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作者: chamcham 时间: 2007-6-20 17:03
标题: GWD28-Q30 -- Plz help, gonna take exam soon

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30. GWD28-Q30:

Unlike the body’s inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.

with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting
where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead
with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting
in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results
in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results

seems almost all wrong, most close ones:

E: instead多余了，因为有unlike; "more localized response" is not clear about more modify response or localized

A: with 可能指的是后面的the body’s response to sunburn, 应是cuts and sprains, “is resulting” is weird

D: more localized response; 现在完成时 is weird.

The answer is D, so far feel A is better

Plz help, gonna take exam soon !!!

作者: chamcham 时间: 2007-6-20 17:38

any help?

作者: Intelsmsc 时间: 2008-10-18 15:52

我也选了A，困惑中。。。。

作者: celiachen 时间: 2008-12-9 14:31

A，选项是错误的。把and去掉，换成逗号，使得resulting作状语就是对的

而其D的the body’s more localized response 和 the body’s inflammatory response 是最平行的。

作者: 门萨来了 时间: 2008-12-10 17:21

我觉得A的问题是那个with结构,不知道是跟着前边的cuts and sprains还是跟着后边的the body’s response to sunburn 的

作者: sudashui 时间: 2008-12-19 16:44

以下是引用celiachen在2008-12-9 14:31:00的发言：

而D的the body’s more localized response 和 the body’s inflammatory response 是最平行的。

除了上面这一点，再加上A选项中with独立主格结构表示对主句动作的伴随，这是不符合逻辑的，而in which表示是对前面的那种inflammatory response的说明，符合句意。

所以D优于A。

[此贴子已经被作者于2008-12-19 16:47:55编辑过]

作者: tiffany1102 时间: 2009-4-19 17:26

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作者: 天蝎座1107 时间: 2009-4-19 17:36

30. GWD28-Q30:

with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting
with结构夹在中间造成歧义不知道其逻辑主语是谁
where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead
sunburn与后面对象不相符
with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting
with结构夹在中间造成歧义不知道逻辑主语是谁 sunburn与unlike后面对象不相符
in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results
正确
in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results这里until healing不太好不知道逻辑主语是谁 instead又重复

作者: fiona_hq 时间: 2009-7-29 12:05
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作者: running2k 时间: 2009-12-24 06:13
请问D中的until it has healed，事态是不是有问题啊？

作者: billntt 时间: 2010-6-24 16:25
此处的with结构肯定是向前修饰的，问题在于unlike引导的是一个名词短语，而此处的with短语是独立主格结构，做状语的，无法做定语修饰前面的名词短语。

作者: stephnie 时间: 2010-7-28 15:37
D中的it指代什么啊？

作者: 小羽羽 时间: 2010-10-7 12:02
又看了下，最迷惑的是D,E选项
匆忙中觉得D的it指代有问题，其实无，it指代injured area，受伤区域愈合，正确
而E，until后省略主语，省略的只可能是前面的swelling and stiffness，肿胀和僵硬愈合，且用进行时，不符合逻辑，instead多余

作者: lala974 时间: 2011-6-2 04:24
估计楼主考完试好几年了都……
楼主当年想错了，D中more localized不是完成时……

作者: medusa0901 时间: 2011-10-19 18:23
过几年回来再看看帖子还有当时的头像哇塞实在会感觉很不一样，sorry，小小感慨下~浪费宝贵大家时间了祝看此帖同学都能达成心愿，好运常在~

作者: TINGYI-2014 时间: 2014-10-12 21:52

medusa0901 发表于 2011-10-19 18:23
过几年回来再看看帖子还有当时的头像哇塞实在会感觉很不一样，sorry，小小感慨下~浪费宝贵大家时间了祝 ...

好神奇。。。好几年了还偶尔回来看看。。。借吉言，希望这次考试顺利哈！

作者: patricialiu 时间: 2014-10-13 16:41

chamcham 发表于 2007-6-20 17:03
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首先根据unlike比较结构严格对应的原则，unlike部分是the body’s inflammatory response ，所以对应主句的主语也是这个形式，排除BC.

A，后半部分is more...与resulting中间由and连接，形式应该平行，排除；
E，instead与unlike语义重复，排除。

作者: W.H.Y 时间: 2016-9-11 17:31
这道题选D.

A. 这个argument要对比的是身体对于割伤/扭伤的反应机制和对于晒伤的反应机制的区别. 因为出现了and, resulting...和more localized...这两部分是平行关系, 都接在is后. is resulting表示当下正在进行的动作, 这在机制的描述中是突兀的. 另外, 中置的WITH MODIFIER限定的对象是对割伤/扭伤的反应机制还是对晒伤的反应机制, 也不明确.B. UNLIKE MODIFIER决定了整句的主语应该是body's response to sunburn的response, 而不是sunburn. 而且UNLIKE MODIFIER, 后面不需要instead已经能表示晒伤的反应机制不同于割伤/扭伤的反应机制, instead冗余.
C. Until + healing不对. Until后面跟immobilize the injured area这个行为的终止条件, 终止条件应该是完全愈合, 所以heals这种一般状态或has healed这样特定的完成状态可以, 但until healing表达了"愈合行进中"是终止条件的意思, 逻辑上不通. 而且, 中置的WITH MODIFIER问题和A犯了一样的问题. 主语是response而不是sunburn和B犯了一样的问题.
D. 没问题.
E. Until + healing的问题和C所犯一样. Instead冗余问题和B所犯一样.

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