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作者: seastone 时间: 2007-6-28 10:37
标题: prep1-107

107. (30213-!-item-!-188;#058&004113)

Women are expected to be the majority of students entering law school this fall, a trend ultimately placing more women in leadership positions in politics and business.

more women in leadership positions in politics and business.

(A) Women are expected to be the majority of students entering law school this fall, a trend ultimately placing

Women are expected to be the majority of students entering law school this fall, a trend ultimately placing

(B)
The majority of students entering law school this fall are expected to be women, a trend that will ultimately place

The majority of students entering law school this fall are expected to be women, a trend that will ultimately place

(D) It is expected that the majority of students entering law school this fall will be women, a trend ultimately placing

(E) It is expected for women to be the majority of students entering law school this fall, which will ultimately place

A 和B 比较, B 好在那些地方呢?

作者: stevegt 时间: 2007-6-28 12:22

好在will

是expect的东西，就最好用将来时表结果，而不用ing

作者: dingxiang 时间: 2007-6-28 12:58

另外我觉得好像前半句的写法也是B好些吧, 虽然我讲不出为啥,感觉

作者: applec 时间: 2007-6-28 22:33

gerund (+ing noun form) is usually modifying the subject of the main clause.

here "placing" modifies the trend, not women.

therefore, a clause "a trend that..." in B is better than a gerund "a trend placing..." in A

作者: zhangly 时间: 2007-7-27 12:54
placing是放在名词trend后面，其逻辑主语就应该是trend呀，怎么能是主句主语?如果只是个赤裸裸的ing放在后半句的开头，当然其逻辑主语是主句主语。

作者: mac_bobo 时间: 2008-8-17 13:01

有人帮我解释一下，为什么D不好吗？

谢谢！

作者: mac_bobo 时间: 2008-8-19 13:11
up!

作者: summerlucia 时间: 2008-9-5 09:25
同问，为什么D不好？

作者: dirrrk 时间: 2008-9-5 09:55

D选项应该是同位语结构 trend 不对。

这里的同位语用法属于概括性同位语结构——用一个概括性的名词去概括前面的解释对象。

trend不能概括前半句。

还有我觉得a trend placing 肯定有问题，但是不知道怎么解释。

作者: charlie6989 时间: 2008-10-9 19:33
我觉得Ｄ还有个时态上的错误
It is expected that the majority of students entering law school this fall will be women
主句用了will 可是后面a trend placing
逻辑意思出现问题

作者: xiaoniuren 时间: 2009-4-29 15:26
UP

作者: a9141067s 时间: 2009-7-28 21:09
还是不太明白(D)为啥不好

作者: 斯咏 时间: 2009-7-28 21:51

摘自语法笔记：

(D)
同位语 a trend 的分词后置定语 placing，不能表现出即将发生的趋势，而是表达了一直发生的含

义；it is expected that…的表达不简洁。

作者: opos 时间: 2009-8-2 17:50

我也选了a。。。

作者: linyqiong 时间: 2009-8-8 18:34

这里添加will岂不是改变了原意吗

除非trend必须用will

作者: ivyfeng 时间: 2009-9-22 20:38
同意，D中的it is...的结构太罗嗦了，不及B中的好

作者: lpdeng 时间: 2009-10-18 06:11

同意10楼的解释！

作者: 812966141 时间: 2012-4-10 10:00
A的ultimately 的意思是as the end result of a succession or process所以不适合用ving这个含有进行意味的单词表示。我想ultimately应该不加进行时态吧

作者: 812966141 时间: 2012-4-10 10:02
还是A选项trend是一个概括性同位语。不能修饰women are expected 应该修饰B选项的主句。个人见解

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