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标题: 请问一道白勇语法里的题目 [打印本页]

作者: x_vampire    时间: 2007-7-20 15:00
标题: 请问一道白勇语法里的题目

Architects and stonemasons, huge palace and temple clusters were built by the Maya without benefit of the wheel or animal transport.

正确选项:the Maya built huge palace and temple clusters without the benefit of animal transport or the wheel.这没有问题。

我想请问为什么这个错:were the Maya who, without the benefit of animal transport or the wheel, built huge palace and temple clusters.

谢谢!


作者: faintfree    时间: 2007-7-20 15:58

Architects and stonemasons, were the Maya who, without the benefit of animal transport or the wheel, built huge palace and temple clusters.

句子主语改变了,变成:Architects and stonemasons。

were the Maya who 变成了非限制性定语从句了。


作者: x_vampire    时间: 2007-7-20 16:09

就是说语法是对的,只是改变了句子的主语。

茅塞顿开!谢谢!


作者: faintfree    时间: 2007-7-20 16:11
虽然语法上应该算对。但were the Maya who,应该写成 ,who were the Maya, 没必要倒装,算是笨拙的表达方式吧。
作者: 茉莉清茶    时间: 2007-7-21 11:22

Architects and stonemasons, huge palace and temple clusters were built by the Maya without benefit of the wheel or animal transport.

D: the Maya built huge palace and temple clusters without the benefit of animal transport or the wheel.

E: were the Maya who, without the benefit of animal transport or the wheel, built huge palace and temple clusters.

D 与 E 选项一的区别在于D 的主语是The maya, 前面的做同位语修饰主语.意思为玛雅人是建筑师和石匠,在没有....的帮助下修建..... E 选项把Architects and stonemasons 作为主语, 句子的结构变为Architects and stonemasons, were the Maya who....... ,后面的东西全部是who 这个定语从句里的内容,不是前面说的Architects and stonemasons, .....built huge palace and temple clusters. 这样的结构. E 存在一个逻辑错误, 我们可以说玛雅人都是建筑师和石匠,但是我们不能说建筑师和石匠都是玛雅人,还有就是语法错误, 如果Architects and stonemasons, were the Maya 算倒装的话,9 中间是不能用逗号隔开的,这一点白勇的语法书上也有讲,我觉得是蛮有道理的.


作者: 国产小猪    时间: 2007-7-21 15:06

恩,同意楼上的说法,很精辟


作者: rubins78    时间: 2007-8-14 06:20

我觉得是“Architects and stonemasons, were the Maya who....”中间的逗号用的不对。如果Architects and stonemasons是主语,而were是谓语的话,他们之间不能有逗号连接。所以错误。


作者: dingxiang    时间: 2007-8-14 14:57

D 是同位语结构, E是定语从句,最简单的考虑方法,是经验规律:在很多情况下,同位语〉〉定语从句;

更何况,原文强调的是built这个动作,而E是将were作为谓语动词,后面说有的成分做定语从句, 颠倒了句子中心,这个在GMAT里面是算作correctness错误,所以D肯定不对


作者: x_vampire    时间: 2007-8-16 23:06
谢谢!dingxiang




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