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作者: coldfire6 时间: 2007-9-8 00:43
标题: [讨论]11OG 36
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作者: coldfire6 时间: 2007-9-8 00:46

我的帖子呢？

作者: coldfire6 时间: 2007-9-8 00:51

36．
What was as remarkable as the development of
the compact disc has been the use of the new
technology to revitalize，in
better sound than was ever before possible，some of the classic recorded performances of the pre-LP era．

(A) What was as remarkable as the development of
the compact disc

(B) The thing that was as remarkable as
developing the compact disc

(D) Developing the compact disc has been none the
less remarkable than

(E) Development of the compact disc has been no
less remarkable as

Parallelism + Rhetorical
construction

This
sentence compares the development of the compact disc with the use 0fthe new
technology；

these
two phrases must use parallel grammatical structures to make the comparison
clear．

Unnecessary
words disrupt the parallelism and clutter the meaning；they must be omitted．The

correct
idiom for comparison must be used．

A What was is awkward and unnecessary；construction uses a verb tense that does not agree
with has been．

B The thing that was is wordy and unnecessary,
and it introduces a verb tense that does not agree with has been．

C Correct．No less remarkable than、s the clearest，most concise and idiomatically correct wav for this sentence
to introduce the comparison between the development and the use．

D Developing is not parallel to the use；nonetheless followed by than is not a correct idiom
for comparison．

E Without its article，development is not parallel to the use；no less．．．as is not a correct idiom

for
comparison．

The correct answer is C．

我觉得这个题目很诡异，包括平行结构对称，主句完整，时态，习惯用法。
主句不完整（即主语谓语缺省）应该是很大一宗罪， C没有主语，怎么还是正确的？大家谈谈做这题的时候是怎么排除优选的好么？

作者: rattledrum 时间: 2007-9-8 14:03

What was as remarkable as the development of the compact disc
has been the use of the new technology to revitalize，in better sound than was ever before possible，some of the classic recorded performances of the pre-LP era．

(A) What was
as remarkable as the development of the compact disc 时态错

(B) The thing that was as remarkable as developing the compact disc 时态错

(C) No less remarkable than the development of the compact disc 倒装：the development of the compact disc has been no less remarkable than the use of the new technology -> 平行对称 n. of n.

(D) Developing the compact disc has been none the less remarkable than 无此搭配

(E) Development of the compact disc has been no less remarkable as 无此搭配

A/B错，时态不对

建议LZ去看菜鸟语法手册。

作者: eaglegrace 时间: 2007-9-8 15:22
平行：development of 与use of BD错
时态：不应该用过去时。AB错
省略：has been不能出现两次 DE错
还有：no less than固定搭配 DE错
楼主认为的主语缺少是不对的，因为此句是倒装句，主语在后面，the use of the new
technology

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作者: wenyuanalive 时间: 2009-7-23 16:40
我也有问题~ so as to不是可以做目的的么

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