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作者: howcoolya    时间: 2007-7-25 23:54
标题: SC 大全-503 难题啊难题!

Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.

(A) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house

(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses

(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house

(D) with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses

(E) with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their styles vary among women and houses

答案是A。

但是我选B,我觉得A的their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house,其中的embellished with 修饰their geometrical symmetries,这样的话,那么their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house究竟在整个句子中充当什么成分呢?

我觉得B,平行结构很正规啊。

whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses

三种颜色的句子不是并行的吗?我觉得它遵循了“句子,句子,and句子”的规律啊。


作者: allfar    时间: 2007-7-26 02:23
is varying among women and houses
作者: howcoolya    时间: 2007-7-26 08:51

谢谢啊!的确是。


作者: sch    时间: 2008-1-24 14:35
以下是引用howcoolya在2007-7-25 23:54:00的发言:

Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.

(A) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house

(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses

(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house

(D) with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses

(E) with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their styles vary among women and houses

答案是A。

但是我选B,我觉得A的their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house,其中的embellished with 修饰their geometrical symmetries,这样的话,那么their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house究竟在整个句子中充当什么成分呢?

我觉得B,平行结构很正规啊。

whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses

三种颜色的句子不是并行的吗?我觉得它遵循了“句子,句子,and句子”的规律啊。

说得不错,结构上是没有错误的。但是全局意思就混乱不堪。但是their指代什么?

women?women的几何对称?????

选A,后面2个成分成了mural的修饰独立诸葛,属于whose的统领之下。这样全局的结构是:

主句,whose...., 独立诸葛1and2

一层套一层,层层修饰结构清晰。

style is varying amony 是可以的,表示“同一风格在不同受体上的体现”


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作者: wytk    时间: 2010-7-28 08:44
Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.
(A) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house
(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses
(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house
(D) with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses
(E) with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their styles vary among women and houses
答案是A。
但是我选B,我觉得A的their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house,其中的embellished with 修饰their geometrical symmetries,这样的话,那么their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house究竟在整个句子中充当什么成分呢?
我觉得B,平行结构很正规啊。
whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses
三种颜色的句子不是并行的吗?我觉得它遵循了“句子,句子,and句子”的规律啊。



-- by 会员 howcoolya (2007/7/25 23:54:00)




句子,句子,and句子 --------中句子,句子 是 run-on


A----------varies from woman to woman and house to house
D----------varies among women and houses

D项这里是不是改变了原意或者不太好呢~~~  我貌似认为错在这里 不知道有没有问题


作者: 红尘道士    时间: 2010-7-28 09:37
DE,with 修饰主语错误
whose是关系代词,引导定语从句,their和they物主代词和人称代词,引导句子
B,C中定语从句和句子并列,错误
A中whose引导定语从句,后接独立主格,修饰colored,正确
作者: wytk    时间: 2010-7-28 11:45
DE,with 修饰主语错误
whose是关系代词,引导定语从句,their和they物主代词和人称代词,引导句子
B,C中定语从句和句子并列,错误
A中whose引导定语从句,后接独立主格,修饰colored,正确
-- by 会员 红尘道士 (2010/7/28 9:37:53)





DE,with 修饰主语错误 能详细点吗 还是不太懂~~   D项不是独立主格吗??




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