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Building a new research center
No one could deny the fact that business is playing the most important role in the modern world, especially while worldwide trading became more and more common currently. Nonetheless, in some part of the world, agriculture is still the strongest domain which is holding country. I consider the business is the basis of a country all the time, despite of the current country or the one in the future.
As the concept that I mentioned before, no country could live without commerce. A recent research has revealed that the most powerful country whether at the time or throughout history, isn’t standing constantly without a durable commerce. The Ming Dynasty, one of the most influential dynasties in the history of china, had a commercial path from Eastern Europe to the southern Asia, and also trading commodities with Western Europe. United States, the only super country in modern world, in addition, is playing the most dominant role in universal business. Therefore, building a business research center is crucial for the development of our country.
A new business research center will additionally brings many more opportunities of job. For now, over amount of millions people are still live under poverty. They work hard every day and back to home with exhausted bodies every night-but still could not afford their children to go to college. As the accomplishment of this center, the commercial status will become bright. Plenty of Business Company will be built and more and more people will work at business instead of working at a small farm with the low pay. Consequently, our agriculture will also get ease.
As I said before, sometimes, agriculture is the base of a country as a replacement for industry. A new research center of farming could transport the most advanced technology into the every corner of the country. Farmers will no longer work at farm by themselves. As a substitute, the modern machine will take care of everything, which would raise the efficiency of farming.
Nevertheless, a hard agriculture couldn’t continuously hold the country forever in such rapid-growing world. The universe will become more and more based on the commercial field. As a conclusion, building a new business research center is a much more significant way than building one about agriculture.
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