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标题: [原创]不是NN的SC大全之全划线题分类总结--恳请指点 [打印本页]

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:28
标题: [原创]不是NN的SC大全之全划线题分类总结--恳请指点

SC 大全全划线题集锦

由于本人看到全划线题就晕，因此将SC大全内的几乎90%的全划线题目提取出来，加以自我磨炼，并试图总结出一招对付其的招式。
根据统计，提出来的21题全划线题目中考核的关键点分布频率如下：
修辞合理性：7
分词引导的成分在句首与逻辑主语一致性问题：4
比较级的对象是否逻辑对等：3
分词/介词引导的修饰成分在句中引起的歧义：2
习惯搭配：2
平行：2
主谓搭配：1
代词指代：1
由此可以推出针对全划线题类型，ETS有偏爱的考核方式，目前看来，句子意思的逻辑合理性是主要的考核点，这里的逻辑合理性还不包括那些平时有特别锻炼的比较级的对象逻辑对等、平行的对等等具体的语法点问题，而且整个句子没有特别的语法错误，可其意思就是别扭。。。
因此，如果做全划线题，首要从句子结构出发、符合常理的可能含义出发（有时候A选项直接就是别扭的，会误导考生其真正的含义，例如下面的海怪那导题目），一定要理解作者实际希望表达的意思，然后还要在剩下的两个可能选项中，根据简洁原则选出最佳选项！
毫无疑问，全划线题的解答，理解为王！！！

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A special Japanese green tea called genmai-cha contains brown rice and is considered as a delicacy fit for a gourmet by most Japanese, though it is virtually unavailable outside Yokohama.

(A) A special Japanese green tea called genmai-cha contains brown rice and is considered as a delicacy fit for a gourmet by most Japanese, though it is virtually unavailable outside Yokohama. [Consider as 错误表达]

(B) Considered to be a delicacy fit for a gourmet by most Japanese, genmai-cha is a special green tea that contains brown rice, virtually unavailable outside Yokohama. [Consider to be 错误表达]

(C) A special Japanese green tea called genmai-cha contains brown rice and is considered a gourmet delicacy by most Japanese, though it is virtually unavailable outside Yokohama.

(D) Most Japanese consider genmai-cha, a special green tea which contains brown rice, as a delicacy virtually unavailable outside Yokohama.[ Consider as 错误表达]（C）

(E) Though virtually unavailable outside Yokohama（是否也需要考虑逻辑主语一致性？）, most Japanese consider genmai-cha, a special green tea that contains brown rice, a gourmet delicacy.[前置部分与逻辑主语不一致]

解题思路：A选项，即原文与正确选项唯一差异在consider as的错误修正，因此，本题解题思路在于读原文时应该发现consider这一常见的语法错误：加 as 或 to ==〉排除 A,B,D

在C和E之间，E的表达比较怪异，而且句子断开，插入成分多，==〉选C

另外（TBD）E选项的前半句可能存在连词though引导的成分没有完整主谓结构的错误（不是分确定。。）

考点：consider 用法

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作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:29
标题: 回复：（vivian_huang）不是NN的SC大全之全划线题分类...

31 star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.

(A) A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.[
分词在句末，可以做伴随动作，逻辑主语=句子主语或做伴随结果，有因果关系，没有看出A为什么错。。]

(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole. [参照OG 245的批判：黄色标出的部分is called a “squinting modifier”，引起修饰对象的歧义，既可修饰前面的stage，也可以修饰后面的a black hole]

(C) After passing through a red giant stage(错误修饰后面的中心词mass), a star’s mass will determine if it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

(D) Mass determines whether a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.（D）

(E) The mass of a star, after passing through the red giant stage（错误修饰mass）, will determine whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

解题思路：B，C，E选项的分词部分或介词引导的成分，放在句子中间，产生修饰对象可前可后的歧义；A选项为何不选未解？？

考点：修辞，分词引导或介词引导成分位于句中的修饰歧义

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:29
标题: 回复：（vivian_huang）回复：（vivian_huang）不是NN...

53 According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which has already been approaching 19 pounds a year, will achieve 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.

(A) According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which has already been approaching 19 pounds a year, will achieve 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.[主谓间有插入成分，且错误使用被动语态从句修饰US]

(B) Already approaching 19 pounds a year in the United States(与后面的逻辑主语：association不一致), the National Pasta Association predicts that per-capita consumption of pasta will reach 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.

(C) The National Pasta association predicts by the twenty-first century[介词短语位于句子中间，引起修饰歧义] that per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which[错误修饰US,逻辑应该修饰前面的per-capita Consumption] is already approaching 19 pounds a year, will reach 30 pounds a year.

(D) By the twenty-first century,[语法上修饰协会，逻辑上应该修饰consumption] the National Pasta Association predicts that per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, having already approached 19 pounds a year, will reach 30 pounds a year.（E）

(E) According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States is already approaching 19 pounds a year and will reach 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.[主谓间没有其它插入成分，简洁易懂]

解题思路：划线部分无明显的代词指代或主谓一致性或习惯用法等绝对性错误后，重点看句子结构，分析修饰的逻辑合理性

考点：修辞，介词引导成分位于句中的修饰歧义
==〉修饰的逻辑问题

句子特征：但凡考这种修辞逻辑的题目，选项中间的差异明显有介词短语或分词短语或非限定性定语从句的大挪移，此时应该重点关注修辞的逻辑合理性！

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:30
标题: 回复：（vivian_huang）不是NN的SC大全之全划线题分类...

57． Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.

(A) Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.[过去分词引导的前置结构与句子逻辑主语不一致]

(B) Added to the increase in hourly wages which had been requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits. .[过去分词引导的前置结构与句子逻辑主语不一致]

(C) The railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits added to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July.[不是十分清楚C选项的排除原因，但是that引导的从句修饰wages不简洁；added to the increase 可能有错，不如in addition to的表达更符合语法习惯？？？]

(D) In addition to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.（E）[定语从句引导的修饰成分不如E]

(E) In addition to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.

解题思路：过去分词引导的前置成分，可以预测考点多半与逻辑主语的判定有关

考点：过去分词引导成分与后面逻辑主语的一致性

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:30
标题: 回复：（vivian_huang）回复：（vivian_huang）回复：...

61 After crude oil（原油）, natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source and supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.

(A) After crude oil, natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source and supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America. [supplied与is并列，错误使用过去时态]

(B) Natural gas, after crude oil the United States second biggest fuel source, supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America. [错误使用过去时态]

(C) Being supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America, natural gas, the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil.[being。。错误使用被动语态]

(D) Natural gas, the United States’ second biggest fuel source after crude oil, is supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.（D）

(E) Natural gas is supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America, being the United States’ second biggest fuel source after crude oil.[错误表示天然气与原油是同类物质]

解题思路：时态一致性以及修辞的逻辑合理性

考点：时态与逻辑修饰合理性

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:31
标题: 回复：...

82 lAthough[vivian1] he is as gifted as, if not more gifted than, many of his colleagues, he is extremely modest and his poetry is unpublished.

(A) Although he is as gifted as, if not more gifted than, many of his colleagues, he is extremely modest and his poetry is unpublished.

(B) Although he is as gifted, if not more gifted, than many of his colleagues, he is extremely modest and with his poetry remaining unpublished.

(C) Although he is as gifted as, if not more gifted than, many of his colleagues, he is extremely modest and will not publish his poetry.

(D) Despite his being gifted, if not more gifted than his colleagues, he is extremely modest and will not publish his poetry.（C）

(E) Being a gifted as, or more gifted than, many of his colleagues, he is extremely modest and his poetry is unpublished.

解题思路：习惯用法 as adj as , if not more adj than, ….

考点：习惯用法

[vivian1]8月20日

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:31
标题: 继续

120 a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.

(A) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.

(B) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind as an adult.

(C) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision would be rated about 20/500; qualifying it to be legally blind if an adult.

(D) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500; an adult with such vision would be deemed legally blind.（D）

(E) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision, which would be deemed legally blind for an adult, would be rated about 20/500.

解题思路：修辞的逻辑合理性

考点：修辞

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:32
标题: 继续

182
Bringing the Ford Motor Company back from the verge of bankruptcy shortly after the Second World War was a special governmentally sanctioned price increase during a period of wage and price controls.

(A) Bringing the Ford Motor Company back from the verge of bankruptcy shortly after the Second World War was a special governmentally sanctioned price increase during a period of wage and price controls.

(B) What brought the Ford Motor Company back from the verge of bankruptcy shortly after the Second World War was a special price increase that the government sanctioned during a period of wage and price controls.

(C) That which brought the ford Motor Company back from the verge of bankruptcy shortly after the Second World War was a special governmentally sanctioned price increase during a period of wage and price controls.

(D) What has brought the Ford Motor Company back from the verge of bankruptcy shortly after the Second World War was a special price increase that the government sanctioned during a period of wages and price controls.（B）

(E) To bring the Ford Motor Company back from the verge of bankruptcy shortly after the Second World War, there was a special price increase during a period of wages and price controls that government sanctioned.

解题思路：主谓搭配

考点：主谓搭配

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:32
标题: 继续

199 Car owners who inflate their tires（轮胎）properly can substantially boost
（推进）their vehicles’ fuel efficiency, since the increase in car-road friction（磨擦力） can waste up to five percent of car fuel by underinflation.[难]

(A) Car owners who inflate their tires properly can substantially boost their vehicles’ fuel efficiency, since the increase in car-road friction can waste up to five percent of car fuel by underinflation. [逻辑意思错误：since路面磨擦能浪费…，那些inflate它们论坛的汽车主人能显著提高它们汽车的燃油效率，理解起来比较怪==如果不能读懂句子，则无法排除此选项]

(B) Because the underinflation of tires can waste up to five percent of a car’s fuel by increasing car-road friction, car owners can substantially boost their vehicles’ fuel efficiency by properly inflating the tires.

(C) Their vehicles’ fuel efficiency is substantially boosted by car owners through the proper inflation of tires that, when underinflated, can waste up to five percent of car fuel by an increase in car-road friction.[their无指代对象]

(D) The proper inflation of tires by car owners, due to the fact that underinflation can waste up to five percent of a car’s fuel by the increase of car-road friction, can substantially boost their fuel efficiency.[their无指代对象]（B）

(E) Because up to five percent of a car’s fuel are wasted through the increases in car-road friction when the tires are underinflated, car owners properly inflating tires can substantially boost their fuel efficiency.[被动语态]

解题思路：

考点：
逻辑意思

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:32
标题: 继续

201 Cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin between one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest in order to be a success.[目的状语修饰全局，有直接修饰cardiac arrest的歧义]

(A) Cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin between one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest in order to be a success.[错误使用between …to搭配]

(B) Between one and four minutes after a cardiac arrest, cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin to be successful.[不符合使用习惯，between。。。and破坏逻辑意思]

(C) Successful cardiopulmonary resuscitation should be begun from one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest occurs.[should +be+done 错]

(D) If it is to be successful, a cardiac arrest should be treated with cardiopulmonary resuscitation one to four minutes afterward.[句首的条件从句罗嗦，]（E）

(E) To be successful, cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin within one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest.

解题思路：
习惯搭配 between …and …. + 修辞

考点：
修辞==〉必须读懂原文

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:33
标题: 继续

205Cerrtain pesticides can become ineffective if used repeatedly in the same place; one reason is suggested by the finding that there are much larger populations of pesticide-degrading microbes in soils with a relatively long history of pesticide use than in soils that are free of such chemicals.

(A) Certain pesticides can become ineffective if used repeatedly in the same place; one reason is suggested by the finding that there are much larger populations of pesticide-degrading microbes in soils with a relatively long history of pesticide use than in soils that are free of such chemicals.

(B) If used repeatedly in the same place, one reason that certain pesticides can become ineffective is suggested by the finding that there are much larger populations of pesticide-degrading microbes in soils with a relatively long history of pesticide use than in soils that are free of such chemicals.

(C) If used repeatedly in the same place, one reason certain pesticides can become ineffective is suggested by the finding that much larger populations of pesticide-degrading microbes are found in soils with a relatively long history of pesticide use than those that are free of such chemicals.

(D) The finding that there are much larger populations of pesticide-degrading microbes in soils with a relatively long history of pesticide use than in soils that are free of such chemicals is suggestive of one reason, if used repeatedly in the same place, certain pesticides can become ineffective.[主句主语finding与谓语is中间插入成分过长，suggestive不如动词形式suggest]（A）

(E) The finding of much larger populations of pesticide-degrading microbes in soils with a relatively long history of pesticide use than in those that are free of such chemicals suggests one reason certain pesticides can become ineffective if used repeatedly in the same place.

解题思路：
修辞

考点：
修辞==〉必须读懂原文

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:33
标题: 继续

Fifty-two percent of United States high school graduates go on to college, compared with Canada’s thirty-five percent and Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany’s fifteen percent.

(A) Fifty-two percent of United States high school graduates go on to college, compared with Canada’s thirty-five percent and Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany’s fifteen percent.

(B) Fifty-two percent of United States high school graduates go on to college; in Canada it is thirty-five percent and in Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany it is fifteen percent.

(C) In the United States, Fifty-two percent of high school graduates go on to college, compared with thirty-five percent in Canada and fifteen percent in Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany.

(D) The percentage of high school graduates in the United States who go on to college is fifty-two, compared with Canada’s thirty-five percent, Great Britain’s fifteen, Japan’s fifteen, and West Germany’s fifteen.（C）

(E) The percentage of United States high school graduates going on to college is fifty-two that in Canada is thirty-five, and that in Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany is fifteen.

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:34
标题: 继续

312 Forrmulas for cash flow and the ratio of debt to equity do not apply to new small businesses in the same way as they do to established big businesses, because they are growing and are seldom in equilibrium.

(A) Formulas for cash flow and the ratio of debt to equity do not apply to new small businesses in the same way as they do to established big businesses, because they are growing and are seldom in equilibrium.[两个they指代有歧义]

(B) Because they are growing and are seldom in equilibrium, formulas for cash flow and the ratio of debt to equity do not apply to new small businesses in the same way as they do to established big businesses.[ they指代有歧义]

(C) Because they are growing and are seldom in equilibrium, new small businesses are not subject to the same applicability of formulas for cash flow and the ratio of debt to equity as established big businesses.

(D) Because new small businesses are growing and are seldom in equilibrium, formulas for cash flow and the ratio of debt to equity do not apply to them in the same way as to established big businesses.[去掉代词，使用名词，优先选择]（D）

(E) New small businesses are not subject to the applicability of formulas for cash flow and the ratio of debt to equity in the same way as [此处应该补出to the….部分以使前后对称]established big businesses, because they are growing and are seldom in equilibrium.[the same as 前后两个比较对象不对等，错误将前者的not subject to….与后者的established big business比较]

解题思路：
代词指代与比较对象逻辑对等

考点：
代词指代与平行

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:34
标题: 继续

489 Like the one（单数） reputed（有名气的） to live in Loch Ness（苏格兰海角）, also an inland lake connected to the ocean by a river, inhabitants
（复数）（居住者）of the area around Lake Champlain claim（宣称） sightings（看见） of a long and narrow “sea monster（妖怪）.”

(A) Like the one reputed to live in Loch Ness, also an inland lake connected to the ocean by a river, inhabitants of the area around Lake Champlain claim sightings of a long and narrow “sea monster.”[错误地将生活在LN的某个东西与LC的居住者比较，语法正确，逻辑有误，关于 the one的指代用法？？？]

(B) Inhabitants of the area around Lake Champlain claim sightings of a long and narrow “sea monster” similar to the one reputed to live in Loch Ness, which, like Lake Champlain, is an inland lake connected to the ocean by a river.

(C) Inhabitants of the area around Lake Champlain claim sightings of a long and narrow “sea monster” similar to Loch Ness’s, which, like Lake Champlain, is an inland lake connected to the ocean by a river.

(D) Like Loch Ness’ reputed monster, inhabitants of the area around Lake Champlain, also an inland lake connected to the ocean by a river, claim sightings of a long and narrow “sea monster.”（B）

(E) Similar to that reputed to live in Loch Ness, inhabitants of the area around Lake Champlain, also an inland lake connected to the ocean by a river, claim sightings of a long and narrow “sea monster.”[错误地将生活在LN的某个东西与LC的居住者比较，语法正确，逻辑有误，同时，“similar to that reputed to live in LN”罗嗦==]XDF 说，similar to 只要在句首必错]

Choice A, D and E illogically compare the monster reputed to live in Loch Ness to the inhabitants of the area around Lake Champlain, not to the monster that some local inhabitants claim to have sighted. Furthermore, in E the phrase Similar to that reputed to live in Loch Ness is needlessly wordy and indirect. C is faulty because the pronoun which would refer to Loch Ness, not to the “sea monster” similar to Loch Ness’s. B, the best choice, uses which correctly and makes a logical comparison. The question is a little easier than middle difficulty.

解题思路：
比较对象的逻辑对等

考点：
比较对象的逻辑对等

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:35
标题: 继续

508 Monitoring heart patients’ exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(A) Monitoring heart patients’ exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.[错误地将monitoring….与 athletes(正在锻炼的…)并列]

(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines. [错误地将monitoring….与 athletes(正在锻炼的…)并列]

(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.

(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients’ exercise, as well as athletes exercising.（C）[错误地将monitoring….与 athletes(正在锻炼的…)并列]

(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients’ exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines. [错误地将monitoring….与 athletes(正在锻炼的…)并列]

Choices A and B incorrectly juxtapose（并列）
heart patients’ exercise and athletes who are exercising, not patient’s exercise and athletes’ exercise, as is more logical. Choice C, which clarifies the comparison, is best. D and E, like A and B, imply a comparison between athletes who are exercising and the exercise of heart patients. The question is moderately easy.

解题思路：
比较对象的逻辑对等

考点：
比较对象的逻辑对等

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:35
标题: 继续

585 Promotions, retirements, deaths, and other actions approved by the board of directors at its May meeting will be reported in the July 15 issue of the company paper.

(A) Promotions, retirements, deaths, and other actions approved by the board of directors at its May meeting will be reported in the July 15 issue of the company paper.

(B) Promotions, retirements, and other actions which have been approved at the May meeting of the board of directors along with deaths, with be reported in the July 15 issue of the company paper.

(C) To be reported in the July 15 issue of the company paper are the promotions, retirements, deaths, and other actions which were approved at the board of directors’ May meeting.

(D) Meeting in May, the promotions, retirements, and other actions approved by the board of directors, including obituaries, will be reported in the July 15 issue of the company paper.（E）

(E) The July 15 issue of the company paper will report on promotions, retirements, and other actions approved by the board of directors at its May meeting; the paper will also include obituaries.

解题思路：
修辞的逻辑问题==〉死亡不属于批准范畴

考点：
逻辑

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:36
标题: 继续

590 Published in Harlem, the owner and editor of the Messenger were two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader.

(A) Published in Harlem, the owner and editor of the Messenger were two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader.

(B) Published in Harlem, two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, were the owner and editor of the Messenger.

(C) Published in Harlem, the Messenger was owned and edited by two young journalists, A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, and Chandler Owen.

(D) The Messenger was owned and edited by two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, and published in Harlem.（C）

(E) The owner and editor being two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, the Messenger was published in Harlem.

解题思路：
分词引导的前面与后面逻辑主语一致性问题

考点：
分词逻辑主语与修辞

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:36
标题: 继续

597 Reared apart from each other, a recent United States study showed striking similarities in identical twins, including many idiosyncrasies of behavior.

(A) Reared apart from each other, a recent United States study showed striking similarities in identical twins, including many idiosyncrasies of behavior.

(B) Reared apart from each other, striking similarities between identical twins that include many idiosyncrasies of behavior were shown in a recent United States study.

(C) A recent United States study showed striking similarities in identical twins reared apart from each other that include many idiosyncrasies of behavior.

(D) According to a recent United States study, identical twins reared apart from each other showed striking similarities, including many idiosyncrasies of behavior.（D）

(E) According to a recent United States study, identical twins showed striking similarities reared apart from each other, including many idiosyncrasies of behavior.[过去分词引导的短语应紧跟在所修饰的对象之后]

解题思路：
分词引导的前面与后面逻辑主语一致性问题以及过去分词引导的短语的修辞位置问题

考点：
分词逻辑主语与修辞

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:36
标题: 继续

632 Selling several hundred thousand copies in six months, the publication of “Maple Leaf Rag” in 1899 was an instant hit, helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.

(A) Selling several hundred thousand copies in six months, the publication of “Maple Leaf Rag” in 1899 was an instant hit, helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.

(B) The publication in 1899 of “Maple Leaf Rag” was an instant hit: in six months they sold several hundred thousand copies and it helped establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.

(C) Helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer was the publication of “Maple Leaf Rag” in 1899, which was an instant hit: it sold several hundred thousand copies in six months.

(D) “Maple Leaf Rag” was an instant hit: it helped establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer, published in 1899 and selling several hundred thousand copies in six months.（E）

(E) Published in 1899, “Maple Leaf Rag” was an instant hit, selling several hundred thousand copies in six months: it helped establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.

解题思路：
现在分词引导的部分与后面逻辑主语的一致性问题

考点：
逻辑主语问题

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:37
标题: 继续

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                The development of a new jumbo rocket that is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration will be able to deliver
                    [vivian1] a heavier load of instruments into orbit than the space shuttle and at a lower cost.

(A) The development of a new jumbo rocket that is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit than the space shuttle and at a lower cost.[错误地将the development与space shuttle比较，逻辑错误]

(B) The development of a new jumbo rocket is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration and be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit at a lower cost than the space shuttle.[
错误地将the development与space shuttle比较，逻辑错误]

(C) The new development of a jumbo rocket, which is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration, will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit at a lower cost than the space shuttle. [
错误地将the development与space shuttle比较，逻辑错误]

(D) A newly developed jumbo rocket, which is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration, will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit than the space shuttle can, and at a lower cost.（D）

(E) A newly developed jumbo rocket, which is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration, will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit than the space shuttle and to cost less.[将jumbo rocket与the space shuttle比较，语法正确，但逻辑意思错误，原文旨在比较jumbo rocket能做什么比the space shuttle能做的要好，而不是仅仅比较事物本身，因此比较后面应该补出助动词]

解题思路：
比较级的平行对等

考点：
比较的逻辑对等

[vivian1]用词的逻辑搭配问题

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:37
标题: 完成

787 The nephew of Pliny the Elder wrote the only eyewitness account of the great eruption of Vesuvius in two letters to the historian Tacitus.

(A) The nephew of Pliny the Elder wrote the only eyewitness account of the great eruption of Vesuvius in two letters to the historian Tacitus.[修辞的逻辑错误]

(B) To the historian Tacitus, the nephew of Pliny the Elder wrote two letters, being the only eyewitness accounts of the great eruption of Vesuvius.

(C) The only eyewitness account is in two letters by the nephew of Pliny the Elder writing to the historian Tacitus an account of the great eruption of Vesuvius.

(D) Writing the only eyewitness account, Pliny the Elder’s nephew accounted for the great eruption of Vesuvius in two letters to the historian Tacitus.（E）

(E) In two letters to the historian Tacitus, the nephew of Pliny the Elder wrote the only eyewitness account of the great eruption of Vesuvius.

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作者: Hamiton 时间: 2007-8-24 02:02
Vivian，能不能发一个word版本，所有全划线题放在一起的，便于直接查找和讨论？谢谢

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-25 10:17

以下是引用Hamiton在2007-8-24 2:02:00的发言：
Vivian，能不能发一个word版本，所有全划线题放在一起的，便于直接查找和讨论？谢谢

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作者: woyuhong 时间: 2007-8-26 00:12
标题: ^_^

请教楼主consider在GMAT中有哪些用法是被允许的，谢谢^_^

2楼的31题A选项后面的depending on mass即可以逻辑主语是句子主语也可以做伴随结果，但不论做哪个都不合理。
不是a star 依赖与mass，而是compress itself into……依赖mass
如果是伴随结果，depending on mass 是条件，不是结果

另外，楼上的文件下载后不能打开啊，显示文档错误不能打开

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作者: Hamiton 时间: 2007-8-26 10:24
多谢Vivian，以后建议版主加精。

我也打不开这个word文件，能不能再试试，换个英文名？

楼上：consider sth. sth. 或 consider sth. adj.

作者: cyrusliang 时间: 2007-11-8 11:26

Hi, Vivian,

Thanks a lot for your summary, it is quite a perfect tool to intensively study the "all underlined" type of questions.

BTW, suggest you try the second time if u don't think 660 is enough. From your summaries, many points you highlighted are not the key ones to rule out the wrong choices,suggesting that you might still have a great margin in SC, which might increase your verbal score a lot after improved.

Just for reference, thanks again for your efforts, it really helps.

作者: JIANGKLOP 时间: 2013-12-13 14:21

vivian_huang 发表于 2007-8-23 21:28
SC 大全全划线题集锦  由于本人看到全划线题就晕，因此将SC大全内的几乎90%的全划线题目提取出来 ...

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