102. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating
them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives,
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinated them with her narratives and
Logical predication + Rhetorical constructionLogical predication + Rhetorical construction
This sentence awkwardly presents two phrases intended to modify Beatrix Potter and loses the clarity and logic of the meaning. In the original sentence, these modifiers sound choppy and create too much separation between the subject, Beatrix Potter, and the verb capitalized. Beginning the sentence with
in her book illustrations and following that phrase with the relative clause which she carefully coordinated with her narratives allows the subject, Beatrix Potter, to be united with the verb, capitalized, for a stronger main clause.
A The modifying elements are poorly placed and leave the subject too far from the verb
B Phrase carefully coordinating ... illogically modifies the noun that immediately precedes it
(book illustrations); Potter, not the illustrations, did the coordinating; awkward and unclear
C Correct. The correct placement of the modifying elements makes this sentence easier to understand; the use of which clearly links the two elements.
D Carefully coordinated ... absurdly modifies
Beatrix Potter rather than her illustrations
E Them cannot refer to book illustrations because
the plural noun is the object of the preposition
in; the relationships among the parts of the
sentence are unclear
The correct answer is C.
请问答案解释中的 E Them cannot refer to book illustrations because the plural noun is the object of the preposition in; the relationships among the parts of the sentence are unclear Them cannot refer to book illustrations because the plural noun is the object of the preposition in 请大家帮解释下这个语法现象，没搞懂~~另外E选项个人感觉可以作为答案阿~~ 欢迎讨论！~~
E Them cannot refer to book illustrations because
the plural noun is the object of the preposition
in; the relationships among the parts of the
sentence are unclear
Them cannot refer to book illustrations because the plural noun is the object of the preposition in
请大家帮解释下这个语法现象，没搞懂~~另外E选项个人感觉可以作为答案阿~~
欢迎讨论！~~
看来rain兄和我复习进度满一致的。只是我没有深探OG解释E的这句话，差点放过了一个由代表性的考点，汗。。
我觉得E首先那个and不对，本来coodinate是一个次一级的动词，结果被and提拔到了和capitalized一个档次。
其次我觉得(E)这句话顺过来是这样的:
BP carefully coordinated them with her narratives and... in her book illustrasions.
所以如果them指代illustrasions就变成了coordinated illustrasions in illustrasions不合逻辑。
我的浅见，望兄明查。
呵呵 楼上的spyder 咱俩的复习进度貌似也一样.
说下OG这个题,RAIN貌似把选项打错了.B选项不是这个题的,正确选项是你打的D选项.
这道题我也没弄明白E的解释.
期待NN.
不好意思昨天太忙没上来看看~~
错误的题目选项我纠正过来了，说句题外话，我输入的时候没错阿~~发现CD的系
统有点不稳定，尤其法帖的时候，还有字体的更改~~
spyder兄的第一个解释很精辟，但是第二个解释有点牵强：
其次我觉得(E)这句话顺过来是这样的:
BP carefully coordinated them with her narratives and... in her book illustrasions.
所以如果them指代illustrasions就变成了coordinated illustrasions in illustrasions不合逻辑。
如果按你这么说那么正确答案
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
中的which又指代什么？？顺过来不还是跟E一样了么？
期待继续探讨~~另外我发现SC版最近怎么这么冷清！
另外我想问的是E中的解释：
E Them cannot refer to book illustrations because
the plural noun is the object of the preposition
in; the relationships among the parts of the
sentence are unclear
是说them不能指代book illustrations 是因为book illustrations是介词 in 的宾语~~
为什么是介词的宾语就不能被指代了？？？求解！
不好意思昨天太忙没上来看看~~
错误的题目选项我纠正过来了，说句题外话，我输入的时候没错阿~~发现CD的系
统有点不稳定，尤其法帖的时候，还有字体的更改~~
spyder兄的第一个解释很精辟，但是第二个解释有点牵强：
其次我觉得(E)这句话顺过来是这样的:
BP carefully coordinated them with her narratives and... in her book illustrasions.
所以如果them指代illustrasions就变成了coordinated illustrasions in illustrasions不合逻辑。
如果按你这么说那么正确答案
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
中的which又指代什么？？顺过来不还是跟E一样了么？
期待继续探讨~~另外我发现SC版最近怎么这么冷清！
我认为这里C的which和E中的them地位是不一样的，这个非限定定语丛句就相当于出现在括号里一样，所以它其实是不干预主句的内容和逻辑的。
我的粗浅理解还望大家执指正。
ls强人阿！谢谢了！还要谢谢楼上几位！：）
白勇的语法找遍了大连也没找到卖的~~555：（
另外还有不到两个月就考了不知道还能有时间看白勇么~~我每天就6个小时看GMAT~~
PP我打算最后作，先做GWD，而且是要在OG过三遍的基础上~~可是我现在OG除了语法过了两遍外RC跟CR都进度缓慢阿~~~怎么办~~：（
另问GWD跟PP哪个更接近真题阿？~~
To rain: 白勇书CD上有下,http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=33&ID=102119&page=1
卓越网上也有的卖
还想问各位一个问题:B选项中说, coordinating修饰的illustrations, 所以不对,我不太明白的是,分词结构一般是修饰句子主语,在这里是BP,还是它前面的名词在这里是illustrations呢,我认为是修饰主语的,可是为什么OG解释说是修饰illustrations呢.还请各位指教
同问八楼.
OG的解释不对吧?
谁能讲讲B的错误
同问八楼.
OG的解释不对吧?
谁能讲讲B的错误
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