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作者: linda 时间: 2003-3-5 20:57
标题: 我GMAT的作文摸版

http://www.gter.net 2003-3-3 2:09:49 寄托天下  作者:nbxsk

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我是靠GMAT的，本人水平实在很菜，但拿到成绩单后竟然有6分，真是FT，主要归功摸版，我
的摸版主要是借鉴一个6分大牛的，和各位XDJM分享
ISSUE:
Recently there is a debate over whether …..Some people assert that..,
while other people believe that…As a matter of fact, the issue of whether
….. is a complex and controversial one. Different people hold different
views due to their distinct backgrounds. Therefore, there is not a
universal answer to this question, and whether one choice takes precedence
over the other may quite depend on the specific situation. The decision,
nevertheless, is not an easy one to make. Actually, the final judgment
should rely on a case-by-case analysis. As far as I am concerned, however,
I agree that …. , and do not agree that….. My view can be greatly
substantiated by the following discussions.

The first argument that can be presented to develop my position is that… A
good example may be found in the case that… Under this circumstance, it is
obvious that….

In addition, there is another reason for me to choose this statement. The
reason is not far to seek…. To illustrate, let us consider that … Hence,
another equally important aspect is that….

Admittedly, it may be true that …. in some conditions. However, this alone
does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that ….,Actually, these
cases are rare and therefore are too specific and too weak to strengthen
the view that…When the advantages and disadvantages of x and y are
carefully examined, the most striking conclusion is obvious that…

To sum up, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate
with each other to generate an integrate whole and thus become more
convincing than any single one of them, we may be comfortable to say that
…., because….

ARGUMENT

In this argument, the author concludes that… To support his conclusion,
the author points out that…. In addition, the author reasons that…
Further more, he also assumes that … . At first glance, the author’s
argument appears to be somehow appealing, while a close examination will
reveal how groundless it is. We do not have to look very far to see the
invalidity of this argument. This argument is problematic for the following
reasons.

In the first place, this argument rests on a gratuitous assumption that ….
The author unfairly assumes that…. However, the assumption is questionable
because the author provides no evidence to support this argument. The
arguer fails to take into account other facts that might contribute to the
result that …….. It is likely that , ……………..; it is also likely that
………………………… Any of these scenarios, if true, would show that
………………….. (72)
Therefore, this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such possibility.

In the second place, the argument commits a logic fallacy of “after this
and therefore because of this”. In no case can the mere fact that… be
cited as evidence to support the assumption that there is a causal-effect
relationship between A and B. Moreover, that just because B can be
statistically correlated with A does not necessarily mean that A is the
cause of B. In fact, the author has obviously neglected the possibility of
other alternative facts such as…, or … may contribute to a certain extent
to B. It may be only a coincidence that …… . Unless the author can rule
out other factors relevant to …, this assumption in question can not be
accepted.

In the third place, the evidence that the author provides is insufficient
to support the conclusion drawn from it. One example is rarely sufficient
to establish a general conclusion. Unless the arguer can show that A1 is
representative of all A, the conclusion that B… is completely unwarranted.
In fact, in face of such limited evidence, it is fallacious to draw any
conclusion at all.

In the fourth place, the argument has also committed a false analogy
fallacy. The argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in
all respects, and the author assumes without justification that all things
are equal, and that the background conditions have remained the same at
different times or at different locations. There is, however, no guarantee
that this is the case. Nor does the author cite any evidence to support
this assumption. Lacking this assumption, the conclusion that … is
entirely unfounded. In fact, it is highly doubtful that the facts drawn
from B are applicable to A. Differences between A and B clearly out weight
the similarities, thus making the analogy highly less than valid. For
example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is likely much more difficult for B
to do....

In addition, the conclusion unjustifiably relies on the poll while the
validity of the survey itself is doubtful. The poll cited by the author is
too vague to be informative. The claim does not indicate who, when, how and
by whom the survey is conducted, neither does it mention what is the sample
size, or how the samples are selected. Until these questions are answered
the results are worthless as evidence to support that….

Besides, the author assumes that A and B are mutually exclusive
alternatives. However, the author has never offered any reasons or
evidences for imposing an either/or choice. Common sense and observation
tells us that adjoining both A and B might produce better results.

To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in
the analysis does not lend strong support to what the author claims. To
make the argument more convincing concerning…. , the arguer would have to
provide more information that………………. The arguer should also
demonstrate that……………….to make this argument logically acceptable.
(51)

Since the author commits the above mentioned logical mistakes and fails to
consider the whole situation comprehensively, his ideas should not be
adopted. The conclusion would be strengthened if he….

In conclusion, the arguer fails to substantiate his claim that …. Because
the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the
arguer claims. To strengthen the argument, the arguer must convince us
that…. In addition, the arguer could have to provide more precise
information to support his claim.

It is entirely possible that management has become lax regarding any number
of factors that can affect the bottom line such as inferior products,
careless product pricing, inefficient production, poor employee expense
monitoring, ineffective advertising, sloppy buying policies and other
wasteful spending.

作者: 山峰 时间: 2003-3-6 18:18
此模班使用频率真高那，呵呵

作者: bullandcow 时间: 2003-3-22 05:26
thanks

作者: CasualWalk 时间: 2003-5-13 13:58
这些魔版看起来大多很像，不只一踢S会不会介意。请问用过的XDJM有没有遇到麻烦
的？

作者: mike1999 时间: 2003-5-17 15:57
我觉得作文还是很反映英文水平的。魔板效用肯定有，可是也要靠基本功。linda斑竹英文应该也不错

作者: anchoret 时间: 2003-5-17 18:21

以下是引用mike1999在2003-5-17 15:57:00的发言：
我觉得作文还是很反映英文水平的。魔板效用肯定有，可是也要靠基本功。linda斑竹英文应该也不错

michael，你不要谦虚嘛，你的英语水平也非常高喔。

作者: sheila123 时间: 2004-6-23 08:41
谢谢楼主！

作者: jjmba 时间: 2004-8-10 15:09
好东东大家争相效尤之！

作者: philikittist 时间: 2004-8-11 16:39
recently there is a debate 这句话千万别用了，我下载了好几个模版想拼一个，发现竟然全市这个版修补出来的。hoho~

作者: leeon 时间: 2004-8-12 11:26
尤其是那篇AI的，估计都用了3。4年了。

作者: qsrlw 时间: 2004-12-22 05:46

悄悄问一句: 有套用模版得到意想不到的低分的吗?

作者: john0549 时间: 2004-12-22 09:37

本人11月底考的，虽然自己之前练习了20来篇文章，最后由于字数还是用了上面的摸板，结果是AWA3。5。

这个摸斑已经使用了很久了，ETS的ERATOR系统估计已经能够将上述结构内容相仿的文章视为低分文章类型了，希望大家斟琢，如果一定时间很急也要有较大的修改才好。

作者: hollylo 时间: 2004-12-28 17:15
很好！值得借鉴。

作者: laolei 时间: 2005-3-24 12:42
thanks..............................

作者: laolei 时间: 2005-3-24 12:42
thanks..........................

作者: sunnyting1116 时间: 2005-5-31 22:13
结果，大家都是“参考”的这个模板。。要小心哦。。。

作者: 小女公子 时间: 2005-6-2 13:22
我晕倒，我炮制的issue主体用的就是这个东！！重来……

作者: xianer2 时间: 2005-6-3 08:23
ft,不知道老外用不用魔板.这个魔板怎么到处串来串去的,到那都是它.大家有没有

有新意一点的.

作者: pengpengming 时间: 2005-7-19 10:31

不能偷懒,改一个自己的吧

作者: seraphblue 时间: 2005-9-23 06:17
谢谢咯

作者: vivienvivid 时间: 2005-10-22 00:42
DING

作者: yuanlipinglily 时间: 2005-10-22 10:34
The AA is wonderful.

作者: 啼血的梦 时间: 2005-10-29 00:23
一到做文就头痛呀~~~谢谢~

作者: greg 时间: 2006-4-10 17:02
thanks!!

作者: xzwj666 时间: 2006-5-26 06:44

ding!

作者: 冰雪天 时间: 2006-12-14 22:24

这个模板应该用很多次了吧

作者: jjl918 时间: 2007-9-2 12:35

这个使用频率这么高，不知道偶们这些后来者再用会不会有麻烦哦？

不过这个模板真的很适合我这种没话写的人，凑字数及其见效，呵呵

作者: Qifei 时间: 2007-9-3 17:08
谢谢，魔板还是魔板呀。07年9月10日杀G。必胜！

作者: yahoochao 时间: 2010-4-20 09:58
顶顶顶顶~~~~~~~~

作者: 草本植物 时间: 2010-8-9 20:21
谢谢不知道这么多年是不是这个魔板一直在被用.......

作者: ivy夏 时间: 2012-5-10 19:42
thx

作者: 几次456 时间: 2014-4-17 10:05
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作者: 晴sophia 时间: 2015-7-23 20:25
Mark一下！

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