标题: 另一道大于700分的难度的语法题 [打印本页] 作者: 寂寞的自由 时间: 2003-12-13 15:50 标题: 另一道大于700分的难度的语法题 35． A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass. B--àD （A）A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star， or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage， depending on mass （B）After passing through a red giant stage， depending on its mass， a star will compress itself into a white dwarf， a neutron star， or a black hole。 （C）After passing through a red giant stage， a star's mass will determine if it compresses itself into a white dwarf， a neutron star， or a black hole （D）Mass determines whether a star， after passing through the red giant stage， will compress itself into a white dwarf， a neutron star， or a black hole. （E）The mass of a star， after passing through the red giant stage， will determine whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf， a neutron star， or a black hole 请问大家，A和B错在哪里啊？？？谢谢大家作者: 寂寞的自由 时间: 2003-12-13 15:52
很明显A和B的DEPENDING ON MASS的逻辑主语同句子的主句主语是一致的啊？？！作者: lizaz 时间: 2003-12-13 16:36
depending on its mass有歧义，是after passing through a red giant stage depending on its mass还是a star will compress itself into ....or a black hole depending on its mass作者: qww 时间: 2003-12-14 10:51
这题的正确答案是什么？我选D.作者: ecsniffer 时间: 2003-12-14 11:04
我也选D A：it指代有问题（a star &a white dwarf, a neutron star， or a black hole） depending on mass修饰也有歧义，修饰compress, passes又或者是a red giant stage B:depending on mass修饰歧义 感觉D读上去就很爽。 请指正！ 作者: Allen 时间: 2003-12-14 12:00
A 和 B 中 "depending on mass" or "depending on its mass" 所修饰的对象有奇异.---偶个人之见.作者: Snazzy 时间: 2003-12-14 13:03
yes, D作者: 寂寞的自由 时间: 2003-12-14 13:34
yes, the right answer is D. Thanks everyone作者: 海海 时间: 2003-12-14 14:18 -- 另一道大于700分的难度的语法题 35． a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass. b--àd （a）a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star， or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage， depending on mass （b）after passing through a red giant stage， depending on its mass， a star will compress itself into a white dwarf， a neutron star， or a black hole。 （c）after passing through a red giant stage， a star's mass will determine if it compresses itself into a white dwarf， a neutron star， or a black hole （d）mass determines whether a star， after passing through the red giant stage， will compress itself into a white dwarf， a neutron star， or a black hole. （e）the mass of a star， after passing through the red giant stage， will determine whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf， a neutron star， or a black hole 请问大家，a和b错在哪里啊？？？谢谢大家
我也选D A：it指代有问题（a star &a white dwarf, a neutron star， or a black hole） depending on mass修饰也有歧义，修饰compress, passes又或者是a red giant stage B:depending on mass修饰歧义 感觉D读上去就很爽。 请指正！
我觉得问题是出在A和B中的depending分词结构不能清晰地表达出一种原句希望表达出来的因果关系. 原句希望说的是因为mass的不同, star可能会变成a white dwarf， a neutron star， or a black hole. 但是A和B的分词结构可能引起的歧义是: 因为mass的不同, star可能会变成a white dwarf， a neutron star， or a black hole, 或者可能干脆就不发生变化. . D把因果关系表达地非常清晰, 所以读上去很爽.
