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标题: 语法大全补充题193 [打印本页]

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 19:15
标题: 语法大全补充题193

语法大全补充题193 / 987无重复内的293题

Fifty-two percent of United States high school graduates go on to college, compared with Canada’s thirty-five percent and Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany’s fifteen percent.

(A) Fifty-two percent of United States high school graduates go on to college, compared with Canada’s thirty-five percent and Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany’s fifteen percent.

(B) Fifty-two percent of United States high school graduates go on to college; in Canada it is thirty-five percent and in Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany it is fifteen percent.

(C) In the United States, Fifty-two percent of high school graduates go on to college, compared with thirty-five percent in Canada and fifteen percent in Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany.

(D) The percentage of high school graduates in the United States who go on to college is fifty-two, compared with Canada’s thirty-five percent, Great Britain’s fifteen, Japan’s fifteen, and West Germany’s fifteen.（C）

(E) The percentage of United States high school graduates going on to college is fifty-two that in Canada is thirty-five, and that in Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany is fifteen.

请问这题的解题思路是什么？ A和E为什么会错呢？？

谢谢。。。

作者: margaret1970 时间: 2007-8-23 21:00

A.) Canada’s thirty-five percent and Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany’s fifteen percent.

"Canada’s thirty-five percent and Great Britain "are not parallel

'Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany’s fifteen percent' make people confused,because fifteen percent' just belongs to West Germany here

E) "that in Canada is thirty-five, and that in Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany is fifteen."modify fifty-two.this expression is wrong.

that............,and that..........should be that.....and that.....

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 21:26

以下是引用margaret1970在2007-8-23 21:00:00的发言：

A.) Canada’s thirty-five percent and Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany’s fifteen percent.

"Canada’s thirty-five percent and Great Britain "are not parallel

'Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany’s fifteen percent' make people confused,because fifteen percent' just belongs to West Germany here

E) "that in Canada is thirty-five, and that in Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany is fifteen."modify fifty-two.this expression is wrong.

that............,and that..........should be that.....and that.....

谢谢：）

作者: Hamiton 时间: 2007-8-24 01:54
我觉得这类题主要在分析比较对象上，compared with 两边比较对象必须对等
A的52％of US 与 Canada's 35%... 不对等，而且35％不是Canada的拥有物，用's值得商榷，用of 更好

E的最大错误是改变了原意，原来的主语变成了表语，原来的动词谓语变成从句谓语，大大偏离了原句重心。省略了comared with，失去了比较含义，起修饰作用的分词短语变成了并列句，改变了句子原意

好像好多类似的题，只要把定语提出来(这里是in US, in Canada...)，句子就清晰的很了，欢迎大家继续讨论

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