the courses offered there and focusing on a basic curriculum, we could improve student performance at Consoidated and also save many tax dollars.”

想问问大家,黑体字部分SAVE MANY TAX DOLLARS这个表达,在原文中存在着什么重要的逻辑错误吗?因为我想到了只是两点错误,如果这个也是一点的话,正好三点错误,谢谢大家

作者: Vanna    时间: 2003-12-15 07:57
我觉的这个题错误不一定非要写save tax, 错误很多,比如可以写:

1. 两个学校的可比性.
2.   basic curriculum 是否为a higher proportion of its graduating seniors 的唯一原因.
3.   评价 student performance 是否通过 higher proportion .

如果要写tax的话,可以说:

tax是通过课程的数量来交,还是学时数,学习的科目,老师的不同,学生的数量?还有其它的条件等...文中似乎不得而知,且会随着改课而变化...所以...太笼统...







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作者: 寂寞的自由    时间: 2003-12-18 06:06
谢谢VANNA的帮助~~~




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