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标题: GWD1-Q2 Which 的用法到底是怎么回事呢？ [打印本页]

作者: rockytundra 时间: 2007-7-1 02:09
标题: GWD1-Q2 Which 的用法到底是怎么回事呢？

GWD1-Q2 的正确答案是E?

By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.

E: to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which rangs.

作者: stevegt 时间: 2007-7-1 05:21
which非限定性修饰market : p

作者: seastone 时间: 2007-7-1 08:34

我认为原句会更好些. 用a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks 做为一个同位语修饰 book market.

作者: bluebabka 时间: 2007-7-1 10:46

"their share"is not consistent with "the company"

虽然同位语修饰优于定语从句修饰，也是在没有其他绝对错误条件下的相对优势。

并且修饰部分和被修饰部分不应该离得太远，如果要修饰market，market位于逗号前的最后一位更好吧

作者: stevegt 时间: 2007-7-1 10:55

以下是引用bluebabka在2007-7-1 10:46:00的发言：

"their share"is not consistent with "the company"

虽然同位语修饰优于定语从句修饰，也是在没有其他绝对错误条件下的相对优势。

并且修饰部分和被修饰部分不应该离得太远，如果要修饰market，market位于逗号前的最后一位更好吧

同意“并且修饰部分和被修饰部分不应该离得太远，如果要修饰market，market位于逗号前的最后一位更好吧”

但是关于代词指代的话，个人认为their可以指two divisions

作者: bluebabka 时间: 2007-7-1 11:04

啊，没注意到，不知道为什么今天输入法老出问题，还老被CD踢出来，太着急了，谢谢指点

另外，能否抽空帮忙看一下我这道题prep1-85

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=23&ID=259600&page=1

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作者: billytang1980 时间: 2007-12-17 14:55

不知道大家选什么啊，我觉得还是原句A好啊，这里表示同位语阿

作者: prayer 时间: 2007-12-17 16:24
their指代错误，逻辑上应该是company的，而不是two divisions

作者: zhiyinfeifei 时间: 2008-1-3 13:37
3x

作者: ambrosecelin 时间: 2008-3-31 09:33
up

作者: CatBoboan 时间: 2008-5-21 20:48

还是这道题，谁能帮忙解释一下D为什么错啊啊？？

GWD1-Q2:

By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.

A. their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging

B. from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges

C. to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging

D. in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges

E. to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country’s $21 billion book market, which ranges

作者: uneverknowba 时间: 2008-5-21 22:28

这个和og11-44对的正好。。。赫赫，相反。当然，题型，语法结构也有区别。

44，The automotive conveyor-belt system, which Henry Ford modeled after an assembly-line technique introduced by Ransom Olds, reduced from a day and a half to 93 minutes the required time of assembling a Model T.

(d) the time required to assemble a Model T from a day and a half to 93 minutes

og解释是： The underlined portion of the original sentence is awkward because the verb 'reduced' is followed by a preposition phrase rather than the direct object 'time'. Changing the structure so that the object immediately follows the verb, 'reduced the time', also allows an idiomatic error to be corrected.

gwd这题我的感觉是句子结构问题，和effectiveness

同位语指前面的market，应该表示解释说明，可前面book market已经出现过了。后面就是重复。此处用同位语就是wordy， redundent。要解释的就是market，定从合适。同时没有歧义要求就近修饰，book market放句末，后逗号+which

不过这个真是看菜吃饭了。感觉和og对于44题的分析还是有些矛盾。不过这里主考点感觉还是同位语使用不当的问题。。。。

我真罗嗦

作者: uneverknowba 时间: 2008-5-21 23:01

btw，之前只看到E，可是B为什么不对？

我怎么觉得B比E好。

作者: smartsky11 时间: 2009-3-20 21:40
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作者: Isabel820 时间: 2009-8-5 09:49
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