(A) fund, with the intention to sustain the state’s economy after the exhaustion of its oil reserves
(B) fund, the intention of which is to sustain the state’s economy after they have exhausted their oil reserves
(C) fund intended to sustain the state’s economy after oil reserves are exhausted
(D) fund intended to sustain the state’s economy after exhausting its oil reserves
(E) fund that they intend to sustain the state’s economy after oil reserves are exhausted
The answer is C, which I am not entirely sure. Any NN can explain why not A, only because it is wordy?
A中见到with the intention就砍掉
not really get it.
"with the intention" should have logical subject "people in Alaska", not fund. Even the subject "alaska" is indeed not a perfect match for "with the intention". But since "Alaska" can "deposits" profits, maybe it also makes sense that "Alaska" can "have a intention"?
To s7s7: I do have the same gut feeling that "with + abstract noun" is certainly not preferable in GMAT but the tricky part is it could still be the answer sometimes.
Please correct me if I am wrong.
And also, I really appreciate your help, carolinelmf. I did realize you have been the first NN to answer my questions these couple days and your answer really helps. (U r my heroine
any help?
in OG 11?
A错误点：intension to do...
Collins CO
intension of doing...
A with结构可作独立主格结构变成修饰动作发出者Alaska，逻辑上要修饰fund，with短语前应无逗号；
B中they和their无指代，of which 的which应作主语，of似乎不应存在，否则to sustain无动作发出者；
D中exhausting错；
E中they无指代
ding
A.
fund intended to sustain
the state’s economy after oil reserves are exhausted
intention可以加to do sth表示倾向
个人认为光看题不知道答案时很难判断逗号后面那句话是修饰谁，因为大多数人都是从A选项看起，大多数人看到C的时候才会考虑后半句有可能修饰fund。并且作为A选项，独立主格说阿拉斯加作的这件事情维持了州的经济也并没有什么错误。反而是因为后半句那个its.在独立主格中，with后面的那个名词或者代词是独立主格部分的主语，那么with the intention to sustain the state’s economy after the exhaustion of its oil reserves中主语是intention，很自然这个 its 很容易被误解成intention。
google了一下，有个老外的解释：
IMO C
Main subject alaska - singular
(A) fund, with the intention to sustain the state’s economy after the exhaustion of its oil reserves - its can refer to states's economy as well as Alaska
(B) fund, the intention of which is to sustain the state’s economy after they have exhausted their oil reserves - no refferant for their
(C) fund intended to sustain the state’s economy after oil reserves are exhausted
(D) fund intended to sustain the state’s economy after exhausting its oil reserves - - its can refer to states's economy as well as Alaska
(E) fund that they intend to sustain the state’s economy after oil reserves are exhausted. - no refferant for they
Intend sb/sth to do sth (longman)
....intend the fund to sustain the state’s economy.. -> the fund is intended to sustain the state's economy
(A) fund, with the intention to sustain the state’s economy after the exhaustion of its oil reserves
(B) fund, the intention of which is to sustain the state’s economy after they have exhausted their oil reserves
(C) fund intended to sustain the state’s economy after oil reserves are exhausted
(D) fund intended to sustain the state’s economy after exhausting its oil reserves
(E) fund that they intend to sustain the state’s economy after oil reserves are exhausted
The answer is C, which I am not entirely sure. Any NN can explain why not A, only because it is wordy?
A With 作独立主格结构，不能接不定式。 请看下面（摘自 Prep 语法笔记_V1.00_35_解释)：
46. (26975-!-item-!-188;#058&003041)
The continental United States receives an average of 30 inches of precipitation a year; transpiration
from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the
balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow of streams and rivers.
(A) transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to theatmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow
(B) even though transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches tothe atmosphere, the remainder of 9 inches contribute to the flowing
(C) although transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to theatmosphere, the balance of 9 inches contribute to the flowing
(D) with transpiration from soil and from plants to return approximately 21 inches to the atmosphere,the rest of the 9 inches contributes to the flow
(E) as transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to theatmosphere, the rest of the 9 inches contribute to the flow
考点:主谓一致（Agreement） 有效用词（Diction）
:主谓一致（Agreement） 有效用词（Diction）1) 动词能用单词本身表示名词形式的,就不要用the + -ing形式来表达名词形式
2) as的用法:as + n表示作为… , as + 主语+谓语表示动作之间进行比较
3) with 的用法:
with 型独立主格,与主句形成紧密的逻辑联系,形式为:
with + n. + -ed/ing形式; with + n. + adj.; with + n. + 介词短语 作状语修饰前一个分句的动作类型词 例:Visitors to the park have often looked into the leafy canopy and seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging like socks on a clothesline. with引导的独立主格作状语就近修饰sleeping
(A) 正确,两个动词returns和contributes都与主语一致,并列用两个并列的句子清晰的表现了降水回归自然的两种途径.
(B) 主谓不一致,the remainder应该用单数谓语形式,contribute应该改为contributes; flow本身就是名词形式,不需要用the flowing来表现名词形式.
(C) 主谓不一致,return应该改为returns,同时contribute应该改为contributes; the flowing应该改为theflow.
(D) 介词with后面不能跟不定式to do,并且将两个并列成分改变为主从成分,从而改变了原句的意思.
(E) as使用有误,句子本意并不是对两个动作进行比较,而是称述两个事实;主谓不一致:return和
contribute均要改为单数形式.
句子结构: 句子;transpiration…returns…, while the balance contributes to…
: 句子;transpiration…returns…, while the balance contributes to…补充说明: 实在中碰到with结构要提高警惕,这是一个频率比较高的考点,并且常常有迷惑性.更多的情况下只能从逻辑意思着手.
: 实在中碰到with结构要提高警惕,这是一个频率比较高的考点,并且常常有迷惑性.更多的情况下只能从逻辑意思着手.我是觉得
intended 肯定比intention要好的
最开始我选错是因为没弄清楚Intended究竟是做定语修饰谁，
不过仔细一看，这个intended就是非常确定以及肯定修饰前面fund的，所以隔着个逗号紧跟着它肯定没错
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