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标题: 最新真题15题，求教大方之家！10，11 [打印本页]

作者: christinahong 时间: 2003-11-24 11:07
标题: 最新真题15题，求教大方之家！10，11
10.Young female ballet dancers and gymnasts sometimes fail to maintain good eating habits caused by the desire to be as thin as possible.
(A) Young female ballet dancers and gymnasts sometimes fail to maintain good eating habits caused by the desire to be as thin as possible.
(B) Good eating habits sometimes fail to be maintained by young female ballet dancers and gymnasts caused by desiring to be as thin as possible.
(C) Because they desire to be as thin as possible, good eating habits are sometimes not maintained by young female ballet dancers and gymnasts.
(D) Because they desire to be as thin as possible, young female ballet dancers and gymnasts sometimes fail to maintain good eating habits.
(E) Young female ballet dancers and gymnasts sometimes fail to maintain good eating habits because they desire to be as thin as possible.
ans

请教A的错误，D与E的区别

11.Since conscious patients often died of shock on the operating table, （the invention of anesthesia was essential to the development of surgery as the invention of the propeller was to powered fight）.
(A) the invention of anesthesia was essential to the development of surgery as the invention of the propeller was to powered fight
(B) inventing anesthesia was as essential for the development of surgery as the invention of the propeller was for powered fight
(C) the invention of anesthesia was as essential in the development of surgery much as the invention of the propeller had been for powered fight
(D) the invention of anesthesia was as essential to the development of surgery as the invention of the propeller was to powered fight
(E) the invention of anesthesia was essential to the development of surgery, so was the invention of the propeller essential to powered fight
ans

请教与A的区别

作者: solome 时间: 2003-11-24 21:09
10 A严重的歪曲了句意。
d 把because 从句放在句首，更好的表达句意，同时使they指代清晰

11 D满足平行要求，Aas the invention of the propeller was to powered fight这部分结构有问题

作者: christinahong 时间: 2003-11-24 23:40

以下是引用solome在2003-11-24 21:09:00的发言：
10 A严重的歪曲了句意。
d 把because 从句放在句首，更好的表达句意，同时使they指代清晰
同意：）

11 D满足平行要求，Aas the invention of the propeller was to powered fight这部分结构有问题

能请教具体是什么问题吗？
如果as是如同的意思，它引导一个比较状语从句，则主句中的essential 就平行省略了，这样可以吗？还是意思出了问题呢？：）

作者: gemj 时间: 2003-11-25 00:05
10
具体地说，habits caused by the desire to be as thin as possible是后面的caused by the desire to be as thin as possible变成了修饰habits，扭曲了意思。

作者: solome 时间: 2003-11-25 00:22
11是表示一个平行比较，the invention of anesthesia 对the development of surgery/
the invention of the propeller对powered fight，是一个大平行和两个小平行的并列，所
以要使用as...as。抱歉我说的太过简单：）

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作者: christinahong 时间: 2003-11-28 23:59
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