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标题: 询问prep-86 [打印本页]

作者: yongyang86r 时间: 2007-8-3 15:51
标题: 询问prep-86

看了汇总讨论帖没有prep-86，所以帖出来讨论一下：

86. Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

A. were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

B. influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

C. were influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to

D. were influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who include Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to

E. were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from that of

A: were influential不如用动词简洁；was also an inspiration不如动词；that included的that应该用which/who

B: correct

C: 同上；different in comparison to 语意重复

D: 同上；include应该用过去时；the music of whom 不如whose music简洁

E: 同上；from that of 的that和his own意思重复

但是感觉B怪怪的，特别是那个also在那里，感觉使句子没有谓语了，望指点..

作者: allfar 时间: 2007-8-3 22:27
inspired谓语动词。

作者: yongyang86r 时间: 2007-8-4 12:36
那个also用法对吗？

作者: yongyang86r 时间: 2007-8-6 16:05

我自己顶～望路过nn帮忙解惑

作者: Landsky 时间: 2007-8-6 17:00

个人认为解释已经够清楚了,楼主主要关注什么问题?

作者: yongyang86r 时间: 2007-8-6 17:12
主要就是关于这个also的这个用法在这里我觉得有点和前面的influenced 平行的感觉

作者: plato1983 时间: 2007-8-6 17:32
恩，同感，做连词啊

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