要二战了,很头疼ISSUE的模版,实在记不住另一个新模版了,请帮忙修改一下我一战用的模版,好吗?
不好意思,原来的模版拼凑得不好,分数也不好.不要笑我.先谢谢了.
也欢迎大家提出意见,谢谢.
To some extent, I agree with the author's assertion that_____. However, the author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks other essential factors that may affect the issue.`
On the one hand, I am in favor of the author's recommendation to some extent. The reason is that_____. Both common sense and personal experience have told us that it is almost impossible to ____ without ____. Thus, it is somewhat convincing that ______.
On the other hand, I disagree with the author's recommendation. The point for me to argue is that____.（the author overstate ___'s significance, and fail to take other compelling factors into account, such as____.）The reason is rather simple.______.
Coincidentally, a general research has been conducted by professors and institutes in my university, discovering that_____. Hence, my conclusion is not mere proverbial wisdom but a fact supported by research and academic authority.
Taking the above consideration into account, I feel quite comfortable to reach the conclusion that_____.
To some extent, I agree with the author's assertion that_____. However, the author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks other essential factors that may affect the issue.`
the author overlooks other essential factors such as... that may affect the issue, thus extending this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme.
On the one hand, I am in favor of the author's recommendation to some extent. The reason is that_____. Both common sense and personal experience have told us that it is almost impossible to ____ without ____. Thus, it is somewhat convincing that ______.
On the other hand, I disagree with the author's recommendation. The point for me to argue is that____.（the author overstate ___'s significance, and fail to take other compelling factors into account, such as____.）The reason is rather simple.______.
Coincidentally, a general research has been conducted by professors and institutes in my university, discovering that_____. Hence, my conclusion is not mere proverbial wisdom but a fact supported by research and academic authority.
Taking the above consideration(s) into account, I feel quite comfortable to reach the conclusion that_____.
我感觉没什么问题了，但注意每一段不能除了模板就没东西了，顺着自己的逻辑思维来写会比较顺畅也会写得比较多。
谢谢RIO!!!
BTW,你说二战最好不用一战的模版,说会调出来看相似性.怕怕ING.老天保佑了.
没股票的麦兜，还没考完啊？我可是在你的指导下才逐渐进步的哈。
二战加油！
没股票的麦兜，还没考完啊？我可是在你的指导下才逐渐进步的哈。
二战加油！
别笑我啦,那次我好象看错名字了.一个跟你挺像的名字,在G语法区里狂发贴.曾经用了挺大劲跟那小家伙解释.
好了,好了,表笑我了.以后看到我的求救贴你可得回啊. 呵呵
的的确确就是我：）
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