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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-17 12:18
标题: kissin的iBT笔记本

II WAR

Fight Again--Start at 148th

早就计划今年秋季考托,但是软弱的kissin一直MMJJ,寒假就听了新东方,过了春节就没好好看过(单词一直没有看,看了忘,忘了看,再看在忘,干脆不看,总为自己找这样那样的理由开脱,为报考了米国暑期班--而把托福搁置一旁,但暑期班对托福没有任何的促进,平时交流和口语听力根本就不是一回事。基础--糟糕透顶,属于中学时单项选择题可以错三分之一以上,只能靠阅读拿分的人,至今没有考过大学的任意级。却固执地对语言有一种顶礼膜拜的好感!除了语法和单词(但是我知道这是基础的基础,所以不能输在起跑线上,该补的课就得低头去啃!)深深自卑于自己的懒惰和退让,作为校园里角落中人,一次次用并不突出的成绩企图为自己制造盾牌,但是防守永远不能代替进攻,我一定要用行动彻底地洗刷我的不安和恐惧!为了我的梦想,为了做一次自己,我决定

做一次铁人

除了学校的课本和卷子,展望未来自己随便翻了翻,从未碰过任何英文教材!!!很少看电影,喜欢discovery和国家地理

一直很喜欢CD温馨的学习氛围和及时齐全的资料,希望在大家的监督帮助下实现突破,向着梦想,CCCCCCCCCOME ON~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!

1-5D: 听力: OG 2)  + 蓝 ( 空) 精!

          阅读: 绿 ( S1-4)

          写作: 讲义 1/3 + 许

          单词: 2/天

没过四G的却整天疯要IBT的狂人!!!

阅读就从一个一个不认识的单词查起,句字就一遍一遍的读,实在不行把整个一段都看下来,总要读懂的


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作者: alexwithibt    时间: 2007-7-17 12:34

LZ加油..


作者: cathy201    时间: 2007-7-17 12:35

板凳了……

四级跟IBT不搭界的,我也没考过四级……

不过LZ最好告诉我们你的考试时间,大概水平(除了四级),和备考的整个计划,这样比较好介入帮助……


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-17 13:50

谢谢LZ啦!还有LZ的LZ..! 我好紧张,时间太快了, 刚从SUMMER CAMP回来,交流还SOSO,但是--DELTA的模拟对我打击太大了,特别是阅读(3/4的正确率都不到),听力算算稍好点(23分),哭!!! 单词看不懂啊(特别是理科)汗!!!还有就是速度(阅读!)!!! 9.29 就要奔赴沙场了!在开学前集中精力冲刺IBT,向着100,前进!

教材: OG, DEL(蓝), LONG(绿),BAR(紫)--最后两周用

1-5D:     听力: OG 2)  + 蓝 ( 空) 精!

          阅读: 绿 ( S1-4)

          写作: 讲义 1/3 + 许

          单词: 5/天(多多...)

这是我近五天的计划,还请前辈们多多指教!多多监督!


作者: betterfuture    时间: 2007-7-17 13:51
add oil===
作者: cathy201    时间: 2007-7-17 13:57

第一段时间词汇很主要吧……

影响阅读速度的,就是词汇量跟长难句(T有没有长难句啊,实在不能算长或者难,比起S或G),还有屏读的习惯问题了……

推荐一下非牛人帖子吧……

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=19&ID=222308&page=1


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-19 16:45

嗨! 今天把作业进度帖出来,不好意思啊! 进度慢慢啊...基础的基础...单词(王玉梅20-29),还没复习的类!

听力:蓝Q6,Q7,Q8,(正确率平均80%),55555!考试这样一来就悬了...55555? 特别是表格题(排序,配对最难了? 怎么办呢? 前辈,快快支招,谢谢啊:-0

现在,赶紧做阅读去!还没开始呢,晚上看作文( 请各位推荐一下作文参考资料! 比如说那本老许的满分作文该怎么看呀?)


作者: cathy201    时间: 2007-7-19 19:16

Delta的听力……嗯……把材料好好再温习一下,看看script……

满分作文要好好看(废话废话)……

首先把基本的概念建立一下,模板瞧两眼就是了,关键是指出的ETS出题思路和中国学生经常犯的错误,必须要仔细看……


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-21 09:02

谢谢Cathy!我正在写作文哩, 嘿嘿,先发个上来,

   Why people attend college?

 

Some young people have the option to directly enter the work pace after they graduate from high school. However, more and more make sure they got high scores of college entrance exam by studying hard, in order to attend the college for further studies. Even though the motive varies from individual to individual, we can find something in common of the reason why they choose to go to college.

 

The people who are voluntary and kwon what they should do, always have an unambiguous goal for studying at college. Before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to specialize.  By attending college, students can study basic professional knowledge and skills of a specialty thoroughly. As a job opportunity can not get easy, they must lay a good foundation during the 4-years undergraduate studying. Smart students may choose a major course in university which suits their needs of future jobs. For instance, applicants with Bachelor of lows degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in a court, they will be also well prepared for any job as a counselor in companies or government. And also, a college degree offers an access to jobs with a clear path towards professional advancement. A B.S. in biology could allow a student to find a job in lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same major could also be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. For those reasons, They are consciously or unconsciously putting their time and energies into study as an investment, hoping one day they could reaping a harvest. Sober enough as they are, they never spend time on part time job unless it is absolutely necessary to do so. They know exactly the concept of opportunity cost. They know learning any craft consumes time, but will have a better reward in the future. They refuse to enjoy immediate pleasure which in fact cost much before long. Actually, students attend to a college or university not only for increasing knowledge and preparing a career, but also to seek new experience, to have more fun, to enhance interrelationship and etc. 

 

Additionally, there are some people who made a decision to go to college merely because they are told by their parents and our society. Most of them are immature, and had a vague vision of their future. At most, they knew attending higher education would be benefit to them. Since they did not what is they aim to, they may waste a lot of precious time live in college.

 

Finally, people attend to college in order to learn more and deeply knowledge, to learn how to think and independent, to prepare well for adapting to the society.

盼望大家拍,要狠狠地拍啊!!!谢谢


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-21 09:44

再贴个...烂东东..求拍!

137.     Should high school allow students to study the course that the students want to study?

 When it comes to the question of whether high schools should consent students to choose the courses which they would like to learn, there is no such things as a consensus. Some people believe students at high schools should perceive a various education to extend knowledge before they attend college, while others claim that students who study at high schools is old enough to make a choice of want to learn by themselves, not others ought them to.

In my opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages of students picking their own courses in high school. The disadvantage is the high school students are too immature to make a good decision to choose a course which is suits for them and really require to study. As high school students should have comprehensive knowledge and lay a firm foundation, in order to attend college to study in a specialty better and favorably. Besides, nowadays, the communication and interchange in the fields of art, science, economy and other human activities unprecedented frequent, thus students need a comprehensive knowledge and experience. After the graduate, they can take off their career with a well-prepared which will lead them to a clear path towards professional advancement. For instance, Condoleezza Rice, the Secretary of States, received a rounded education by not only studying political science, international studies, but also learning piano, Russian, French, Military knowledge and so on when she was a student. Her formidable presence and steely persistence showed in her political career are based on her profound knowledge.

However, the advantage of studying a course which students would like to consciously would make them focus on one subject at an early age. To be versed in a specialty, require people spend numerous time on paying their attention to. In one word, the earlier who start to train and study in one field, the more preponderant who are. For example, Tomas Edison, one of greatest inventor whose inventions have vast amounts of beneficial impact on human beings in the last century, started to doing research in his own chemistry lab since he was eight years old. He made a tremendously big progress on his knowledge and imagination. It is not hard to imagine that he has thousands of inventions during his life because he started in an early age.

In conclusion, some curriculums should be required in high school but we should leave some courses that can be select by themselves based on the interest of each of each of them.


作者: Kaluo    时间: 2007-7-21 11:47
lz加油!!!
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-25 09:55

啊啊,都沉到底啦!!!这两天疯赶PS和推荐信,争取开学前最后定稿,喔!哎,怎么看自己写的都不怎么滴!!!求助!!!

复习:单词( 31-40 ) 呵呵,还没复习,计划把(20-30)今天温习一下!

      阅读:OG6篇   感觉还行,就是速度有些跟不上!!!

   听力:温习做过的蓝,3篇,呵呵,太少啦,

   写作:许轶一, 二章,第四章只看了一半,今天把它搞定,还有第三章! 

   口语:还没练,脸皮真厚!赶紧练,考试根平时可不是一回事,敢不练!!!


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-25 09:57

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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-25 10:02

九月底考,还有一个月开学,开学还要处理很多事(还要补考——因公,因公,嘿嘿,还要组个新band,现在,全力以赴吧!!!


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-26 00:45

晚上看范文六篇,手打热了,呵呵,还需练习,速度,打字的速度,打英文的速度!哎,单词还没复习!实在不想熬了,明早起来继续!!!今天正式成为为梦之队的一员了,感谢管理员!!自惭形秽啊!


作者: 山衔落日    时间: 2007-7-26 00:49
楼主在上新东方的话,就尽量跟上进度。但是,目前最重要的是单词,千万抓紧。

许轶那书是指导书,根据里面的说明看相关章节。然后自己细心领悟。感觉楼主作文的词汇太少了,词汇是最基本的砖头,多积累吧。
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-26 09:17
以下是引用山衔落日在2007-7-26 0:49:00的发言:
楼主在上新东方的话,就尽量跟上进度。但是,目前最重要的是单词,千万抓紧。

许轶那书是指导书,根据里面的说明看相关章节。然后自己细心领悟。感觉楼主作文的词汇太少了,词汇是最基本的砖头,多积累吧。

真的很感谢山版的建议,一针见血!!!谢谢谢谢,我要乖乖地背单词了,呵呵,(包括例句v,范文,积累积累)
作者: qianrene    时间: 2007-7-26 09:50
不知道MM用的什么单词书,我觉得词以类记比较好,先大强度的背完一次,然后可以准备一本别的词汇书象王玉梅的,时不时拿出来看看,记几个单词,但是也不要苛求要背很多,其实即使背了还是很多阅读单词不认识,就需要去猜了,听力中的单词最重要,不认识的听不出的都要记下来
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-26 12:43

谢谢LZ的指点!我刚去下了词以类记,这三天突击词汇,阅读和写作。

3小时词汇,王5粒加张1节

2小时阅读,LONGMAN (书)

2小时写作,以看范文为主,每天5篇

其余时间听力,每天至少保证半小时精听,跟读。


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-26 12:53
目前DELTA和OG的阅读听力都过了一遍,听力感觉有些进步,平均一遍正确70-80%,第二遍下来就清晰很多,但是阅读一直很不稳定,尤其是在单词和文章逻辑的掌握上(单词替换,句子插入,推论题)有明显欠缺,各位,请多指教啊!(单词呢,自己回头背,主要是请教各位练习方法,谢谢!
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-27 19:18

日记-7,27

单词,王/37-40

阅读,Delta Q9(9/10)Q10 (17/25)Q10感觉对文章内容的把握还不够好,

第一篇,黑洞

天文词汇:relativity   相对论;   event horizon  视界;   collapse  崩溃,倒塌,毁灭;

          finite  有限的;  infinite  无限的;  exclusion principle 排它原理; 

          resistance  电阻,抵抗运动;  molecular  分子的; compressed 被压缩的

          entire mass 全体集合; perceivable 可知觉的; rip apart 撕成碎片;

          time distortion 时间的扭曲;

这篇文章的内容对我来说有点陌生,做起来心里七上八下的,迷乱。。整篇看完依然是似懂非懂,对做题也有影响,在此请教大家,这个问题怎么解决?

问一个小地方,文中"Outside the event horizon, gravity is strong but finite, and it is possible for objects to break free of its pull. However, once within the event horizon, an object would need to travel faster than light to escape." 是否暗示了“The object can not escape the black hole's gravity." 怎样暗示的?

现在开始作文,看10篇范文,LONGMAN 阅读skill 1-2 晚上再来汇报,先吃个饭去,呵呵


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-28 00:36

作文,李笑来 130-137

阅读,LONGMAN pre- 15/20.


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-28 09:00

7-28 今天妈妈过生日,力求在晚上之前完成以下:

阅读:LONGMAN skill 1-4  Hank P1-50

词汇:16-20 复习 31-35

写作:李笑来 138-145

听力;OG第二部分,做题跟读


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-7-31 00:00

7-30 啊,用了两天的时间才把一天的任务完成了啊!!! 看来我要杜绝一切娱乐活动了。 妈妈的生日宴啊......又找理由玩,嘿嘿,下月老爸的生日可要狠下心完成好功课才去哦!

作文 145-150 Gosh! I have to type in English only!!!

Words 10-15

Reading OG 综述部分,看完之后很有收获。

口语荒废了!!!听力溜了!!!明天还得以阅读,单词为重! 


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-1 20:47

7-31

单词:复习 37,38

阅读:LONGMAN Skill1-2

昨天跟朋友写Mail,我应该速战速决,我经常小心有犹豫不决,写得很慢,加油!一定要大胆用英文表达我的想法!!! 突然又想起狮子王里面说,“勇敢并不代表到处闯祸”,遇事冷静,胆大心细才能处理周到!恩,提醒自己!


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-2 09:19

8-1

作文:150-155

复习单词:16-20

昨天完成任务少之又少!!!

Give me a Rifle!
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-2 09:32

8-2 至 8-6: 警告!表为赶进度而走马观花地复习,那是无效的!作文,句型,表达方式,结构,单词要各个击破, 每篇范文半小时。阅读,汉克笔记和朗文齐头并进,力求铺垫基础。听力每天坚持至少一小时,OG精听,longman做题。跟读一小时旧托听力。

除口语外每项实在地练两小时(最低限!)OK!我下了,晚上再来汇报

 


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-5 22:00
8-2至8-5:看范文很有帮助,看阅读还是没什么进步,恨死我自己了!! orFighting!
作者: 德克的猪    时间: 2007-8-5 22:01

我来顶一个


作者: 山衔落日    时间: 2007-8-5 22:16
阅读的速度话,词汇是基础,难句是关键。
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-7 11:20

谢谢山版和小猪!

 

目前进度:作文--156-165

          阅读-- Skill练习 1-4

     词汇--王玉梅 10-15

听力都没练,

 Give me a Rifle!!!
作者: 防晒霜    时间: 2007-8-7 17:36
牛啊.....我也是要考的人了.........一起加油.....
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-8 15:30

8-8

北京奥运倒计一周年,呵呵,也许明年这个时候就离开北京了,奋斗,青春很快就会流逝的~~~ 我很怕表;老的,现在还记得01年宣布申奥成功时偶才那么一点点大,现在--是否--抓紧时间---我下了!

单词: 王--30-33, 12-14

阅读:longman skill 5

听力:旧托 No。1

作文:166-173

口语:从今天开始每天5篇JJ

浪费时间就是很窝囊地老掉!!!


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-8 15:31
还要谢谢防晒霜,一起加油!!下午打球时一定抹上,呵呵呵
作者: qianrene    时间: 2007-8-8 16:31
串门,mm的复习好充实哦,还有锻炼身体
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-10 11:22

昨日:8-9 阅读 skill 6 作文174-179 听力 OG

今日:8-10 阅读 skill 7-10 听力 skill 1-2 旧托第三  口语特训范文 作文180-185

把自己当机器使,对疲劳慌张麻木!


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-11 09:40

继续昨天定下的任务!阅读有些许进步了,谢谢大家的提醒,就是背单词啊--现在抓还来得及--单词书和精读--就是做完题之后查字典,积累词汇,常温习-------把长难句多读几遍--特别是有题对应的地方--有时涉及到上下文的关联性--慢慢就能理解了。

今天做题开始掐时间,做完后再精读---虽然进度显得慢,但进步一定是实实在在的--基础-补!

考!范文看了,但是感觉有点晕--可能是太多了没彻底消化--放慢速度-仔细看里面的表达方式和词汇运用(正确性,恰当性,精确性,地道性,趣味性--求变)再到特殊句式的运用--强调句,定从,宾从,状从,加插入语等---要在范文中一一落实。好了,先到这里,偶下鸟


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-11 11:34

加油加油!

先完成手上的材料!--表花心--到头来一个也抓不住!
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作者: qianrene    时间: 2007-8-11 22:10

自己偷懒了。帮大家喊下加油


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-12 09:24

昨日8-11

阅读:longman skill8-10 听力:longman 准备测试-错了两个-态度题,推论题--不可小视。

今日8-12

单词:5-9 复习10-15 3小时

听力:longman做题 跟读og两篇--一对话一段子

阅读:总结昨日的错题,精读--查单词和分析长难句

口语作文:中午一小时--表睡啦!

Happy Birthday, Min-Hwan-na!


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-12 09:48

呵呵--在这里表达一下我的祝福吧--算灌灌了!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! MY DEAR FRIEND! 20 stars!

偶背单词去了--不想带着词典去人家的生日派


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-13 09:28
继续加强阅读,作文和单词!!! 给自己顶一下!
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-13 11:51

发泄一下---查字典查到吐血--听听力听到晕血--背单词背到吃饭觉得米饭都是单词--还饭听---对着电脑感到浑身发热--一切都需要平静面对--?继续阅读,下了---在抗就会有快感了!哈哈哈


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作者: 山衔落日    时间: 2007-8-13 13:05
楼主其实已经状态来了,继续加油吧。
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-14 01:27

感谢山版贴心的鼓励!!!

8-13 今天没复习单词--检讨一下!!!

     阅读--温习做过的longman 查了下单词--感觉还得背 综合测试16/20

     听力--温习两篇  做了skill 5 蒙了个全对--但明天还要复习一下因为有些地方听得不是很明白

     作文--范文91-95

     口语----------------------------没练!


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-14 01:40
好久没熬这么晚了--睡前--顶一下!!
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-14 10:15

8-14

郁闷!!音乐会的票卖光了--只剩下死贵的了!伤心欲绝一小时--振作起来!开始复习!

上午:单词 1-4 阅读词汇

      复习作文,听力各两篇

任务不多,轻松搞定!呵呵呵--乐观!

     


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-14 20:25
longman听力今天完成书--严重不足在于--1,听开头主题。2,判断对错--错误选项可能性(与原文相反信息,原文未提及信息。偷换概念。 使用该段中的细节,但该细节并未对应提到的事件)3,仔细读题--题意理解--选项理解--单词!4,imply 问题再思索
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-15 08:34

昨晚longman光盘--skill 1-2 词汇题明显不足--再次为我的词汇量悔恨不已--一个是读懂题目中的选项--一个是单词本身--还有就是上下文的理解---每天被三小时单词--同时保持阅读量--每天三-五篇

8-15 晨: 单词 1-10 复习阅读

         作文范文 10 篇 + 口语JJ5篇


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-15 15:38

顶!隔壁班的MM拿了全奖飞跃太平洋了--离别愁绪在此发作不已--晚上要饯行!其实我,不只是羡慕-很嫉妒的-一定要给自己争口气--好好备考吧!

做错一道题算什么?至少我又多背了单词-熟悉了句型-而实力就是在向错误学习的过程中提高的--但是决不允许下次反同样的错误--才是真正进步---老师教导我们:不要喜新厌旧而要温故而知新!

阅读去了!加快打字的速度!

最后--大声说--我爱单词!偶下了!晚上是没时间了


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作者: cathy201    时间: 2007-8-15 16:03
我是在水……在背红宝书……杨鹏17天……恐怖啊,悲伤……还是IBT词汇简单……
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-16 10:26

谢谢LZ---榜样!

昨天一天看了8篇作文,今天加强---10篇 词汇继续复习6-10 然后1-10过  阅读继续skill--3456 六篇 听力skill 1-4 就这样--偶下了!


作者: cathy201    时间: 2007-8-16 20:26

LZ是你自己啊,姐姐……

LS才是楼上……


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-17 15:02

呵呵~ Cathy! 难得糊涂啊!听着姐姐好亲切啊-我该叫你前辈才对哈哈-我也本,不过同时觉得时间不等人啊,一年一年过的,一本就是四年啊-呵呵,姐姐妹妹~红楼似的~~~

祝愿Cathy杀出一条SAT的冠冕大道!

今天下午:两小时单词--吃十粒

          两小时阅读--半小时一篇 4-5 篇

今天晚上:作文两小时--范文十篇

          听力做题一小时听写一小时-听写昨天的题两篇

这是至今为止最为火爆的计划!--想试试自己到底能否?


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-19 03:49

看来有点眼高手低了!呵呵--还是贴出来现现丑吧

longman 光盘 阅读skill 6 篇 (70%)555--插入题,词汇题, 推论题! 听力完成 (80%)55-- connecting information

词汇:1-7

范文两篇

明早第一件事就是把听力温习下--看script!


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-19 09:25

啊!又是等到阳光普照才起来啊!今天计划--超现实依旧

复习听力光盘--script conncecting三篇

单词8-16

阅读5篇

作文10篇

开始看longman,OG之口语,作文

累的时候就听听摇滚--满有用滴--顺便跟唱绕绕舌呵呵 AvrilAvrilAvril--彻底感受阳光唱腔炫耀似的活力四射,嗓音一如水晶般清澈,歌词更是流露出纯粹的女性风格--花痴了


作者: qianrene    时间: 2007-8-19 11:40
MM好有激情,坚持不容易
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-20 02:26

谢谢LS的MM!

今天完成:阅读3篇 单词3粒 听写3篇 范文3

明早起--打赌说我要不起就做二百个仰卧起坐!


作者: crowkiller    时间: 2007-8-20 02:31
图片点击可在新窗口打开查看
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-20 12:49

嗯.....上午把longman的最后三篇阅读完成了,正确率提高了, 80%吧~ 但相比还是很弱啦X(

目前Delta, Longman的阅读听力都过了一遍~还剩口语作文只看了点点

现在进入模拟题阶段....在此求助一下大家~怎么安排比较合理呢?Thanks!!!


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-21 17:37

现在终于把昨天作的Delta Complete test 2 检查完了~~ 老天--花了我大半天的时间对题啊!!!

好吧~

首次做模拟

题错知多少?

真是的阅读内容最熟悉的一篇竟然错了3道~ 其他不熟的题材到没怎么错???考~ 听力也是,就是听得最爽的错得最多。。。屋里哇啦~***

遇到熟悉的内容千万不要得意忘形啊--发现沉浸于内容而忽略了考点--切忌啊!!大家不要笑话--我这人属于给点阳光就不知珍惜的--555--悔恨不已!

口语3456那才叫烂--特别是4,6题--那听力根作听力题的思路可不一样--根本没有你断章取义的机会!好好加强--还有感觉写作找听力和阅读间的互驳点比较费劲,想请教一下各位大虾!

自己算分--阅读80%+听力85%+口语0(不好意思判--4,6题估计全F了),大虾施教啊!!! 作文15(综合写作就没记全--没把试验的三个过程分别驳斥阅读中的三个观点一一列出对应)独立--就不说了-去写作版淘淘--突然发现欠缺太多了!

山版!!!请现身

     


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作者: cathy201    时间: 2007-8-21 17:47

考过太久了,好多东西都模糊掉……

唯一记得的是,综合写作其实真的不难,没有这些资料上面那么恐怖,综合口语也是的……听力基础好就应该很有优势……


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-22 00:15

谢谢Cathy!!真的帮我减压罗耶!每当觉得没进展像要放弃的时候就会有朋友默契的鼓励~ ^-^ ~

不过其实我的基础有限--但是做题和复习使我有所提高--我相信--多多益善!又背了2粒单词--睡了,开始调生物钟~早上八点考试--好早啊--夜猫变身早早起--我喔喔喔!

发现睡眠就是我的敌人== == ==每天没少于8小时的~9个钟头都算少的了!啊呵*** 


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-22 08:51

今天!!!拼了~

单词:5粒 13-17

作文:30 篇范文

longman MINI 1-6

KAO!准备把自己卖给题了~ 就不信我做不完......在崩溃的边缘也不能放手,还要坚持,坚持!!!把昨天上网的时间补回来!一定要在四天内把longmanMINI做完!


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-22 09:49

26号要还要弄申请材料---开学要补考!!!不是不想考,那会儿那跟正好我考T的时间撞车了,真是遇上了~ 幸好不是周末考--不过想到这就挺没情绪的---几天都堆在一起弄了,真是专业课都没怎么弄估计开学老板得气疯了--我就安排一件一件做好,也只能这样--集中精力考T, 再集中精力赶专业课~~
            想知道大家是怎么平衡的???

就疯这一次吧!向来多是规规矩矩,小心翼翼的,自己想要的就应该努力争取才是!

又长胖了~!!!就是没有竭尽全力的标志,~~  看到肥膘往外冒就是一肚子的气~~

又水了~好像觉得自己白吃家里的饭了~ 哎,算我啰嗦了,不知道为什么~每次到坛子上逛逛心情就会好很多~~

请各位狠狠地监督我,批判我吧噢!


                   SHINING


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作者: crowkiller    时间: 2007-8-22 10:55

LZ 加油!

一起熬过这一段........


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-23 01:08

真TM的一到节气生日就要冒出鬼火~ 招惹谁了~NS又TM的要去做什么电击,吃什么安眠药望着我一脸无助-我TM的有啥办法,陪了说了又听不进去,觉得自己真是无能了--!每天笑笑笑,笑脸面对才是宝,哈哈哈哈哈

我知道这样说是不道德的,应该同情同情再同情~ 害怕是没有用的,只有忍耐每一分钟~好好做自己的事,发狠了,我能有什么办法,就是做题,做题可以让我忘了一切!对不起~又水了

今天完成3套MINI,马上就去对答案

单词背到15

作文10篇

为完成既定目标~打30大板~大板拿来---哈哈哈,口语一定不要急,清晰准确尽量完整。


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-24 09:18

MINI做到6啦!正确率一般般~ 等我进步的时候再来汇报吧,先下了

口语和作文要跟上了~ 今天对着电脑练口语吧,下了multi-timer,要计时练

问下大家~ 口语的语速掌握在什么状态下比较合适~ 我总是说得很快,因为怕说不完, 3456题都要说到50秒以上,但听起来又有点急促,请教下各位?


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-24 09:20
问一下~写作版有可以加入的团队吗?
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-28 08:27

这两天忙着看作文~没来汇报,今天还要继续看范文,背单词!

这是一场持久战!


作者: qianrene    时间: 2007-8-28 11:06
KISSIN加油,其实不需要把细节都说完的,关键是要每个论点都把听力中的例子说清楚就好了
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-8-31 08:16

谢谢qianreneMM的指点, 看来听力材料的例子是很重要的。 加强听力细节的练习

好几天没上了,要把少了的些许动力找回来,前两天每天20篇范文,真正在状态的时间最多5小时,其余不是打PSP游戏就是串吧听摇滚,明知还有不到一个月就要考试了BS自己

今天是8月的最后一天, 争取把剩下的50篇范文看完~~


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-1 00:33
还剩30篇,加油!明天白天以前搞定!
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-1 10:10

昨天熬到两点半, 实在撑不住睡的! 八点起,跟老乡妹妹扯了一个小时的胡话~我太能聊了,bs一下自己

作文还剩1-20,为了练打字速度,我用LXL185范文,突然发现以前存档的130-149不翼而飞,郁闷中只好重打

以前写过几篇,但是词汇句型实在过于简单~ 本人基础较差,所以从抄写开始积累词汇句型~ 以平均每天30篇的速度前行,最后一天,给自己打气

基础较好的同仁大可不必,适当看看范文,模版,到写作版混混,独立写作

旁边的头像没有吓着诸位吧,我也是迫不得已啊~真的有点心烦,小小地虚拟地发泄一下


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作者: cathy201    时间: 2007-9-1 10:50

没事啊,我这两天也到处不停发泄……

抄写不如在电脑上打字,要考虑到IBT是机考,更加靠一个人的上机操作能力……

词汇背太多了也没必要(单指写作),要把能够用的单词用好……


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-1 17:50

我的电脑,每天都被烤得烫烫的~我的手热乎,在打字哩!谢谢Cathy提醒!!

继续奋战,奋战,还有10篇,另外还得把丢失的20篇补回来

吃饭前10篇,晚上20篇,又忍不住下水了


作者: crowkiller    时间: 2007-9-1 21:12

坚持,加油!

MM 在看什么作文资料啊?我现在还一头雾水,下个礼拜就要考了.....

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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-3 03:20

范文185过完一遍,下部计划将巴朗做完


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-3 10:38

现在开始做模考题,还有25天考试 复习材料如下

OG除作文以外看过一遍,先看作文,再把口语,听力,阅读重看一遍

Delta 3套模考  

Longman 16 套迷你+4套模考  (以前没好好做,悔恨,再做)

Barron 7套模考

ETS online test

Kaplan 只做两套, I am lazy!

口语作文看机经,每天说熟五篇口语,写一篇作文

还有10天正式开学,看着自己的进步与进度,实在素汗颜!不完成变成仁

第一天---第五天(3/9-7/9)

6:00-8:00:  单词一小时,听写一小时(热身)

8:00-12:30:  一套完整模考或两套迷你测试

14:00-15:00: 口语五段

15:00-17:00:    订正头一天的错题

17:00-19:00:    看OG写作+longman口语

20:00-22:00:    写一篇作文并修改,复习范文,参考写作版已修改的文章

22:00-0:00:    补充阅读题--汉克笔记

目标: 听力,阅读的正确率达到90%,口语要能将要点涵盖(练听力,快速阅读,抓重点词以及态度,理由,事例支持),可超时;作文,修改不限时,尽量多用新学的词汇和句型,语法错误越少越好,参看Delta的语法改错 

今天睡懒觉,不用订正错题,那么就完成两套迷你,争取做一下在线测试


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-3 12:51
请教各位, 口语3456题用现在时还是过去时?
作者: alexwithibt    时间: 2007-9-3 13:28

我看了你那个10楼的作文.

最好不要写成partially support, partially oppose. 问的是Should high school allow students to study the course that the students want to study?你最后的con是permit学生选一些课,那实际上也是support.这样的话,你的重点大段, 第2段写的disadv.就不太合试了.  最好写成fully support, 或fully oppose.

不是说 partially support, partially oppose不好, 而是这么写你要写很多才能论速明白. 至少得600字以上, 你才能把这东东写明白. 而600字,在真考时,是不太可能写完的.


作者: crowkiller    时间: 2007-9-3 13:52

再来帮顶!

加油!


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-4 01:13

谢谢啦,alexwithibt, 难得的建议哦, 在以后写作中我会注意了,  是否最好选择一个比较明确的偏好更为有利于托福作文的阐述。祝你二战笑傲托湖!!!

longman 迷你两套(未检查)

ETS在线,阅读错一题,听力对话和讲座个错一题,分别是 why does the pro. change his decision? 和 why does the pro. say this? 第一问是关于上下文发展逻辑的理解,中间师生讨论的目的,改借材料时间,是因为教授明天上课要用,所以担心学生不能按时归还。第二问,类似的题正确率不高

OG作文部分P249-284

口语,作文都没弄


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-4 10:29

没有任何理由!磨蹭到现在才开始

今天调整一下:

8:00-11:00            复习单词

11;00-13:00          听写 ,笔记,复述

13:30-15:30             阅读,听力限时 

15:40-17:30             继续听力,口语,写作 模拟

18:00-19:30        一篇作文

20:00-22:00        订正昨天的题

22:00-1:00          做旧托阅读,写五个口语

延长生命的唯一途径是少睡觉吗?不,是充分享用每一分钟!就算我在吃饭,就算我在听歌.....

还是重点放在客观题上,还有很大的提升空间

          


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-5 23:55

9-5 今天快要做到尽头了,写下

今天做了delta test 4 较 test 2 有极大的退步, 好好总结, 问题主要住在阅读上,其中一篇竟然错了3三道题。精读!!

听力总共错五道---现在决定放弃旧托的听写,改听delta, 一篇关于气象学的听得很烂。 对自己不熟悉的学科小噢能够有一种莫名的恐惧感,笔记记得很慌乱--听不懂--着急--慢半拍--混乱--这就使结果。 希望自己能多记记薄弱学科的单词。

今天给自己制造了考试气氛,搞得巨紧张~~继续--必须适应

安排略作调整--认清自己是非牛,力求用好已有的材料,勤反复,精做题

做过的题至少应在考前过一遍


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-7 01:07
今天突然被告知写推荐信者这月下旬就会派到异地做交流学者,无奈之中,慌忙修改推荐信,下推荐表,今天对不住自己了, 没看英文---不得已更新一下
作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-9 09:01

9.8 写! 写 !都在写材料,跟托福没有关系的东西!晚上小表姐来北京报道,小小的接待了一番。---看了电影少女初体验--狠狠地说,这题材MS有点夸张,比如优异的成绩,破碎的家庭,控制欲母亲,抗抑郁药物,毒品,性交,但是离偶内心深处的恐惧,压抑,任性很近很近,我想--没有人能够拯救你,除了你自己,谁能够在空隙中找到片刻的安宁并利用其好好学习,谁就是赢家,我知道这算不了什么,有时候要学会麻木在能更好的履行自己的义务,

昨天就做了5篇阅读。 继续做模拟,晚上来汇报-我的五天计划有两天泡汤了,一定要把失去的时间补回来,怎么补--把一小时当三小时用,说到做到!

另外,关于零星时间的安排,一日三餐必听单词录音--王玉梅的,睡前必看李笑来范文10篇,中午不能休息,做听写。中途休息写一篇口语,并说熟


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作者: qianrene    时间: 2007-9-9 10:43
kissin加油,等你好消息~曙光就在前方,黎明已经不远
作者: cathy201    时间: 2007-9-9 11:46
以下是引用kissin在2007-9-9 9:01:00的发言:

9.8 写! 写 !都在写材料,跟托福没有关系的东西!晚上小表姐来北京报道,小小的接待了一番。---看了电影少女初体验--狠狠地说,这题材MS有点夸张,比如优异的成绩,破碎的家庭,控制欲母亲,抗抑郁药物,毒品,性交,但是离偶内心深处的恐惧,压抑,任性很近很近,我想--没有人能够拯救你,除了你自己,谁能够在空隙中找到片刻的安宁并利用其好好学习,谁就是赢家,我知道这算不了什么,有时候要学会麻木在能更好的履行自己的义务,

昨天就做了5篇阅读。 继续做模拟,晚上来汇报-我的五天计划有两天泡汤了,一定要把失去的时间补回来,怎么补--把一小时当三小时用,说到做到!

另外,关于零星时间的安排,一日三餐必听单词录音--王玉梅的,睡前必看李笑来范文10篇,中午不能休息,做听写。中途休息写一篇口语,并说熟


加油啊……

心态很重要的……


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-10 02:55

Thank you! Cathy and  宝儿........I will fighting in the end,because you did show me how you get it!!!

今天做完了delta综合的听力,并精听了两篇,总结了演讲的一般顺序, 一般分论点。

口语练了1,2 题, 明天继续delta综合 3456


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-11 01:55

5/9 至 10/9 总结:

模拟delta做了三套, langman MINI 两套

五天计划中断了两天,延长至六天,只完成了4天应做的任务。 失败!发现自己需要恶补口语的3456和综合写作,

口语:特别是lecture的定义,分论点,几个特点,分别有什么事例支持听清楚,听明白。还要用有组织的语言把它们连贯地在规定的时间里说出来,只背模版没有意义,填充的内容才是考点,没办法,iBT要的是真正的实力,听懂了才有可能复述

综合写作:同口语, 更加要联系阅读中的对应驳斥点, 在阅读的时候抓重点,进行预测

独立写作至今没有写,口语12也荒废了不少

11/9---15/9

早晨:一套完整的模考+单词复习

下午:做longman 迷你,阅读,听力

晚上:作文

口语作文基础+精练,听力阅读天天做,学而时习之继续,坚持,即使在退步,看懂一个句子,听懂一个单词,就是进步


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-13 11:48

两天的弄得精疲力竭,真是夹缝中不知怎么做人了!又被涮了!!!真黑, 一肚子委屈! 凭什么自己一腔热血换个冷眼相对,凭什么??? 因为我还努力得不够,damn it !!!

坚持!觉得虽然成效不明显,状态却空前高涨,没有摇滚没有美网现在有世界杯,顺便说一下,昨天中国赢得漂亮!本人干掉longman迷你三套,简单!但是跟考试比简单多了--可恶,现在转战巴朗,这个星期解决万巴朗七套题,TM的,星期三今天才,一天两套家longman+ 一天一套写作文

今天争取做他两套巴郎!夸下海口,出言不逊,看你那我怎么着?做题去————————————————


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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-13 12:23

词汇题到现在还是一顿狂错,打死我也不敢!背背背--今天抽个时间做过的词汇题看一遍!

恨死了背,甘当肥牛--非牛!真不知自己要死皮到何时?

牛人们!词汇题怎么办?在下求教,词汇书上没有的单词咋办捏?

牛人就是背功超一流,请教方法,别说你背就好!


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作者: ndwenjun    时间: 2007-9-13 15:37

谢谢 MM的鼓励,我也来顶一下。 关于词汇题,网上有老托的词汇题总汇,背背那个好很多,你要是懒得找,给个邮箱我给你发。


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-14 17:14

巴朗听力--一个字--累!

死活的也要拼下来, 居然最后一句放弃了,开头最后绝对考点,走神, Pay all my attetion till the end ~ 即使看来没有终点--BUT...... Keep moving to  follow the lecture...... KEEP MOVING! ATTENTION! Definnitely!!!


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作者: 逆水长游    时间: 2007-9-14 23:17

好有斗志啊

加油

像你学习


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-15 00:44
  为伟人塑像,你选谁?
      There are numerous giants have made uncountable contributions to China's modern society development. The one which played an essential role during this contemporary period, a brilliant leader in the shaping of modern China, the Architect of China's Reform and Opening-up, Deng Xiaoping, thoroughly deserved building a status to honor one of the greatest people in my country.
       First, he has a persevering personality. During his life, Deng underwent "three downs and three ups". The most famous "down and up" occurred the "cultural revolution" been launched than Deng and Liu became its chief targets, Deng fell out of favor and was criticized and purged from his office, and then his son fought for him but become disable. However, he returned in 1974 as vice premier, vice chairman of Communist Party. Again he was dismissed in 1976, but in the same year after Mao's death, he was restored once more to power, this was the third "down and up". In fact of such unjust attacks and frustrations, he never blamed everyone and everything, never lost hope and had no hesitation to stand by what was right for the party and the nation. He said: I am the son of Chinese people. He put the future and fortune of the country at most important position, and didn't care for personal honor and benefit. Never compromise when confronted with difficulties is the base of his success as a great leader.
       Second, he has a foresight of the future. When "cultural revolution" was finally brought to an end, the situation, however, was dismaying. Hundreds of problems were crying for solution, the Left thinking was deeply rooted and the economy was on the brink of collapse. In 1978 he encouraged discussion on the criterion of truth, with the result that the rigid bonds that had constricted people's thinking for so long were broken. People began to seriously examine the current situation and to tackle the problems they discovered. This great movement to emancipate people's minds led to the convocation of the Third Plenary Session of the Party's Eleventh Central Committee. Subsequently, he defined the ambitious the three steps” goals of socialism with Chinese characteristics. This ushered in a new era of reform and opening to the outside world and set China on the road to socialist modernization.
       And also, he has a strong innovation. Deng was the first to propose and insist that China undertake reform, adopt an open policy and invigorate the economy. On the basis of equality and mutual benefit, he declared that China should vigorously expand its economic co-operation with foreign countries, absorb their capital and introduce their advanced technologies and managerial skills, so as to accelerate the development of its own economy. . He also urged that some regions and some people be allowed to become prosperous first through hard work, so that others would follow their example. Chinese developments and experiences of more twenty years have proved that Deng Xiaoping’s reform and opening up policy is quite correct. The opening environment, abundant opportunities, and peaceful situation make a much better place for Chinese people to make great efforts to create more productions and enjoy a better life.
        Essentially we need to  build a statue for Deng Xiaoping to remind people to appreciating his contribution for people's life in our country, and to learn from him what characteristics should a successful leader have, such as persevering personality, foresight of the future and the creative thought and capability. 
这是我花了不止半个小时完成的,中英文搅和了半天,唉,幸好历史人物还有据可查,就当是积累素材!!!请大家狠批
 
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作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-15 11:59

 关于环保,参考了有关资料

Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, pr clean water. Choose one resource that is disapearing and explain why it needs to be saved?
 
  Natural resources have been used by humna beings for a long time. This had not become a severe problem until the 18th century, when the Industrial Revolution started. Since then, the process of industrialization and urbanlization began and humna populations started exponential growth. As a result, innumerable basic natural resources are disapearing rapidly. The depletion of the natural resources is increasingly endangering the survival of the human race. Innumerable natural resources are vanishing rapidly. We must take effective measures to protect these invaluable natural resources to maintain humnan lives of next generations on the earth. The vital resources we need to protect is forests.
 First, forests, as an essential resources that provides humna beings with enormous economic,environmental and social benefits, are vanishing at an alarming rate. Huge areas of forests are vut down to meet hman needs. Logging companies logged down forests to get timber and paper producats. Farmers cut down trees for wood fuel or clear forests are to make way for farmland. Stastistics show that over the past threedecades, 5 million squre kilometer-or 20 percent of the world's tropical forests-have been cleaned.
 Second, forests have used by human beings since the prehistroric times, are vanishing rapidly form the earth. We must take effevtive measures to safeguard forests to achieve the sustainable  achievement and preserve the balance of the ecosystem. Forests are a vital resource which offers tremendous benefits to humnan beings. However, as a result of human needs, they are disappearing rapidly. Millions of acreas of forests are cleared to meet human needs. People cut down trees to seek construction materials, energy source, paper products, and make way for farmlands. Take China for the country's steel output, Chinese people cut down forests to use as wood fuel for the innumerable makeshift"backyard furnaces".
  It is a scientific fact that forests bring huge benefits to human beings and play an essential role in maintaining the balance of ecosystem. Therefore, it is a hugh priority for us to safeguard forests. Forests provide humna beings with timber and papre products, even disposable chopsticks. Besides tramendous economic benefits, forests provide clean air by consuming huge amounts of carbon dioxide and releasing oxygen. And by decreasing the amount of carben dioxide, which is responbsible for globle warming, forests reduce the effects of globle warming. Forests provide natural habitats for many species, especially tropical rainforests where millions of species thrive. If forests are cut down, many species will lost their natural habitats and probably will disappear as a result. The extiction of a large number of species in a short period of time take its toll on the balance of the current ecosystem.
   Due to humna activities, forests, which are an essential natiral resource, are vanishing at an alarming rate. The situation presents human race with a serious problem and has had negative, perhaps disastrous impacts on the interest of human beings and the balance of the ecosystem. Therefore, it is high time for us to take action to preserve forests.


作者: ndwenjun    时间: 2007-9-17 14:39

lz,很有斗志。 向你致敬。 加油。

作文写得也好, 感觉进步很大啊 。

能考100+。


作者: kissin    时间: 2007-9-18 00:58

谢谢ndwenjun MM 的鼓励!真是让我幻想了一番,哈哈~

才做了2套!

我没脸说话了-下了-继续做


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